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“It is you Alice. You make this hard for us. Why can’t you give me a chance? What’s in your mind?”
“I…..I have moved on Dana. It took me years to get over you.”
“Be honest to yourself Al. You are not over me yet. I know you still love me. Everybody knows it. And I love you Alice. Please. I will spend the rest of my life making up to you. I promise.”
“I can’t take this again. I can’t take it if our relationship doesn’t work out again.” Alice stood up and walk towards the window with tears in her eyes. Dana closed her eyes and exhaled. She stood up and walked towards Alice. She stopped and stood facing Alice while the blonde was looking out through the window. She placed a hand on Alice’s shoulder.
“Al, tell me why you are so scare of giving this relationship a second chance. I will listen this time I swear.” Dana said softly as she looked at Alice. Alice moved her gaze and looked at Dana. Dana nodded and squeezed Alice’s arm gently to reassure her.
“I am scared that the second time around it would end like the first time. That you will ignore me again.” Alice looked down at her feet.
“I don’t want to be clingy and smother you like before. During the first time I couldn’t even recognise myself. I told myself to act normal but I couldn’t control myself when I saw you and Lara around each other. I couldn’t do it years ago therefore I don’t think I can do it now. I just don’t trust myself to not act like this when you have other woman around.”
“Al, please look at me.” Dana lifted Alice’s chin up slowly.
“Look into my eyes. I won’t lie to you this time. There is no other woman that can make me feel complete. I want you Al. I want us. I promise this time we will talk about our problems. I won’t run away like before. I promise Al. I just need another chance. Please.”
Alice’s heart was melted by Dana’s words. She looked intently into Dana’s eyes. She could only see sincerity and love on those eyes. It seemed to be forever this time. But she wasn’t sure if Dana would still stick around after she knew about Chris which she was about to tell her.
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Brilliant … pps
You had me so nervous with the cousin thing but I am SOO happy! That was such a good chapter!! Wow indeed!
This was wonderful. I’m so glad Alice didn’t sleep with him and glad Dana stayed to listen instead of running.
Wow. Wow. Wow. What an amazing chapter!! So many emotions. The communication and maturity in Alice and Dana’s relationship is so wonderful to read. They both seem ready to work for it this time. And we finally found out about Chris. Perfect. I am so glad Alice did not have a relationship with Chris’ father – that would have been weird. Dana handled the difficult conversation so well. Just wonderful… Thanks, uhhuh!!!
I like how you dragged out the story of Alice and Dana cousin, but I knew in the end she didn’t sleep with him and I was so happy to read that i was right. WOO HOO.
Awesome, uhhuh! You are very thoughtful and generous to give us Chris’ identity right before Christmas. I love this tremendous update each and every paragraph. You did an excellent job with the plot along with the details. I too am glad that D did not walk away when things were tough and A did the artificial insemination. They so deserved each other. Can’t wait until Chris would find out about D. Love that little one and hope he would be better soon. Thank you so very much uhhuh and wishing you a very Happy Holidays!