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Hollywood ending
“EIGHT”
“DANA *****
Dana crossed her arms and leaned against the door frame watching
“Sorry Al I’m late for the ball” Dana said mockingly over her shoulder.
Shane pulled up in front of the formal wear shop and watched as the men flowed from the store with their rented tuxes for the weekend. “***** what am I getting myself into?”
“SEVEN”
The party was a total success it was a little after eleven and Bette stepped out onto the balcony for a breath of fresh air. She’d spent the last twenty minutes with a friend of a friend of some ***** who’s cousin thoughtwhatever. She sighed and took a sip of her champagne. She froze when she heard the balcony door open behind her. *****, this is not the movies, when a woman steps out onto the terrace it does not mean please come out and make a goddamn move on me .Bette flinched when she felt the coat slide onto her shoulders ***** its going to be a long night.
“SIX”
“No, no I’m supposed to be Queen of the Damned”
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That was great! I would never had picked Dana. I thought it was Tina and was sad about it might I add ;) Happy New Year to you and all!
Interesting. A lot of twists and turns. I like it. You definitely got me hooked.
You totally got me, I was so sure it was to be Al. Very good story, and I love Shane and Dana together. ANd your update of the promises was just great too. Need a fix soon ;)
OMG that kicked ass. The first couple of times you got to the jacket I was like, “Ewwww…EWWWWWWWW!” then I figured something was up. Nice surprise ending!
Ha very cool..i thought first was Alice than Tina lol it was cool to see that it was Dane. Man its gonna be chaotic if they decide not hide anymore..i hope you continue the story!.
That was soooooo good! Loved it…~G~
Very nice. Thought it was Tina. Too cool how Dana pretended to want Alice by her side on New Years Eve, when they were arguing. Really great story.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was great, Dana definatly wasn’t who I thought it would be
that was very suprising I really thought it was Alice….but Dana…good story!
That was a great story. I was hoping it was going to be Dana.
WAH! I swear it made me dizzy LoL I liked it…Dana eh? Who would’ve thunk it?
Aaaaaah. What a wonderful story…you’re such a romantic…*sniffs and wrings out hanky*