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Hesitation
She reaches up and touches my face, slipping her tongue between my lips to touch mine. Her tongue feels incredible.
It feels incredible wherever she places it and her attention to my breast a few minutes ago was simply divine.
I sit up abruptly as her gaze lifts from where she has so skilfully placed herself. Her head, in between my legs and her big dark brown chocolate eyes are looking up, checking with me, asking for something I am not sure I want to allow.
I try to minimise the effect my sudden movement, but the look on her face is there.
Finite disappointment and then concern. A whole lot of concern.
I suppose it is difficult to ignore or misinterpret how I so quickly moved to beckon her back up towards me.
She wants to understand what is bothering me and I am not sure how to tell her.
I cup her beautiful caring face in my hands and I move to kiss her, whispering on her lips before they touch that everything is ok, really, and that, well, that …. we don’t have to do.. what she wanted to do.
Our kiss is hot and demanding and Bette literally melts back down on top of me. But my thoughts are preoccupied with the look of worry on her face.
A reaction, I triggered.
How can I explain my reluctance towards the act. It’s not shyness. My actions tonight speak of the contrary nor is it self consciousness.
Truth is, it has never been the greatest memory. A means to an end, a must do step in the grand scheme of things, sometimes carried out with a minimum of effort or interest even…. sometimes. It’s always left me wondering what the purpose of it was.
I feel Bette pull away gently. She brushes her hair away from her face as she studies me carefully.
She wants to find out. She wants to make sure I am okay first and I reassure her, repeating once again that we don’t have to do….it.
Her amazing brown eyes pour their velvety regard all over me. I don’t believe anyone has ever looked at my with such veneration.
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Awesome
Brava…brava. *standing ovation*…Kins, if you were my woman, I’d celebrate your birthday everyday…wwwooooowww. Happy birthday my dear and many more to come.
Phew woooooooooooooooooooooow.What more can i say.Awesome,fantastic,beautiful even.Happy Birthday A.
Good Lord Woman!! That was soooo HOT and beautiful. Happy New Year to us and a Very Happy Birthday to you!
Whoa……*thud*..i die..
💋💋💋💋💋💋 Kins40! You are the bomb. Absolutely love this post. Thank you for changing season 3 for me. You made it so much better. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I thoroughly enjoyed your birthday gift to us and yourself. Your words take flight.
My My! Can you tell I’m from the South? ( pardon the pun)
My birthday was the 11th, so I think this story is more of a birthday present for me than for you, Kins. A breathtaking piece, literally. So good, and yet, so naughty at the same time.
That was hottt. wow. Happy birthday.
That was amazing thank you so much. Happy new year and happy birthday. May 2013 bring you all that 2012 didn’t.
Happy Birthday and thank you very much for this story! Can’t wait for more from you :)
Happy Birthday. May you have a blessed year.
And this is why you are MY favorite ! Thank you so much for such an amazing post. I’m in complete awe, speechless as I am breathless. And here I thought people receive gifts on their birthday not give them :] Happy birthday my friend and happy new year !
Great 2013 opening one off
Happy birthday to you and thank you for this awesome story.PPS
…I need a cold shower…
K,that was mouth-wateringly good but like I always say you never fail to amaze me. Happy birthday and happy new year to you also. I have Pm you a few times think something is going wrong somewhere.
It’s your birthday and we get the present
Gee kins, they took all of the good comments. They said it all! So, thank you for giving us one, very hot first time for the fav couple. It had so much to it. The movie in my head played over and over again after I read it. I’m sure it will make for some wonderful dreaming tonight. You are one very talented writer and I’m in awe of you!
A little late…but I hope you had the best birthday ever. Thank for for sharing this amazing story.
Wow!! Happy birthday Kins!! And thanks for the present!! … A bit late, I know… But… You know, breath through your mouth… I meant blow through your mouth! Blow the candles… You know… ;-p hehehe…it’s amazing writing! :) and can be used as a tutorial for first timer-IMHO :-D
Awesome and beautiful, love it
sexy, sexy, sexy, I love when you describe in detail their love making I can picture it, not in a pervert way, but in a way of two people expressing their love
Just read this again and WOW, just as amazing as the 1st time! You blow me away my friend.
Right! OK! Yes, WOW! Righttttt, OK! Yes……………
My God, you’re fantastic!
Congratulations !!