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Hesitation
I want more.
Now.
I drag my tongue across her chest to take her other perfect nipple in my mouth. She breathes in and once again I am lost and feel the instant flush of wetness between my own legs. She reaches down to touch my hair, keeping me in place.
She speaks softly, my name first and then other words difficult to make out, halfway between a plea for more and a plea to stop just like a torturous stimulation. It feels so good it almost hurts.
Oh Dear God!
I kiss down her body. Her belly, so soft, so perfect, like silk. It twitches and contracts under my lips and the vibrations of the words I speak as I travel.
I tell her all that I think, all that I feel, all that I discover.
I reach her hip bones, beautiful, unlike any other.
I kiss and lick her, scraping my teeth gently along her alabaster skin.
My heart aches to take her.
As I kiss her hips and drag my fingers tips softly on the outside of her thighs, I breathe in. I can smell her desire.
God, let me die.
I can’t believe this woman is finally here with me. I’m dying to taste her. I can hardly breathe, I’m shaking with anticipation. If I can’t have her, my heart will surely break.
I want more.
Now.
*****
Bette is the one that I crave. I cannot not recall ever feeling this for any man … ever.
From the night we met, she has inhabited every one of my dreams. I want to lie next to her, my heart breaks every time we part.
Her presence is overpowering, all consuming, it is almost scary but I embrace it because I know now that without her I will be lost.
Her hair, her beautiful brown curls fall over her eyes when she leans in to kiss me. I don’t think I have ever seen anything so sexy. It sets me off instantly.
She is so devastatingly beautiful to me that I couldn’t help myself when I saw her tonight. At the front door. In her house. All smiles and gorgeousness.
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Awesome
Brava…brava. *standing ovation*…Kins, if you were my woman, I’d celebrate your birthday everyday…wwwooooowww. Happy birthday my dear and many more to come.
Phew woooooooooooooooooooooow.What more can i say.Awesome,fantastic,beautiful even.Happy Birthday A.
Good Lord Woman!! That was soooo HOT and beautiful. Happy New Year to us and a Very Happy Birthday to you!
Whoa……*thud*..i die..
💋💋💋💋💋💋 Kins40! You are the bomb. Absolutely love this post. Thank you for changing season 3 for me. You made it so much better. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I thoroughly enjoyed your birthday gift to us and yourself. Your words take flight.
My My! Can you tell I’m from the South? ( pardon the pun)
My birthday was the 11th, so I think this story is more of a birthday present for me than for you, Kins. A breathtaking piece, literally. So good, and yet, so naughty at the same time.
That was hottt. wow. Happy birthday.
That was amazing thank you so much. Happy new year and happy birthday. May 2013 bring you all that 2012 didn’t.
Happy Birthday and thank you very much for this story! Can’t wait for more from you :)
Happy Birthday. May you have a blessed year.
And this is why you are MY favorite ! Thank you so much for such an amazing post. I’m in complete awe, speechless as I am breathless. And here I thought people receive gifts on their birthday not give them :] Happy birthday my friend and happy new year !
Great 2013 opening one off
Happy birthday to you and thank you for this awesome story.PPS
…I need a cold shower…
K,that was mouth-wateringly good but like I always say you never fail to amaze me. Happy birthday and happy new year to you also. I have Pm you a few times think something is going wrong somewhere.
It’s your birthday and we get the present
Gee kins, they took all of the good comments. They said it all! So, thank you for giving us one, very hot first time for the fav couple. It had so much to it. The movie in my head played over and over again after I read it. I’m sure it will make for some wonderful dreaming tonight. You are one very talented writer and I’m in awe of you!
A little late…but I hope you had the best birthday ever. Thank for for sharing this amazing story.
Wow!! Happy birthday Kins!! And thanks for the present!! … A bit late, I know… But… You know, breath through your mouth… I meant blow through your mouth! Blow the candles… You know… ;-p hehehe…it’s amazing writing! :) and can be used as a tutorial for first timer-IMHO :-D
Awesome and beautiful, love it
sexy, sexy, sexy, I love when you describe in detail their love making I can picture it, not in a pervert way, but in a way of two people expressing their love
Just read this again and WOW, just as amazing as the 1st time! You blow me away my friend.
Right! OK! Yes, WOW! Righttttt, OK! Yes……………
My God, you’re fantastic!
Congratulations !!