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HIDDEN: Part 2
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Bette had always been conscious of her body in front of the camera but at that time she didn’t care anymore, with Tina’s kisses all the fear and worries that she had which includes the very question about what would this love scene could do to her state of mind went away. For Bette what important was the now, because now all she wanted was Tina and that’s all that mattered even if everything was just pretending.
The brunette was on her bra and jeans sitting on the edge of the bed while Tina was standing in front of her in between her legs. Tina was quite adamant to remove her blouse because she didn’t feel beautiful but when she saw the unmistakable desire in Bette’s eyes she just found herself undressing in front of the brunette. Bette gasped when she saw the blonde’s bulging stomach and big breasts which were still covered by her bra and she thought Tina looked absolutely sexy.
A shiver ran down the blonde’s spine as Bette’s warm hands touched her stomach. Tina had fantasized this scene so many times when she read the script and she never imagined that it would feel so incredibly amazing. Bette kissed her tummy then gently pressed her cheek on it and kissed Tina’s cleavage, the feeling was sending Tina over the edge that she had to taste Bette’s lips again. She grabbed the brunette’s face and crashed her lips on hers; electricity ran thru their body when their tongues intertwined.
All the crews were silent as they watched the beautiful love scene unfolding before their very eyes. It was as if they were watching two women being intimate in the privacy of their bedroom.
Tina broke the kiss, took Bette’s hand and placed it inside her pants. Bette moaned when she felt that the blonde was shaking, the brunette was so into the moment that she was afraid that she couldn’t stop herself from doing something that’s not part of the script
“Touch me here…” Tina whispered on Bette’s mouth
At that moment both women felt that as if it was just the two of them in that room and no one else. At that very moment Bette and Tina felt that it was the two of them in the world and the rest just faded in the back ground.
“Are you sure it’s okay?” Bette asked, her hand was actually on the blonde’s leg but she had to make it somehow appear that she was touching Tina at her most intimate place. She was so surprised and gasped when she felt the wetness inside the blonde’s pants
“OH GOD! OH MY FUCKING GOD!”
Every single soul inside that room knew that what the brunette just uttered wasn’t really part of the script but all thought that it was a fantastic line. All eyes were getting bigger as they witnessed the intense chemistry between the two actresses that they began to gulp and wonder. The two women were beginning to be carried away as the heat of the moment was starting to consume them suddenly they heard a loud voice
“And cut!!!”
Evelyn, the writer of the show was also the one directing the episode was so blown away by how powerful the scene was.
Bette and Tina who seemed to jump into a different dimension while doing the love scene were brought to the real world too quickly when they heard the director’s loud voice. Bette slowly removed her hand from Tina’s pants and immediately looked for something, anything to cover the pregnant blonde.
Tina was so mortified when she realized that she was so wet the whole time they were doing the scene that she couldn’t look Bette in the eyes and when the brunette covered her almost naked body with a robe she thought she wanted to cry. Bette didn’t know what to think but it was such an awkward moment that when she was about to approach the blonde Tina just suddenly walked away.
to be continued…
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A BIG THANKS to everyone who read the first part of this short story. Mix reactions are expected and as promised I’m open and respect all opinions. This is just a big WHAT IF scenario that has been swimming inside my head the moment I laid my eyes on Bette and Tina. Just like what I’ve said before I don’t mean disrespect and please understand that this is just fiction.
I also want to point out that about five comments on the first chapter were deleted. I’m not sure what happened, probably a system glitch, but it sure feels quite disappointing. As a writer comments are very important, no matter how short or long they are for they serve as a fuel to keep the engine running. Hopefully it won’t happen again not only to my stories but also to other stories.
Happy to see familiar and new names commenting and special thanks to all of you amazing ladies!
Pie_Fair, SassyGran, Hellbent, kingg, Dee22, topcat, Labrys7575, pink3001, bubcris1, dazzlecarol
–Glad to know that you all approved! Just a warning this next chapter is quite steamy but hope that you all will like it, would love to know your thoughts, thanks!
bubcris1—Yes I will finish this short story and will probably go for five chapters. Thanks for reading!
tibettenation1, tibettepk, Bibi28, cellphone48 – I will finish all my other stories but it will take time. Btw I’m almost done with the latest chapter of Lover in the Dark and will post it ASAP.
pinky3001—Thank you so much for your kind words! It is enough for me to know that readers find enjoyment with my stories but to know that my writings can also move someone’s heart is truly rewarding. Thank you again and hope you’ll like this second part (-;
Spumoni—You are one of the great writers of this TiBette FanFiction Universe and I certainly respect your opinion. Thank you for reading and commenting on the first part and if you give this story another chance or you decide to discontinue reading then I’ll totally understand.
mscully—Thanks for letting me know your thoughts! There is definitely a different kind of magic when we see Jennifer and Laurel on the screen. I just want to share another part in Lydia Martin’s blog in Miami Herald (You should read it!) when she interviewed Laurel Holloman
Plenty of couples tangle on The L Word and none brings the emotion or the heat that Bette and Tina do together. What’s up with that chemistry?
