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Hesitation
I feel Tina’s hands run through my hair, her fingers tightening slightly when I do something which really pleases her. She is gentle, her body is more relaxed now and I relax also resting my head on her warm stomach for a second.
She reaches and strokes my hair quietly whispering my name. She is asking, allowing me to continue. I smile against her skin, rubbing my cheek against her and I start moving again.
I slide off the end of the bed, kneeling, pulling her slowly with me, to me until her hips rest just on the edge of the mattress.
Call it instinct but one of her legs instinctively places itself over one of my shoulders. I feel the muscle tense a little bit as I encourage her to let her other leg fall away, opening her up to me.
The resistance is minute but perceptible. My hand reaches hers and finds it, holding on with a tight fist to the sheets below her. With a gentle squeeze and the brush of my thumb against the back of her hand, she relaxes her grip and our fingers entwine.
I am here for her. With this simple gesture I reiterate my vow of trust that I made to her earlier on.
I deliberately ignore my ultimate goal.
Patiently.
She has relaxed further and I begin to trail soft kisses up and down the inside of one leg. Slowly, methodically imprinting her pale skin with the invisible impression of my lips.
As my mouth moves along the inside of one leg and then the other, my fingers trace the outside of her thighs in reverse paths. A gentle scraping of delicate nails, smoothed over by equally soft finger pads. I discover a ticklish patch below her knee, which I am careful to stimulate when she senses me getting nearer to her and rigidity returns to her body for a moment.
Tina’s pelvis soon reacts. It starts with a small undulation and then a more pronounced tilt. Her hips nearly lift off the top of the bed, silently begging what her next whispered words demand.
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Awesome
Brava…brava. *standing ovation*…Kins, if you were my woman, I’d celebrate your birthday everyday…wwwooooowww. Happy birthday my dear and many more to come.
Phew woooooooooooooooooooooow.What more can i say.Awesome,fantastic,beautiful even.Happy Birthday A.
Good Lord Woman!! That was soooo HOT and beautiful. Happy New Year to us and a Very Happy Birthday to you!
Whoa……*thud*..i die..
💋💋💋💋💋💋 Kins40! You are the bomb. Absolutely love this post. Thank you for changing season 3 for me. You made it so much better. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I thoroughly enjoyed your birthday gift to us and yourself. Your words take flight.
My My! Can you tell I’m from the South? ( pardon the pun)
My birthday was the 11th, so I think this story is more of a birthday present for me than for you, Kins. A breathtaking piece, literally. So good, and yet, so naughty at the same time.
That was hottt. wow. Happy birthday.
That was amazing thank you so much. Happy new year and happy birthday. May 2013 bring you all that 2012 didn’t.
Happy Birthday and thank you very much for this story! Can’t wait for more from you :)
Happy Birthday. May you have a blessed year.
And this is why you are MY favorite ! Thank you so much for such an amazing post. I’m in complete awe, speechless as I am breathless. And here I thought people receive gifts on their birthday not give them :] Happy birthday my friend and happy new year !
Great 2013 opening one off
Happy birthday to you and thank you for this awesome story.PPS
…I need a cold shower…
K,that was mouth-wateringly good but like I always say you never fail to amaze me. Happy birthday and happy new year to you also. I have Pm you a few times think something is going wrong somewhere.
It’s your birthday and we get the present
Gee kins, they took all of the good comments. They said it all! So, thank you for giving us one, very hot first time for the fav couple. It had so much to it. The movie in my head played over and over again after I read it. I’m sure it will make for some wonderful dreaming tonight. You are one very talented writer and I’m in awe of you!
A little late…but I hope you had the best birthday ever. Thank for for sharing this amazing story.
Wow!! Happy birthday Kins!! And thanks for the present!! … A bit late, I know… But… You know, breath through your mouth… I meant blow through your mouth! Blow the candles… You know… ;-p hehehe…it’s amazing writing! :) and can be used as a tutorial for first timer-IMHO :-D
Awesome and beautiful, love it
sexy, sexy, sexy, I love when you describe in detail their love making I can picture it, not in a pervert way, but in a way of two people expressing their love
Just read this again and WOW, just as amazing as the 1st time! You blow me away my friend.
Right! OK! Yes, WOW! Righttttt, OK! Yes……………
My God, you’re fantastic!
Congratulations !!