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Hindsight – Chapter 26
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I still felt as she was still mine…, she would always be mine…, I would never let go of that tiny ray of hope inside me…, how could I…, she was my forever…
I told her once…, when we were lying in bed, after we had made the most…, sweet…, slow…, erotic and sensual love, it was one of those times where there were few words…, just the need for that slow intenseness between us…, the intensity of bringing one another to that climax that brings tears… that emotional connection when we looked at one another after and said ‘I love you…’ but both knowing the words weren’t necessary because we had just become one…, it was the kind of love making that we had where it would affect us for days on end…, but I had whispered to her that night…, my words floated in the air between us as I told her… ‘I can’t live without you…’
She had gigged at my words, she had smiled and kissed me in mock humour, telling me ‘baby… there are so many other fish in the sea…’, but there weren’t… not for me…, I had the only one I had ever wanted…
I just hoped that Tina’s in time with Henry he appreciated and looked after my fish… because if she wasn’t in my life I only wanted her to be happy…, I wasn’t concerned for my own well being… the last seven weeks had been a battle to talk to her about seeing my daughter…, but I was coming to realise that it was about her too…, not just Angelica…, it had taken me a good while to understand that…
We pulled into the car park, finally reaching our destination for the afternoon, my stomach gave a rumble and I heard her chuckle…
“Hungry…?”
“Yeah… just a bit…” I turned to her and gave a small smile, I needed to let go of the thoughts I had been having, we were here to have a nice time…, I’m sure it would be painful at times, for us to sit together and try and forget everything that was going on in the real world… but we had to try…, I was more than prepared to try…, I just really wished this was a proper family day out…, that I could take her hand as we walked with the stroller and the picnic and be the normal family that we used to be…
God… I so missed my family…
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Great update. Thanks so much.
Your family should leave you to your own devices more often. Excruciatingly beautiful. Jo, haven’t they suffered enough? They both realize what they both miss. PPS if you can.
great update, minus the fingernails…I love this story.
I love the way you write. You explain in such detail so that we can see and feel everything. I love it. Great update. I’m ready for them to work on them so they can eventually get back together (if thats where your taking them). PPS
Geez, Jo, I wish you’d get us to that sunny southern California park already cause it’s currently 7F/-15C here with a nice strong wind. Only going to get colder the next few days. What the fuck am I doing here? God, I wish our girls weren’t so reluctant to lay their respective cards on the table, it would only do them good, but I guess with all the pain they’ve inflicted on each other some reserve is to be expected. Too bad.
That’s so sad. Henry needs to let that fish go or the fish should swim away and come back to Bette.
So what did you do to get left home alone this weekend? Just don’t feed the pigeons or ducks or anything, we don’t want you getting mad bird disease.
LOL @ funnyone! :PThey are both hurt and I think they should really talk. Maybe this picnic time could be a good opportunity to a bigger step forward…
great update jo! keep yourself out trouble if possible..lol p.p.s.
My heart is beating faster knowing that they are lost without the other half of their soul. Somehow, someway they have to get that super glue (Angelica) to piece their torn, worn out hearts back together so that their hearts will beat as one again.
yeah, i agree…why would anyone want to look at ther fish when you already got the one that you want? :-) looking forward to the next one!
jo jo jo seriously these one pagers with all this angst has me addicted!!
Heart wrenching and beautifully written. Please pps.
Tina might need to learn to swim upstream to get her heart back where it belongs thanks
Damn, I could get used to this. So glad you are off and able to devote your time to writing. Love this story.
You are definitely using your time to its full potential. Thanks for another great chapter.
Another great update…got me teary eyed again. I like how you are spending your time alone this weekend. :) Maybe another update tomorrow?? Pretty please! :)
WOW….AMAZING!!!! Bette is the only fish for Tina too. You’re the best mate. BTW, still can’t email you, f*cking Outlook!!! xx
HMMMMMMMM…hope tina’s for real…enuff friggin’ around imo…
Every little detail – “as I had to adjust the seat to where I usually had it” – you just capture it all so that it is painfully real. Just great Jo!
Sweet remmembrances, mixed with the pain of the current situation and the many unknowns and insecurities==wow, Jo, what a tale you are weaving! Thank you so much!
great
Owie. :( Tina will always belong to Bette, end of discussion, as if it ever were one. I definitely understand Bette’s feeling of ‘forever’; for some people, there just AREN’T other fish in the sea. (And some of us are still sitting with our lines cast out ;) )
Well, we all know that Bette is Tina’s fish too… I just hope Tina has the guts to let her know. You’re definately using your weekend to its full potential… thank you for letting us benefit from this time on your own.
Nice update!
That had to be tough for Bette, to het into the car and see those pics again. I wonder if Tina notice d her hesitation or putting the pictures back up to drive to the park. Post soon, I’m hooked (just like a drug addict, but in a good way) LOL.
Good chapter. Keep them talking and open up to each other more. Now let see the family play in the park, they will be happy and have a good time. OK post soon please, thanks! So glad to catch up with your story and love it!
I said Yea yea! Thanks for the update. LUV it.