“I don’t know how we have it, or why we have it. I just know we have it. We’re very different in a lot of ways. Maybe that has something to do with it. As actresses, we want the same results. We love and care about our characters. Maybe our differences makes the chemistry crackle. And our desire to find the core truth of these characters also helps.”
So is it easier, or harder, to create that crackle now that the actresses have gotten to know each other better over five seasons?
“When we shot that love scene in the first season, after we brought home that guy, I had known her for maybe a week,” Laurel said. “And the chemistry was there then. I think you have more chemistry when you don’t hang out with someone so much. I stay kind of private. I think some mystery creates tension. Obviously, we are great friends, but we give each other a lot of space, too.”
So, are they too buddy-buddy now to put enough heat in future sex scenes, should, you know, there happen to be any?
“It’s fun now. We giggle. We do a lot of ‘Can you put your hand here?’ You know, where the skin is different after having a baby,” Laurel says. “But I don’t think we have lost the tension. We know the characters. And that chemistry is just there. It’s undefinable. In my career, I have done a few sex scenes. And sometimes it’s just there. Sometimes it’s just not. It’s an undefined visceral connection between two people. Bette and Tina just have it. I think Shane and Carmen also had it.”
Sorry to hear the show getting lots of cuts when it was aired there in Brazil, in my country I think it wasn’t even aired at all because Philippines is predominantly a Roman Catholic country. Fortunately I was able to buy a DVD and of course the internet which eventually led me to the world of Tibette Fan Fiction. Hope you’ll approve this this second part too (-;
teegirl—Hey I remember you! You been gone for quite some time and you are definitely missed. Thanks so much for your support but get your butt back to writing and finish those fabulous stories (-;
Aiyahnah—Thanks girl for commenting twice! Yep I have about five comments that were deleted. It sucks but can’t do anything about it just hoping that it won’t happen anymore, not to me and not to other writers as well. Thanks for sharing your opinions for they are much and highly appreciated. Just like what I have mentioned before I don’t mean disrespect to JB and LuH I just want to create a story basing on that amazing and incredible TIBETTE chemistry. Hope you’ll like this new chapter and looking forward to knowing your thoughts!
Thanks again to all of my loyal readers, silent or not really appreciate you all and please let me know what you think…THANKS!!!
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That was intense, thanks
I loved that scene from Season 2!..You brought it back and made it even better.!.Keep on keeping on phacey!..
Your right when you said “What If”
Beautiful! Just as lovely this second time around! PPS
if the story has a happy ending if not read it, because you already wrote a story with a sad ending, if not read this story, I recommend reading phacey tell your story
wow this was amaizing thx for posting .PPS
Wow what a chapter! The ultrasound sex is one of the most iconic scenes in the entire show and my friend you gave it justice. I feel like i’m in that room with the crew completely mesmerized by that scene. I believe in freedom of expression and everyone is entitled to their own opinion so phacey please carry on!
Gee my comment on the first chapter was deleted ill flip out if this one gets deleted too (;
Thank you for writing this type of story! The natural connection between those two actresses was just too much to ignore. You do justice to it. PPS. Also, love your other stories – please continue!
Well, it seems my comment in the previous chapter was among the canceled! :( That’s very bad!
So I haven’t even got a comment above :( (I know it’s not your fault, but I got used to it that you always respond to us separately)
I don’t remember exactly what I wrote, but I know that included that I loved it! ;)
Being I’m a big Tibetter I’ve always admired the chemistry that was between them. and I’m very glad that someone writes a story about it. (especially in that you are) ;)
I know that this is just a fiction, but when I read the chapter on the rear my brain I keep telling: “Why could not it have been so? “no one will ever know the answer to the reality :DD
I loved every minute of this chapter. your talent with words always fascinate me.
