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Hesitation
My jaws clench at the thought which enters my head but I have to stop or I will take her here and now.
With a superhuman effort, I retract my hand from its promising cradle. I look past Tina’s shoulder to the sofa. It’s close and tempting, the closest I can think to a bed but it won’t do. The distance to the bedroom feels like an unachievable stretch to cover but I know this is where I must take this fabulous woman.
I cradle her head, my hands tremble from anticipation, nerves, arousal and excitement. I speak to her slowly as my own thoughts jumble up in the mayhem twirling around in my head. My words flutter against her parted lips.
She nods, in agreement that we should move this to the bedroom.
My hand caress down her back, up and over the swell of her perfectly formed behind and settle in the spot at the top of her thighs. A gentle pull from where my fingers are anchored and her lithe body lifts effortlessly, her legs wrapping tightly around my waist.
Feeling her so close is almost overwhelming and I stumble my way down the corridor and into my bedroom. The feel of her lips on my neck as we travel clumsily, does nothing to help my balance. Her lips are wrapped firmly around my pulse, sucking hard enough I think I feel my veins shift. There will be a mark but right now, I couldn’t care less.
We drop on the bed. Her legs loosen from around me, the soles of her feet smoothe the back of my legs before hooking onto the back of my knees as her pelvis lifts, arching into me in a desperate attempt to not lose contact.
We haven’t done anything yet and I am out of breath. I raise myself up slightly on one elbow to look at her. Her hair is splayed on the top of the covers framing her face, her eyes are closed, her lips are red and swollen.
She is beautiful.
My muscles are trying to shake my skin loose apparently, because there’s no way I’m trembling. Not when I haven’t done anything more than kiss her. If she says anything I’ll have to make something up about the room temperature, but somehow I doubt she has noticed.
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Awesome
Brava…brava. *standing ovation*…Kins, if you were my woman, I’d celebrate your birthday everyday…wwwooooowww. Happy birthday my dear and many more to come.
Phew woooooooooooooooooooooow.What more can i say.Awesome,fantastic,beautiful even.Happy Birthday A.
Good Lord Woman!! That was soooo HOT and beautiful. Happy New Year to us and a Very Happy Birthday to you!
Whoa……*thud*..i die..
💋💋💋💋💋💋 Kins40! You are the bomb. Absolutely love this post. Thank you for changing season 3 for me. You made it so much better. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I thoroughly enjoyed your birthday gift to us and yourself. Your words take flight.
My My! Can you tell I’m from the South? ( pardon the pun)
My birthday was the 11th, so I think this story is more of a birthday present for me than for you, Kins. A breathtaking piece, literally. So good, and yet, so naughty at the same time.
That was hottt. wow. Happy birthday.
That was amazing thank you so much. Happy new year and happy birthday. May 2013 bring you all that 2012 didn’t.
Happy Birthday and thank you very much for this story! Can’t wait for more from you :)
Happy Birthday. May you have a blessed year.
And this is why you are MY favorite ! Thank you so much for such an amazing post. I’m in complete awe, speechless as I am breathless. And here I thought people receive gifts on their birthday not give them :] Happy birthday my friend and happy new year !
Great 2013 opening one off
Happy birthday to you and thank you for this awesome story.PPS
…I need a cold shower…
K,that was mouth-wateringly good but like I always say you never fail to amaze me. Happy birthday and happy new year to you also. I have Pm you a few times think something is going wrong somewhere.
It’s your birthday and we get the present
Gee kins, they took all of the good comments. They said it all! So, thank you for giving us one, very hot first time for the fav couple. It had so much to it. The movie in my head played over and over again after I read it. I’m sure it will make for some wonderful dreaming tonight. You are one very talented writer and I’m in awe of you!
A little late…but I hope you had the best birthday ever. Thank for for sharing this amazing story.
Wow!! Happy birthday Kins!! And thanks for the present!! … A bit late, I know… But… You know, breath through your mouth… I meant blow through your mouth! Blow the candles… You know… ;-p hehehe…it’s amazing writing! :) and can be used as a tutorial for first timer-IMHO :-D
Awesome and beautiful, love it
sexy, sexy, sexy, I love when you describe in detail their love making I can picture it, not in a pervert way, but in a way of two people expressing their love
Just read this again and WOW, just as amazing as the 1st time! You blow me away my friend.
Right! OK! Yes, WOW! Righttttt, OK! Yes……………
My God, you’re fantastic!
Congratulations !!