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Heartbreak 2a
Alice watched Dana leave the table and she turned to Shane with a questioning look on her face. Whats up with Dana? I thought she would be glad Ive moved on. Now she doesnt have to worry about crazy Alice calling her all the time begging her to reconsider. She and Lara can move on and hopefully one day we can all be friends again.
The group didnt know that Alice didnt know about Danas breakup with Lara. So Shane took it upon herself to tell Alice about Danas life after she moved. Lara and Dana broke up about a week after you moved to Europe. She didnt know how to get a hold of you to talk to you. All she has talked about these last few months is what a mistake she made, and how she hoped one day she could make it up to you.
Alice could believe what she was hearing, Lara and Dana werent together and Dana wanted her back. Eight or nine months ago this would have made Alice happy, but all it did now was cause confusion for her. I didnt tell any of you were I was because I needed to get my head straight first before I could face any of you.
Alice turned to walk toward the bathroom not knowing what she was about to say to Dana. All she knew was she had to talk to her. Even though Dana had been the cause of her downhill spiral she still couldnt stand the thought of Dana hurting and she wanted to try to get things right.
After she left the group they just looked at each other, all of them hoping things would work out for Dana but each of them knowing it probably wouldnt. Bette feeling the pain that Dana was going through having felt it not to long ago spoke to the other ladies. I hope this works out, but I have a feeling Dana really blew it. I just hope they can still be friends and work beyond this.
As Alice walked into the bathroom the sight before her almost broke her heart. Dana was in the corner of the bathroom farthest from the door. She had her head down between her knees crying. Alice walked over and sat beside her placing her arm around Danas shoulder. You know Dana if I had known I was going to be setting on the bathroom floor I probably wouldnt have worn designer clothes. An old pair of jeans would have been better wear for bathroom setting. Dana looked up to see Alice setting beside her. Alice I cant believe how totally I have screwed up my life. I let you go because I thought I had to go experience life a little before I settled down. And now it looks like Ive lost you forever. I was so cocky I thought you would always be there for me. I forgot how wonderful you are. And because of my stupidity Helena has become the luckiest person on this earth. You know when I almost married Tonya you said sometimes you dont know what you have until its gone. Well you were right sometimes you dont know what you have till its gone. Alice do I have any chance to get you back? I love you and I cant stand the thought of having lost you forever. After say this Dana started to cry even more then before. In between the sobs she keeps saying to Alice. Tell me I have a chance.
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(22 votes, average: 4.32 out of 5)
You’ve captured the pain perfectly, beautifully done
Good job and good story. I can’t wait to read what happens!
You dont just have Alice torn, after the last chapter and this one, I’m torn between Helacious and Danish in this story. Yea Dana is hurting but in my opinion she deserves it. Great job Debs! Post soon.
yep I like that Alice now is confidente and feel good with her own skin. I can’t wait to see the final. Thanks.
Don’t be sorry. Thanks for your story. You’re doing a good job of showing Dana’s pain. I like this stronger version of Alice.
Love this story. Can’t wait for the next part.
Debs… I’ll take it any way you dish it out. Thank you for continuing the story.
I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Yes, a stronger Alice is good. But, it’s good that she’s torn, because I’m still for them being together. Please post soon.
no I agree with dana that they do belong together but I guess I will have to wait and see what happens with them please post soon I love it
i’m very happy that you decided to continue this story.. it’s great, and you write their pain nicely.. we all know that Danish is meant to be together, but i have a bad feeling about this one :'( i can’t wait and see what happens.