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HEREAFTER. Chapter 32. Distance
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If she was your partner already, can you just back to be together and thats it..
Katie baby, this is not the place and I really need to explain a lot of things to you
Mommy Ive never seen you this sad, why cant you just look for Ms Bette if she makes you happy
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Tina killed the engine of the car, but didnt dare to move, her self soul search mambo-jambo have only left her more confuse, but after a lot of thinking she decide some basic things, You gotta look into the past if you dont want to repeat the same mistakes in the future, such basic cliche one liner, have her here, in front of Bettes house.
With that in mind, this time she was not going to hide, she was not going to assume and she was not going to pretend she could simply move on, because eight years standing still have shown her, Bette Porter was not a woman to forget. So she was going walk over there and talk, even if she bleeded out her heart in the process, this time she was not going to be the coward, or the cheater one and this time, maybe both could find redemption instead of betrayal.
With a deep sight she move out of the car, ready to face whatever might come.
What she saw from the distance coming out of Bettes door was none other that Nadia, the classic beautiful California blond, she gotta hand it to Bette she got some taste. the woman run off to her car and drive away with no more than a look directed to Tina
*****, *****, ***** Tina chanted as she lightly bounced her forehead on the roof top of her convertible, the urge to run away overwhelming.
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The bell door sounded more times than Tina could count, but she was resolve to do this and do it now, she decide to try the ***** as suspected it opened, she walked tentatively inside, no sings of life.
Hello
nothing
she rounded the living room and found her on the lounge, spread it out on the carpet a bottle of tequila, she half lying on the bar countertop
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Great!!!Great!!!Great!!!
Now this is what I am talking about. Tina is there to help her woman in pain. I hope they will find away to work these situations out.
There are not as many words as I could find to express how much I love your writing this story.
The children have the proper perspective without the B.S., don’t they? Bette’s pain seems very real and understandable. I’m looking forward to reading how you will resolve their inner conflicts.
And in each of your chapters you have a line or phrase that perfectly portrays an emotion: ” I can cheat on everybody else, I can cheat on me, but never on youâ€. Heartfelt words…
great chapter. the kids know and are ok with everything, but why does it always take parents and grown-ups so freaking long to do things!?! everything gotta be all talk and plan and pros and cons, geez, bette get with tina for goodness sakes and don’t worry about candace she wants you to be happy. let’s go already! thanks for writing! :)
wow, that was a great chapter. And the ending deffinately made me tear a bit.
Another great chapter. Bette has so much guilt to work through. She just need to let Tina help her through it all and move forward with their life together.
Great start at mending their divide. Sweet chapter.
Both of them got quite a bit to work through.
Wow another wonderful chapter. The tenderness of Tina and Bette’s love comes through dispite the pain they seem to inflict. Great
They really need to talk. get this stuff behind them and start fresh.
I hope Bette can find peace within herself.May be she will let Tina in and make her happier.
Wonderful chapter. Thanks so much for writing! I hope that through your story Bette and Tina can work things out and be together as a united family. Their girls seem to really be great friends. Please post again soon. I really enjoy your storyline.