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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 5
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“I have some errands to run. When I get back later we can celebrate”
I hopped in my car and immediately put on Prison by Creed CD and headed to the boathouse. As I drove, I wondered what the heck was going on. I wondered if Kendell or Erica did something, then again, thought perhaps Maggie was involved somehow with something. As many thoughts started to stir in my head, I found myself picking up more and more speed to get there. When I arrived, I parked my car and could see that Bink’s has her head on her arms. She doesn’t look up at the sound of my car. I get out and immediately go to her. As I get closer, I could see her shoulder’s moving, shaking….she was crying hard.
“What’s wrong?” I ask as I sit next to her and hold her.
She doesn’t answer me, but I continue to hold her as she cries harder. I try again to solicit some information from her.
“Tell me what happened……..did someone do something to you?”
Bink’s could only provide a nod, confirming that someone did.
“What happened?”
“Jon..Jonathon……he cornered me and Marinda at the center. He told use to stay away from Maggie. He was being really brutal”
“Brutal?…….did he touch you?”
She continued to cry as she nodded. “Jamie….came over before he could do any more damage, except for a few bruises.
“Where is he?” I ask softly, trying to maintain my temper which I feel growing by the minute.
“The worse part, is that Maggie found out and confronted him, and he beat her up. She is in the hospital and hopefully will be released tomorrow.
“I’m gonna kick his fucking ass” I said with a fire in my belly.
“No….No Bette….I don’t want to see any more of my friends hurt by him. He isn’t worth it”
I stood up and started to pace a bit in front of her before starting towards my car to find him.
“Bette please…….please don’t….I need you here…..please”
I was torn between wanting to stay with Bink’s and make sure she was okay, and going to track down that bastard for hurting her and Maggie. She put a hand out and motioned to sit down near her. I wanted to, but I was so cranked up now, I didn’t think I could possibly just sit there. However, it was more important to be there as her friend than to track that scumbag down. I sat down near her and she placed her hand on my neck, encouraging me to lay my head on her lap.
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Hey you! WHO KEEPS WHO UP LATE AT NIGHT??? LMAO….hmm…let’s think about this. Who doesn’t SLEEP? LMAO! Actually I have told you before, you don’t keep me up, I have been up into the wee hours of the morning chatting it up with people. One gal is on the West Coast, so naturally when we talk, it is only 12AM there, and 300AM for me!! Wouldn’t it be something if we were all on the SAME time? Anyway, what can I say here that I don’t already tell you? The story is progressing nicely, great pace, good structure, and please……don’t give me any credit there sweetie, you are the creator of this fine story which you have given birth to. Keep em coming my friend. I have to jump in the shower now, it was a looooooong day. I have some rather humorous moments from my Grandfather’s funeral….all I kept saying was “only Charlie” I’ll share them with you when we chat.Take care my friend, and I’m loving it!!!!!!!!!!! PPS!
This was great! Your characters are evolving at a nice pace. Bette is ever the protector. I am glad she got the team she wanted….. Great chapter lady
once again great chapter and loving the characters that are coming into the story, continue please!!!
A great chapter, I love the Bette as the protector and I am looking forward to see her and Tina get to know each other real well if you catch my drift! ;-)
Hey Tylo, I read this chapter….then went back to read the others. Great job girl. Your writing has gotten better with each post. I’m enjoying your story….keep them coming. We can never have too many Bette& Tina stories…since IC doesn’t give them any lovin’
I’m a little on the lost side, but still a great chapter. Is it Saturday yet? Well, it’s still Saturday here but I mean in your story. lol
I really like the progress of your story, can’t wait until Saturday night! PPS.
The CAC stands for the Cleveland Assassin’s Centeer were they will play.. Sorry that was my mistake. Lament why r u lost? If u all have q ask but i might not answer them
Hey your Vols won. My alma mater did not even make it to the big dance. Pretty cool that you are bringing in AMC to your story but my favorite one is GH. Did you notice that daytime does such a better job of telling drama stories than the L word. Go figure, maybe they should hire someone from daytime to help them out. Maybe then we will get to see a B&T couple. I hope that Tina is on Bette’s mind and that their upcoming date is one that they never forget.
Great Chapter!!! Okkay, Bette got picked by the team that she wanted to play for but what about my girl Tina, where did she get a job at? Can’t wait for the next chapter.
hey jr.slacker!WHATS UP WITH THIS 3 PGS.STUFFlol you are getting better with this story and every 2 wks when ya post we can tell your putting your heart/soul into this and we love it even though some freind doesnt comment on it her loss babe. keep up the great work and its needs to be LONGER! p.p.s.
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel so bad now i post every 2 weeks that is so far in between post i will do bettter i promise!!!!!!!!!!!
Tylo you are f****n funny. I have no questions in fear you might not answer…LMFAO Great update…I really like it and well….Can’t wait for Sat.
A Great Chapter tylo!!!!! Your writing keeps getting better. I really like your story. Tina and Bette’s frist date can not wait. Thank you PPS
‘ Each trying to save the other from drowning…even if it is only for one night. ‘ That just absolutely left me speechless… PPS!
Hey its walks well its getting better with each post loving it and if it means less sleep so be it lol im not far behind you with about 5 – 6 but i need my beauty sleep fact i have a craving for olives right now :) keep up the good work x chiao x
Love it! You found the balance (“l’équilibre”, french word of the day lol), it’s funny but deep and touching at the same time… talent and imagination are yours, bravo Tylo!!!
Good chapter. Nice to see B&T are meet again and have lunch, and can’t wait to see their date on Saturday. Ok post soon please, thanks! Glad to catch up with your story and love it!
Great as usual. Looking forward to your next post.
I’m lost because I’m not sure who Binks and Maggie are and how they are connected to Bette. They were probably mentioned before and I forgot.
Like the AMC connection. Binks adds to the story well. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to get together for a hot date LOL. The story is moving along great. talk to you soon :)
CALVIN & HOBBES!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA.. good one tylo