Thank you for sharing this idea with us. and of course I’m looking forward to another chapter in this story and one of my favorite story Lover in the dark ;)
Phacey, I want to thank Lydia martins interview with LH.
You’re killing me heart, this story is fantastic, even !!
fiction That way you will make me believe, without doubt,
they really had a case! Love the creativity and the way you
give this story.
All of us respect JB and LH was not anyone’s fault for giving them
lives the characters we love, and we fantasize that they had
more than professional work.
I love this second part, waiting for the next.
10 stars!
Yes, like this if only that it brings back memories of the ultrasound love scene in season 2. Such a beautiful scene and Laurel to be admired for filming when pregnant many actresses wouldn’t have.
Look forward to the next posting.
.hi phacey..im new here..i love youre writings.. especially lover in the dark..i hope tina and angie will meet again…yey!.can’t wait for your next post for that..btw im from philippines too..keep it up..post soon..take care always.. :-)
Thank you Phacey. Likewise, the feeling is mutual.
Very emotional chapter, need speaking up their mind is not easy, to act on it may brings consequences which hurting a lots of people. Both are attached with a commitment. Is not easy to get out of a marriage just because you are not happy. Just giving thoughts of how to manage all this in real life…….. Looking forward for more……
wow what a chapter I also remember the first time I watch that scene and was so entrance by the two actresses and how stunning Laurel was while pregnant it blew my mind. also how addicted to the show I became I was trolling the site for any spoilers and that’s how I came across this wonderful site that apart from the show the fanfics saved my sanity and as they say the rest is history even after the show ended we are still here reading and writing about it loved this chapter pps.
I remember how other readers reacted to this story a few years back which i think the reason why you stopped posting so imagine my surprise when i receive a notification that you posted a new story. People have their own opinions and you can’t please everybody but know that your loyal readers support you all the way. This chapter was intense and your version of the post ultrasound sex was amazing! I have never seen a pregnant woman looking so good as Laurel Holloman. Definitely one of my favorite scenes of the show.
That was one of the best scenes i ever saw on television and you recreated it again, simply amazing!
Their chemistry was so amazing, never saw it again.
I am so glad writers like you and others are still giving us B&T stories. Keeping them alive after the show ended. I thank you for that.
I do hope you will give us a happy ending.
Wow another intense chapter.That scene was really lovely I remember it well at the time hoping it would bring them together again.You are only writing what a lot of people believed was happening in real life with their relationship.Who are we know the reality of it all.Loving your take on Tibettes relationship.Cant wait for the next chapter.PPS
All you are doing Phacey is putting my thoughts on screen. omg like I wrote before on this chapter before you repost it is, I believe this is how it actually happen on set. I am one of the firm believers that those two were very much in love for real. I have read their interviews including the one you posted and watched interviews studying closely and trust me it’s there plan to see, fans should take their minds out of fiction and see the reality right before their eyes that’s all im saying…I love this story it was always one of my favorites happy you came back to repost it…..
oh by the way can I just say yessssssssssss you updated Lover in the Dark, I was thinking I was going to have to look you up, come to your house or work whatever, take your computer and update the story myself geesh lol
Thank you so much for posting this very intense scene. Bette and Tina had a lot of love scenes throughout the show and I loved all if it but still I can’t help but wish they had more.
I especially loved this ultrasound love scene. But in your imagination, it was more intense; describing their feelings while doing that very passionate love scene. Their amazing chemistry was so obvious that can’t be missed as if they had this special connection with each other. Even the crews on the set noticed it.
Surely, after watching that scene most Tibette fans wondered what’s happening with their favorite couple behind the scene and wished there’s more going on with them other than the professional work they were doing in front of the camera.
Although the lives of these two brilliant actresses were known to public… they have this special feelings toward each other that they had to conceal from others and of course from one another for a lot of reasons.
Whatever they feel towards each other… it was like the moon… part of it was always hidden away…
Looking forward to your next update. So curious if those hidden secrets would be revealed…
So good, please post more, thanks
Phacey, You are a great fiction writer..Fiction! Ignore those negative comments. You have written what so many have wondered about. PLEASE write another chapter to this, PLEASE! TBsG
On Christmas Day it will be three long months since this post. Please Phacey continue this story.
The Brit is growing impatient. I on the other hand will wait patiently ; )
Well, I know, discovering this amazing story of yours just now, in 2018, makes me sad because obviously you stopped to write it… but being the deeply romantic I am, I just believe in life’s miracles and perhaps, perhaps my so late comment could create some magic influence ? Pretty please ;-)