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Seeing no reaction from Dana, Alice thought she had once again lost the love of her life. She thought that Dana was freaked out on the whole Chris thing. That was why she kept the secret to herself for so long. Dana would think she was insane; first she had never asked her to bear her a child and second to have her cousin involved. And Alice knew that she had certainly crossed the line to put Dana’s last name into Chris’ birth certificate. She looked at Dana once more. Still no reaction. So Alice thought she would do Dana a favour. She looked out through the window again, not wanting Dana to see that she was actually hurting inside. She tried to say it as light as possible.
“It’s ok for you to go now Dane. I will assume nothing happened between us and go on with my life. I won’t be bordering you…"
Alice was shocked when she felt a pair of arms wrapped around her waist. Before she could process what happened she let out a moan as Dana kissed and sucked her neck.
“Al, how will I ever repay you for this? I acted like an asshole but yet you took all the hassles to bear me a child. Tell me what can I do to pay you back?”
Alice released Dana’s grip and turned around to face the brunette. She couldn’t believe what she heard. Dana still wanted her after all. She couldn’t help let out streams of happy tears. She leaned on Dana’s crook which made Dana’s heart melt instantly.
“All you have to do is love me and Chris with all your heart and never doubt my love to you again. That’s all I ask.”
Dana gently pulled away from Alice and looked direct into her eyes.
"I will love you and Chris my entire heart baby. I know my mistakes and I swear I will make it up to you my entire life. I won’t run away anymore. I will be here to listen what you have to say. I love you Alice Pieszecki. I love you more than my life."
"I love you too." Alice cried harder after Dana’s remark. She never thought of the day that she could hear this from Dana. Dana had just confessed her love to her. She could see sincerity by looking into Dana’s eyes. It was really forever this time.
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Brilliant … pps
You had me so nervous with the cousin thing but I am SOO happy! That was such a good chapter!! Wow indeed!
This was wonderful. I’m so glad Alice didn’t sleep with him and glad Dana stayed to listen instead of running.
Wow. Wow. Wow. What an amazing chapter!! So many emotions. The communication and maturity in Alice and Dana’s relationship is so wonderful to read. They both seem ready to work for it this time. And we finally found out about Chris. Perfect. I am so glad Alice did not have a relationship with Chris’ father – that would have been weird. Dana handled the difficult conversation so well. Just wonderful… Thanks, uhhuh!!!
I like how you dragged out the story of Alice and Dana cousin, but I knew in the end she didn’t sleep with him and I was so happy to read that i was right. WOO HOO.
Awesome, uhhuh! You are very thoughtful and generous to give us Chris’ identity right before Christmas. I love this tremendous update each and every paragraph. You did an excellent job with the plot along with the details. I too am glad that D did not walk away when things were tough and A did the artificial insemination. They so deserved each other. Can’t wait until Chris would find out about D. Love that little one and hope he would be better soon. Thank you so very much uhhuh and wishing you a very Happy Holidays!