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Heartbreak 2a
Most of Helena adult life she like to play the field, even when she was with Winnie she had the tendency to flirt. She always liked the thought of being the center of attention and the ability to turn heads. But with Alice she found the only head she wanted to turn was Alices. She never thought the day would come when all she cared about was getting home to the person she loved. She didnt know what it was about Alice that made her change so much, she just knew she had. Alice had won her heart over in total.
Just as Alice pulled into the parking lot of the Planet her cell phone started to ring. She smiled when she saw it was Helena on the other end. Helena wanted to wish her luck with her friends before she met with them. But Alice knew Helena was just feeling a little insecure about the whole meeting and needed some reassurances. Alice never thought somebody would be insecure about losing her; nobody had ever loved her enough to care. So she told Helena that she wouldnt stay very long and she would see her back at the Hotel. And she told her she loved her, because she knew that was what Helena needed to hear at that moment. And she really did love her.
When Alice walked into the Planet it felt like old times, seeing her friends in the reading lounge brought back memories of when they would get together to talk and enjoy each others company. Shane was the first to notice she had walked in. They all stood and gave Alice a hug as she walked up to them. Alice couldnt believe how they were all crying as they hugged her hello.
Shane was the first to speak up of the group of friends God Alice its so good to see you again. You look great. as Shane was saying this she was hugging her like she never wanted to let her go. After Shane finely let go of Alice; Bette and Tina walked up to her.
Bette walked over and held her arm out to Alice Come here. She too started to cry as she hugged her old friend. Tina walked up and hugged Alice after Bette. As Tina was hugging Alice; Bette was rubbing Alices back and talking to her. It good to have you back my friend it hasnt felt like family since you left. We all know we let you down and we hope you can forgive us. We made some misjudgments about Helena and you that have come back and taught us all some lessons. We only hope we havent lost you forever because of these misjudgments.
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(22 votes, average: 4.32 out of 5)
You’ve captured the pain perfectly, beautifully done
Good job and good story. I can’t wait to read what happens!
You dont just have Alice torn, after the last chapter and this one, I’m torn between Helacious and Danish in this story. Yea Dana is hurting but in my opinion she deserves it. Great job Debs! Post soon.
yep I like that Alice now is confidente and feel good with her own skin. I can’t wait to see the final. Thanks.
Don’t be sorry. Thanks for your story. You’re doing a good job of showing Dana’s pain. I like this stronger version of Alice.
Love this story. Can’t wait for the next part.
Debs… I’ll take it any way you dish it out. Thank you for continuing the story.
I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Yes, a stronger Alice is good. But, it’s good that she’s torn, because I’m still for them being together. Please post soon.
no I agree with dana that they do belong together but I guess I will have to wait and see what happens with them please post soon I love it
i’m very happy that you decided to continue this story.. it’s great, and you write their pain nicely.. we all know that Danish is meant to be together, but i have a bad feeling about this one :'( i can’t wait and see what happens.