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HEREAFTER Chapter 7. Catching Up.
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The four of them walked outside the zoo in a strangled silence for the adults in total joy for the kids.
here is my stop Tina said signaling the black mustang in the parking lot.
Bette couldnt help but smirk a little A convertible
Tina rolled her eyes, trying to hide the little her embarrassment Yeah well, someone taught me how much fun is put the rooftop down in a sunny day
Yeah Bette agreed before she knew what was doing
what you drive these days Potter
A SUV, someone talked me into how impractical convertibles are with kids, plus I dont drive as much these days, just the necessary.
Tina froze for a second there, Sorry I brought it up she knew how much Bette love her convertible, gosh she was even jealous of her SABB sometimes, Bette always loved to take long drives, Can a person change that much?
Nah is okay, I still miss the SAAB, though
Tina wanted to say -Me too- but she bit her tongue just on time, the trick didnt last too long because she hear herself speaking anyway
You want to go? Tina ask before she knew it. She was sorry the second the words escape her mouth not because she didnt want to but because it was out of place. Probably she dont even know what am asking she thought.
Bette stood there in silence staring at Tina, she had to clear her throat before be able to speak I.. dont think we should, is getting late and we need to be back home, right Jessie she ask the kid just to divert her attention from Tina thanks for asking though
Tina just nodded. Embarrass. Sad.
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flashback:
Want to go? Bette asked with pleading eyes
Babe you promise me, you would help me with the garden
Baby please, I know You want to go Bette insisted nuzzling Tinas neck with her lips Please, please, please
Betteee Tina said trying to resist, she knew it was useless but she enjoy put up a fight and have Bette begging her
Baby is beautiful out there, well go down the cost line, the wind blowing your hair, Ill take you to our special place and then am gonna thoroughly make love to you as the sun set on us she lightly kissed her neck and then whisper to her ear Baby, Do you want to Go? she purred the question, Tina only moaned Ill take that as a yes Bette proudly said dragging her to the car.
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mommy Can we go back to dads house I forgot, my backpack there
Tina turned to Katie, her brain fighting to get what her kid just told her
please mommy I need it for school tomorrow
right Tina said turning the engine and shaking her mind from any more memories.
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You have me screaming over this story, Bette wwont talk,Tina trys,Thank goodness the girls are great. Dreaming.Candance died in a car wreck,Bette was hurt badly. She ended up with jesse because she had adopted her. Both are now single Thank you.
Loved the flashbacks. Still keeping me in the suspense aren’t you. Hahaha.. bvhall.. you’re too funny. Can’t hold it down for too long anymore eh?
Oh Tee, no offense, I just put all my comments in this chapter. Your other chapter is as good btw. I love your build up, you’re not in a rush to give it away. Liked your different approach.
Well, what can I say, it’s vancouver. One day is bleak, rainy and gloomy (not that I hate rain, hate it only if I have too many stuff in my hand) and another is sunny. But today was ony 10 degrees Celcius. And I’m Chinese-Indonesian in case you’re curious. Nice to get to know the others on the board. And no… you’re English is perfectly fine! No worries, I even thought that you’re a native English speaker!
I hate the idea that Bette stayed with Candace and had a kid…can Bette and Tina just talk to each other like adults and get with it…you include such angst and intensity in your writing…excellent job!!!
I’m with bvhall…Candace and Bette were in a wreck and Candy is now (x.x) and Bette was hurt? Please continue.