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Honesty chapter 10
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Lying silently still, there was no acknowledgement from Tina that she could hear Bette or sense that she was there. Her eyes didn’t open, her hand did not move, her breath did not quicken, there was no response.
A nurse came over to Bette and place a gentle hand on her shoulder, “They have a room in ICU ready for her how. Why don’t you go home for a bit while we get her moved and settled. She’s stable. she’ll be fine. You need a break even if it’s just for an hour. The days ahead of you could be quite long. You need to learn how to take a break right now. Believe me, it will be necessary.
Bette knew that the nurse was speaking the truth and from experience. She had left home in yoga pants and a t-shirt with only her keys. She probably needed to go home and get herself presentable. She touched Tina’s face gently with her fingers, “Tina, I love you sooooo much. You rest and I will be right back. I’m going to run home to see Angelica and pick up a few things. I’ll be right back T …….. I Love You.” Bette kissed Tina’s cheek, there was no response. Tina lay there still and quiet.
On her drive home Bette had to pass the accident scene again. Everything had been cleared away. The sun was starting to rise and the intersection was lit by the early morning rays. Bette could not help but notice that there did not appear to be any skid marks where Tina may have tried to avoid being hit by the SUV. Bette found that odd.
Tina was a cautious driver. Had she been distracted?
When Bette open the front door, she saw Kit asleep in a chair and Angus asleep on the couch with Angelica in his arms. She quietly walked through the house to the bedroom, the bedroom where just hours before she and Tina had made love, the bedroom where she and Tina dedicated their lives to each other again, the bedroom where she and Tina vowed to be a family and raise Angelica together. She sat on the bed and fell apart.
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What the hell does Kate want. I don’t remember that they were together in this story. Hope Bette turns her around and she won’t come back. No one needs her involvement at this point. Keep them both safe and return Tina to Bette. We know that right now the body has suffered an incredible trauma and that will take a long time to heal. Great update. PPS
Oh know is Kate what Tina has to clean up before you can move back home??
maybe kate is what tina had to take care of?:)PPS
Please just let Kate walk away and not come back. I hope Kate was not what Tina needed to take care of. Thanks Great Chapter!!! I am glad Kit gave Bette a good talking to. PPS
I am caught up now…and again..I have to say Oh crap…I bet Kate was the issue for Tina. pps
Kate?! not a good sign!! Tina’s distraction…no skid marks…hmmmm… stay calm Bette…remember what Tee said to you!!!!! ppsgreat chapter
Thanks for your reaffirmation of your love for Bette and Tina. I don’t like to read the stories where one of them dies either. I know death is a part of life, but I love these two characters. I know any injuries to the brain take a long period of time to recover from. But, please let Tina come around soon and recognize Tina in some way. I think you gave us a hint of the drama to come when Bette noticed no skid marks near the accident site. Excellent job, can’t wait for more!!! PPS
I meant let Tina recognize Bette.
There’s no time for distractions. Kate didn’t know Tina well enough to visit an ICU patient, did she? This is a time for family. Tell her to go donate blood. …on second thought, Kate was so sleazy looking, the blood bank wouldn’t want her blood. Apologies to Annabella Sciorra. She’s a wonderful actress. Just “NO!” to Kate, though. Thanks!
Gosh! Doctors say that a patient suffering from a comma, actually does not lose the ability to hear. So, even when Tina may not be responsive to B’s pleads, it is likely that she has listened to every word B has expressed. As for Kate Arden’s sudden presentation, it only adds a little bit of tension to the ambiance in B’s eyes. It’s Ok, though. Tina didn’t make it to the office, most probably. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
Kate starting trouble??? I hope not because she will be the target of all the frustration and anger the family can not unload anywhere else if that is the case. I am glad to see that the long run plans won’t involve Tina’s death.
ok whad does kate want now!
Ohhww I wonder what’s gonna happen. I hope Tina Will wake up and please, without brain injury and Loss of memory! :D This is beautifully written, thanks.
I had to read through the last 3 updates really fast to make sure you hadn’t killed Tina off. With that said, I love this story and Tina so better survive and be okay. What the heck is Kate doing there? Not sure that is what she had to clean up, but it would most definitly be best for Bette to remember what Tina told her. They both made mistake, but they faced it, know it, and still came to the conclusion that we all knew. They were meant to be together.