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Heart-Shaped Box, Ch. 29
Alice stood at Danas door, pissed off and ready to not just knock on the door, but knock it down, as well. She paused when she heard Danas voice coming from within. Remembering what happened when Dana had tried to eavesdrop, Alice positioned herself carefully so that she could hear what was being said. She wasnt about to pull a Dana and end up looking like a fool.
Dana was obviously on the phone. Alice knew because whenever Dana was talking on the phone, she used what Alice jokingly referred to as her phone voice. Nervous about talking on the phone, Dana always adopted a different tone than she normally did when speaking to someone.
Alright, Shane. That sounds fun. Eight oclock at Italianos. Ill see you then.
Alice backed away from the door. Her plans had changed. She suddenly was in the mood for a little Italian.
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Shane hung up the phone wearily. She had been doing a lot of thinking and had come to a sudden realization that had left her both shocked and surprised. She had to talk to Dana and tell her how she felt. It could make all the difference.
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Bette sighed and leaned her head back against the headrest of the airplane seat. Tina, on her right, clasped Bettes right hand in silent support, and Kit, on her other side, was squeezing her other hand tightly, as if trying to pull strength from her younger sister.
The flight attendants did their spiel, and then the speaker came on as the pilot said, Enjoy your flight to Philadelphia, and thank you for flying with us today.
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Shane and Dana sat across the table from one another, both mentally debating what to say to each other and where to begin.
Dana, I- Shane began, just as Dana stated, Shane, I-
They both laughed, feeling a little less awkward, and fell easily into an serious conversation about Melvin’s passing and Lara’s illness.
Shane would tell Dana how she felt later. Maybe. If she still had the courage, that was.
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Yeah, yeah, Im meeting someone. Now move it or lose it, buster, Alice told the employee at the door rudely, brushing past him. Her eyes narrowed as she saw Dana and Shane laughing together at a table. Danas eyes were sparkling and Shane was grinning broadly. Alice grit her teeth and ducked behind a pole, hiding herself from view. Carefully peeking around, she watched the pair at the table.
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I agree that the comments that person left were rude, but you shouldn’t discourage people from writing anything but positive comments. Constructive criticism can improve your writing.
I have no problem with constructive criticism, and I believe that the majority of the people here know what is meant by that. It is not that someone’s writing is “ridiculous” and “sucks ass.”
I encourage constructive criticism, and have gotten some from readers. It’s not that I want only praises (deserved or undeserved), I just don’t appreciate people posting rude comments for the sake of ruffling my feathers.
Thanks.
Shane, hopefully will get to tell Dana before Alice starts with her BullSh..It’s a toss up between Marina and Dana. That is so right Good Friends are very hard to come by. Post soon the suspense is killing me..
I’m surprised, if not a little intrigued, that someone would leave a rude comment on this site. Generally, regardless of critisim, folks have kept it civilised; colour me shocked!
That being said, I sooooo want to know what the troglodytes wrote! Who even says ‘sucks ass’ anymore?
Don’t sweat it Foxfurr, you rock it out hard! Love it all!
Shiez!
I totally forgot!
I’m wit chew munchkin, it sooo is Marina. What else is she going to do with Francesca’s ill gotten gains?
ok, i am going to take a shot in the dark and say that the fax is from dana because of mr. piddles and the support everyone showed her in that difficult time. well…. am i right?! please write again soon, i wanna see if shane get to tell dana how she feels before alice does some tricksy
i am glad to see more comedic moments from alice…thank you for your story foxfire, i have been following and enjoying it for ages…looking forward to shane/dana scene and finding out who wrote the fax
nice one fox…i really hope shane tells dana before alice appears! but then what would this be without all the dyke drama!!! adios y besos..P.D:still wondering who wrote the letter…hhmmm
..Is it Marina? I really love your writing!
We all know that the Ladies had the money to take care of the funeral. So, who could it be Peggy Peabody ? This is sad.