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High School Life: Part 15
Continuing from Alice’s Point Of View:
“Derek, what do you mean Derek?” Shane looks at me becoming more worried.
“He .. He says he’s in town and that he’s coming to see me.”
Shane face changes as it suddenly dawns on her who I’m talking about. “What the fuck is Derek doing back?”
I become agitated and snap at her, “I don’t know, how the fuck am I supposed to know?!” I feel bad instantly knowing that she’s only curious.
“Ok Ok, I’m gunna get you a glass of water ok.” Shane smiles at me reassuringly and goes over to the sink to pour a glass of water.
“I cant see him Shane, I just cant do it.”
Shane walks back over handing me the glass of water, sitting herself on the counter she looks at me. “I understand that honey.” She pauses for a second, “Alice, we haven’t really seen you react in anyway since he left and everything that went on.”
I look at her, “I knew if I cried I wouldn’t stop.” I look down and fiddle with the bottom of my top. “I loved him Shane and then all that shit went on … why did he do it?” I look up catching sight of Dana smiling and laughing with the girls, right in that instant my heart breaks a little. She’s so perfect and doesn’t deserve any of this bullshit.
“I wish I could give you a reason Al I really do.”
“I was in love with him, more than anyone I’d ever been with and he cheats on me.”
“Al, baby you ok?” Both Shane and I Look up to see Dana stood in the doorway.
I put on the best smile I can, “Hey Dane, yeah I’m fine just telling Shane to leave the salad alone.” I glance over at Shane and look at her pleading her with my eyes not to say anything.
“Well you know me, I love the lettuce.” Shane smirks giving me a wink as she gets down from the counter.
I smile at her thankfully picking up the plates and bowls again. “You ready to go back out there then Dane?”
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Has Alice lost her mind?? First thing I would do is call someonr to come and help me He is nothing but trouble. her will end up hurting Alice. thanks
I am beyond excited to see an update from you on this story!! I really hope you decide to continue this wonderful story. On to the comments… Love how supportive Shane is. Wow. Derek is a truly horrible person. I love the easy interplay between all the girls at the party. You really, really, really need to keep going with this. I don’t mind a delay between posts as long as there will be another one coming. I am scared for Alice in many ways. Thanks for the great story, *+*SummerBreeze*+*!!
totally concur with the comments before me and add….boot to the nuts!!
LMAO at shanesthebest…Boot to the nuts! HAHAHA–Great job, and i have to echo the above comments..Poor poor Al, hopefully she gets things sorted out. Thank you for another great post!
Sorry that I missed commenting your previous 3 posts. I love the gang together enjoying the barbeque. I am shocked that A had an abortion at her young age. Derek better not hurt A again. I hope D would trust her instinct and go to check on A. I trust that the gang would step in to protect A if necessary. I have to agree with S that it was up to A to tell D her story. I sure hope D would not run away when times were tough. TBC, period. without the “??” It is a terrific story and will mind if you do not post often because you are busy. Thank you, SummerBreeze!
OMG Alice are you out of your mind, just tell derek is over and no more chance and tell him don’t bother you again or you gonna call the police. Poor Dana but hope the gang will come and rescue Alice. Please post more, thanks!
woooo your back!! NEED more!!! dont do it alice!!! love sharmen
what i would punch his face in … i feel like doing that right now
Someone needs to slap some sense into Alice. How can she even think about kissing that (insert adjectives here) Derek when she’s got the hottest girlfriend ever? If Alice looses her mind completely, please send Dana over to me, I’ll take good care of her, I promise, lol. You are evil if you leave it like this. Please don’t do it. You don’t want me to track you down, do you? lol. Seriously now, I hate it when people don’t finish their stories. Please, if you want to stop writing this, at least give it an actual (hopefully happy Danish) ending. I really hope you continue though. Thank you very much for the great update!!!