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Dana closed the lid of the phone and looked intently into Alice’s eyes.
“What the hell is that supposed to mean? You think you could just snatch my phone like that?” Alice was angry.
“Al.” Dana exhaled. “We need to talk.”
“It was a mistake.” Alice said, not looking at Dana.
“I said it wasn’t a mistake! Who do you think I am?! Slept with me and acted as if nothing happened few hours later? Real smooth Al, really smooth.”
“Dana we are both adults and…” Alice hesitated. “One night stand doesn’t mean anything.” Alice regretted instantly on her words but she could not think of anything better. Dana face dropped upon hearing that. Her hands were shaking from the hurt as well as anger.
“For god’s sake Al if you think we are adults then you should tell me what’s in your mind! We cannot avoid this forever.”
“What do you want from me Dane?! You know I am not enough for you, why you still border about what I think?!”
“You want to know what I want? Damn isn’t it obvious Al? Ok let me tell you again.” Dana put her hands onto Alice’s cheeks so that they were looking at each other. Alice tried to fight but Dana was stronger.
“Look at me, just look at me! Alice Pieszecki all I want is you. You hear that? ALL I WANT IS YOU. And if you ask me ten years later the answer will still be the same. You get that?” Dana loosened her grip when she saw tears in Alice’s eyes. She was sorry that she made Alice cried. She wanted to slap herself at the moment for hurting her soul mate.
“I think I need fresh air. I should go.” Alice’s voice was weak.
Dana felt as her heart had stopped beating upon hearing that. She wanted to have them talked about their problems but seeing Alice’s worn out state, she couldn’t do anything. She slumped onto the couch, defeated.
“No, I should go. This is your house remember?” Dana stood up abruptly and made her way to the door. When the door was shut Alice slumped onto the couch and cried.
Few hours later
Alice looked out through the window. The weather was cold and drizzling outside. She looked at her watch. It was already 1.00 am in the morning. She was worried sick about Dana. Dana had left since 9.00 am. Where is she now?
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Brilliant … pps
You had me so nervous with the cousin thing but I am SOO happy! That was such a good chapter!! Wow indeed!
This was wonderful. I’m so glad Alice didn’t sleep with him and glad Dana stayed to listen instead of running.
Wow. Wow. Wow. What an amazing chapter!! So many emotions. The communication and maturity in Alice and Dana’s relationship is so wonderful to read. They both seem ready to work for it this time. And we finally found out about Chris. Perfect. I am so glad Alice did not have a relationship with Chris’ father – that would have been weird. Dana handled the difficult conversation so well. Just wonderful… Thanks, uhhuh!!!
I like how you dragged out the story of Alice and Dana cousin, but I knew in the end she didn’t sleep with him and I was so happy to read that i was right. WOO HOO.
Awesome, uhhuh! You are very thoughtful and generous to give us Chris’ identity right before Christmas. I love this tremendous update each and every paragraph. You did an excellent job with the plot along with the details. I too am glad that D did not walk away when things were tough and A did the artificial insemination. They so deserved each other. Can’t wait until Chris would find out about D. Love that little one and hope he would be better soon. Thank you so very much uhhuh and wishing you a very Happy Holidays!