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Heartbreak 2a
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Even Tina was having second thoughts about how the whole Helena situation was handled. She knew she made the right decision going back to Bette. Bette was her other half. But thinking back to her break up with Helena she had handled it wrong. She knew at the end Helena had become sarcastic and spiteful, but then all Helena tried to do when they started their relationship be good to her and get to know her friends. Tina was the one who couldnt make up her mind. Then after she did she became swept up in Bettes paranoia, she too had become convinced that everything Helena did was to either get to Bette or to make her come back. Later she had gotten so wrapped up in hers and Bette reconciliation and the birth of their baby that she really didnt pay to much attention to Alices breakdown. So when Alice got together with Helena, Tina felt betrayed by Alice never once thinking this was about Alice and not her.
And because of these decisions and presumptions Bette and Tina had let their friend down and possibly lost one of their best friends forever.
After a few moments of uncomfortable silence Dana was the first to speak to the group of friends. I never thought a day would come when I would be nervous to see Alice. I cant believe how much Ive missed her and how much I feel like I let her down. Its like what happens tonight will affect the rest of my life. And I dont know what Ill do if it doesnt turn out the way I hope. I love Alice so much I dont want to think about the possibility of this being it for us. Now I understand what I did to Alice and if she doesnt come back it will be my fault entirely and I dont know if I can handle that.
Helena arrived at hers and Alices suite earlier then she thought she would. Her mind just couldnt stay focused on work; all she could think about was if she was about to lose Alice. She had never loved another person as much as she loved Alice and the thoughts of losing her was all consuming.
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You’ve captured the pain perfectly, beautifully done
Good job and good story. I can’t wait to read what happens!
You dont just have Alice torn, after the last chapter and this one, I’m torn between Helacious and Danish in this story. Yea Dana is hurting but in my opinion she deserves it. Great job Debs! Post soon.
yep I like that Alice now is confidente and feel good with her own skin. I can’t wait to see the final. Thanks.
Don’t be sorry. Thanks for your story. You’re doing a good job of showing Dana’s pain. I like this stronger version of Alice.
Love this story. Can’t wait for the next part.
Debs… I’ll take it any way you dish it out. Thank you for continuing the story.
I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Yes, a stronger Alice is good. But, it’s good that she’s torn, because I’m still for them being together. Please post soon.
no I agree with dana that they do belong together but I guess I will have to wait and see what happens with them please post soon I love it
i’m very happy that you decided to continue this story.. it’s great, and you write their pain nicely.. we all know that Danish is meant to be together, but i have a bad feeling about this one :'( i can’t wait and see what happens.