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Hindsight – Chapter 16
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When I had watched mother and daughter asleep last night I asked myself a simple question, it was a question I had not yet accepted that I had the answer to… white straight boring versus biracial exciting lesbian… simple really, but when did I do simple… now was meant to be simple and uncomplicated…
Wasn’t I meant to have become unpredictable…? I think Alice used that word for me… unpredictable… she said it was meant to be unpredictable Porter, expect the unexpected… and yet it had been me that had given her shock, she said it didn’t suit me being a dirty bisexual… she said she would much rather see me in fuzzy wuzzy slippers and be boring with the Porter…
Thinking of that very one… I was right… I pull into the drive and see her at the window, she turned and then looked back out of the window, she had no doubt informed Angelica that I had arrived… I glance at my watch… one minute to spare…
I smile at her and see the response at once, a smile in return… I get out of the car and retrieve the bags from the trunk, leaving the stroller in their I slam the lid down…, I look toward the house, seeing the front door opening and the two Porters stepping out onto the deck, this felt so familiar that it was scary…
“Hi…”
“Hey… this is a nice welcome…” I say to them both, leaning to kiss Angelica who was sat upon Bette’s hip; she gave me her best toothy grin in response.
“You came back…” Bette said quietly.
“I promised…”
“Yeah… you did…”
“With a minute to spare I might add…” I looked at her and smiled, she was looking a little anxious, I think she had definitely been pacing and counting the minutes, “are you okay?”
“We missed you…” she mumbled as I looked toward Angelica.
“Huh? What did you say…?” I turned back to her as I asked her to repeat her words.
“Uh… she missed you…”
I looked into her eyes, was there something she wasn’t saying… “Are you sure you’re okay?”
She merely nodded at me before turning her head and placing her lips against Angelica’s curls.
“What have you two been up to while I’ve been gone?”
“We dipped our toes in the pool and played with her toys…”
“Do you fancy going to the park for a picnic?”
She looked at me then, I saw her swallow before nodding, her voice was barely audible.
“Yeah… I’d like that…” she looked down at the bags and smiled before looking back to me, “did you pack enough stuff?”
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Always the best.
Amazingly well writen. Thanks for posting !!!!
Yah she made it back…I hope Tina comes home….but she is thinking about going back to Henry’s tonight. Thanks for posting Jobadge. This could go either way.
Loving this story! especially that your Tina isn’t some kind of monster, she seems pretty confused though but they are both so sweet in this story, in a kind of tragic way. Like it a lot.
Well, yeah, she has to go back, she could only carry so many diapers in one trip. She has to go back and get her own stuff, and maybe even do Henry the courtesy of saying goodbye. Who says lesbians can’t be good and boring? Pack it up and move it out of the house that was never a home. Hey Jo, I had to look up rusk in my dictionary. That Angelica sure has exotic tastes for an American kid.
I hope Tina decides not to go to Henry’s house that night. Great writing and PPS.
Ok I give, what is a rusk???
A rusk is a rectangular, hard, dry biscuit or twice-baked bread (courtesy of wikipedia). That doesn’t sound too appealing. lol Anyway I prefer Tina in fuzzy wuzzy slippers being boring with Bette too.
Geez you are good.
I can see Bette pacing and Tina’s head in the day dreams of the past. They still know each other so well. I am with skycaptain about Tina returning to Henry for the night. Hopefully, Tina will have long short talk with Henry and end their relationship. Even if she does not go to Bette right away at least move towards Bette again. You can hear the regret that Tina has for ever leaving Bette and not working through her issues that she alone had. I still belive in B&T and hope that they can take that long road towards each other.
I would like to have some monkey bread myself.
Great, Jo. I so want to see what comes next… the interaction betweem them is all I am looking forward to.
great
Thanks for another post in this good story.
I hope that Tina goes home and tells Hendick its over tonight, great chapter heart breaking
wonderful!! i like so much how you show us all the feelings in their, her anxieties, her fears but the most important the love that they have for each other, i hope they find out soon how much they love
love it…glad T got back safely and hope they sort themselves out…it is an ongoing process. pps
Good chapter. Hope Tina will dump hendick and come home to Bette. Bette is where she belong and let them talk more and work thing out. OK post soon please, thanks!
Lovely, just lovely. These two so belong together. Please stay Tina, and just how much did she pack?
Love this story…thanks for sharing it!
as always another excellent chapter from my fav writer. and yeah — what’s wrong with being boring ? did you know that thyey picked the actor who plays Henry just because he looked so boring ? thanks for the ” thing” by the way – i will try not to ask you again – chat soon xxx
Wow Jo… Just wow… The way you describe emotions, they are palpable in the air, lingering inbetween me and the computerscreen… I can see, hear, feel, sense, every emotion you name with your magnificent words… Thanks for this little miracle, as every chapter of this story is
Would it be too much of an understatement to say that I quite like this story? Anyway, just to let you know, for someone who’s supposed to be in retirement I managed to get over my first chapter nerves yesterday and rattled off about 2000 words of something completely different.
Lovely chapter…enjoying it as always.
Excellent ! Excellent ! Excellent ! Love this kind of drama ! How talented are you ?! Thank you for allowing us into your amazing world, Jo. You’re still the Golden Goddess of Fan fiction writing.
Awww I just love your Tina, you’re showing us she isn’t a monster, just a confused girl, who has lost her way temporarily!!
Excellent as always …
There’s no question in my mind that Tina should just stay with her family tonight… call it wishful Tibette thinking, but that’s just the way I see it. Always brilliant, mate. Heart-breaking and oh so beautiful.