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“Why didn’t you tell me earlier about Chris?” Dana asked.
“I scared that you thought I was insane. It’s not like I asked for your permission or something. And you knew that I had pill popping problems before.” Alice said shyly.
“You silly. You knew I always wanted to have kids with you.” Dana looked at her lovingly. She exhaled and smiled broadly, feeling really happy for the first time in six years.
“Thanks again Al. Thanks.” Dana whispered into Alice’s ear. A stream of happy tears rolled down her cheeks. Alice just nodded and tightened her arms around Dana’s neck. After a while they pulled away. Dana caressed Alice’s cheek. She felt like she had died and was in heaven now. Her dream had finally come true. And she knew that the woman in front of her felt the same way too.
Dana wrapped her arms around Alice’s waist. They closed their distance slowly and brought their lips together. It was a slow and passionate kiss, to show how much they meant when they said the three precious words to each other. Alice moaned into the kiss and opened her mouth to invite Dana’s tongue in. Dana complied with the request and taste every inch of Alice’s mouth. She never thought it would feel this good to kiss Alice again. She memorized every inch of Alice’s curves as she roamed over Alice’s body slowly and passionately. They broke the kiss when they heard a beeping sound from Dana’s watch.
A smile crept up across Dana’s lips when she looked at her watch.
“What’s that smile for?” Alice furrowed her eyebrows.
“It’s 4 am Al.”
Both smiled and pulled each other into another hug. Dana hugged Alice tightly as she inhaled Alice’s scent. This was the scent she longed for. It made her felt like home.
“You still wear that watch I gave to you.” Alice smiled.
“Yeah, every time I looked at the time it reminds me of you.”
“Wait.” Alice broke the hug and walked into her bedroom. Dana was puzzled. Then she came out with a small box in her hand.
“Here.” Dana raised her eyebrow as she took the box over from Alice.
“Open it.” Alice said.
Dana opened the box to reveal a beautiful Tag Heuer sport watch. She pulled it out and put it around her wrist, smiling broadly.
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Brilliant … pps
You had me so nervous with the cousin thing but I am SOO happy! That was such a good chapter!! Wow indeed!
This was wonderful. I’m so glad Alice didn’t sleep with him and glad Dana stayed to listen instead of running.
Wow. Wow. Wow. What an amazing chapter!! So many emotions. The communication and maturity in Alice and Dana’s relationship is so wonderful to read. They both seem ready to work for it this time. And we finally found out about Chris. Perfect. I am so glad Alice did not have a relationship with Chris’ father – that would have been weird. Dana handled the difficult conversation so well. Just wonderful… Thanks, uhhuh!!!
I like how you dragged out the story of Alice and Dana cousin, but I knew in the end she didn’t sleep with him and I was so happy to read that i was right. WOO HOO.
Awesome, uhhuh! You are very thoughtful and generous to give us Chris’ identity right before Christmas. I love this tremendous update each and every paragraph. You did an excellent job with the plot along with the details. I too am glad that D did not walk away when things were tough and A did the artificial insemination. They so deserved each other. Can’t wait until Chris would find out about D. Love that little one and hope he would be better soon. Thank you so very much uhhuh and wishing you a very Happy Holidays!