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Honesty chapter 10
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“GOD, please do not take her away from me, away from Angelica. She was so full of life, please give her back her life to spend with us.” Her quiet sobs began to grow louder and she begged God for the chance to spend the rest of her life with Tina. A long life of happiness watching their daughter grow up, go to college, get married. “Please God give her back to us.”
Her cries woke Kit who came to sit beside her, “Baby girl, It’s gonna’ be ok. We’re gonna make it through this. Tina is strong …….. “
“Is she strong enough to survive this Kit?”
Grabbing Bette by the arm, “Bette, don’t think like that. She is strong, she stood up to you didn’t she. She is strong and she will make it through this.”
“What if she doesn’t. Or, what if she lives but is never the same?”
“Baby girl, you cannot think that way. You know God’s got a plan and whatever he wants is how it’s gonna be”
“Kit, I don’t want to hear that. I want to hear that she is going to be OK. That she is going to survive, that she is going to come home and that she is going to the Tina that I love. What if she loses her memory, What if she never knows us again. Jesus Christ Kit, it could be a devastating injury that she may never recover from.”
“Bette, you leave that kind of thinking right here, right now. You will not take those thoughts back to the hospital with you. You will not have a negative thought once you leave this house. These thoughts are normal but, they have got to be put away for your sake as well as Tina’s. I am so happy that you two are getting back together. It’s the way it should be. You should have never been apart and don’t do anything to hurt each other again. Bette, do you hear me!” Kit is being the strong big sister that Bette needs right now. Bette needs to hear these words. She cannot take negativity back to the Hospital with her.
After a quick shower, Bette is ready to go back to the hospital. Angus and Angelica are awake and Kit joined them at the breakfast table. Angelica had her usual cereal and sliced banana’s as Kit and Angus drank coffee. “Come here baby girl and have some coffee before you leave.”
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What the hell does Kate want. I don’t remember that they were together in this story. Hope Bette turns her around and she won’t come back. No one needs her involvement at this point. Keep them both safe and return Tina to Bette. We know that right now the body has suffered an incredible trauma and that will take a long time to heal. Great update. PPS
Oh know is Kate what Tina has to clean up before you can move back home??
maybe kate is what tina had to take care of?:)PPS
Please just let Kate walk away and not come back. I hope Kate was not what Tina needed to take care of. Thanks Great Chapter!!! I am glad Kit gave Bette a good talking to. PPS
I am caught up now…and again..I have to say Oh crap…I bet Kate was the issue for Tina. pps
Kate?! not a good sign!! Tina’s distraction…no skid marks…hmmmm… stay calm Bette…remember what Tee said to you!!!!! ppsgreat chapter
Thanks for your reaffirmation of your love for Bette and Tina. I don’t like to read the stories where one of them dies either. I know death is a part of life, but I love these two characters. I know any injuries to the brain take a long period of time to recover from. But, please let Tina come around soon and recognize Tina in some way. I think you gave us a hint of the drama to come when Bette noticed no skid marks near the accident site. Excellent job, can’t wait for more!!! PPS
I meant let Tina recognize Bette.
There’s no time for distractions. Kate didn’t know Tina well enough to visit an ICU patient, did she? This is a time for family. Tell her to go donate blood. …on second thought, Kate was so sleazy looking, the blood bank wouldn’t want her blood. Apologies to Annabella Sciorra. She’s a wonderful actress. Just “NO!” to Kate, though. Thanks!
Gosh! Doctors say that a patient suffering from a comma, actually does not lose the ability to hear. So, even when Tina may not be responsive to B’s pleads, it is likely that she has listened to every word B has expressed. As for Kate Arden’s sudden presentation, it only adds a little bit of tension to the ambiance in B’s eyes. It’s Ok, though. Tina didn’t make it to the office, most probably. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
Kate starting trouble??? I hope not because she will be the target of all the frustration and anger the family can not unload anywhere else if that is the case. I am glad to see that the long run plans won’t involve Tina’s death.
ok whad does kate want now!
Ohhww I wonder what’s gonna happen. I hope Tina Will wake up and please, without brain injury and Loss of memory! :D This is beautifully written, thanks.
I had to read through the last 3 updates really fast to make sure you hadn’t killed Tina off. With that said, I love this story and Tina so better survive and be okay. What the heck is Kate doing there? Not sure that is what she had to clean up, but it would most definitly be best for Bette to remember what Tina told her. They both made mistake, but they faced it, know it, and still came to the conclusion that we all knew. They were meant to be together.