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HOPE ALONE – Chapter 20
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“You have to make the audience share ‘Nina’s’ pain Tina,” Leslie pleaded. “If you want to sell the character and some of the things that she did afterward you need to fill in the gap.”
“The things she did afterward?”
“Using the donor you both agreed on to inseminate yourself and not tell her,” Leslie said bluntly. “Something tells me that something awful happened, beyond the affair, to make you keep that pregnancy a secret.”
“What happened when you went home?” Kate pushed.
“We argued,” Tina said in anger. “I accused her of having an affair and she did the noble thing and didn’t deny it.”
“Then you left?”
“More or less,” Tina answered.
“It’s the more we’re interested in,” Kate said. “I’m not trying to minimize what you went through, it sucks to be on the receiving end of someone cheating on you and disregarding your feelings and self-worth.”
Tina knew Kate was purposefully playing off Tina’s insecurity to show Bette in an unflattering light. Tina leaned back in her chair and arched her eyebrow in Kate’s direction, to serve as a silent warning.
“Tina,” Leslie attempted to plead their case. “It’s important that this movie ring as close to the truth as possible if it’s going to break stereotypes of lesbians and educate and inspire people. “
“Your point?”
“Give us what happened in that two weeks,” Aaron demanded. “I want to see it on paper, in front of us, by tomorrow close of business.”
“It’s complicated,” Tina tried to reason with the group. “It isn’t as easy as writing her apology down on paper.”
“Make it that easy,” Aaron shot back. “That’s why you’re paid.”
“I’m paid to develop and produce projects. Not to transform this piece of shit you insisted on acquiring into a viable script,” Tina shot back clearly angry with her employer. “But since we’ve come this far and I want this finished, it will be done tonight. You won’t have a 2 week unexplainable gap anymore.”
Tina quickly made her way to her office and slammed the door behind her in anger. Her palms were starting to sweat and her breath was coming in short gasps. Tina hadn’t had an anxiety attack in some time, yet it was very familiar and she understood the symptoms quickly.
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Thank you for this chapter, I was just thinking can I hope for one, before the weekend gets so busy. cool you are the best
You so cannot stop there my friend, more please???
They{AAron and Kate} are going to keep on Tina back until she really loses her temper and tell them to put it where the sun doesnt shine and walk out. Some one should put Jenny in the luna bin. So glad that Bette knows Tina so well,that she is going to see her. Just dont let her run into Jenny or Kate. thanks for posting
I figured you’d make us wait for a NC17.I’m glad they are taking it slow.The studio is going to give T a nervous breakdown.Glad that Bette is going to see her.Kate needs to go fly a kite.
yes!! go bette! i love this story, gumby… you have outdone yourself, if that was possible. the emotions that fills the characters is very touching… please keep up the good work!!
Truly love this story. Slow is good. Looking forward to more.
Oh my God, they’ll be talking about THE SCENE. It could be a harrowing experience for both Tina and Bette. That has got to be the best, most disturbing, rawest and most powerful scene I’ve seen in the show but the couple hasn’t mentioned anything about it since. I’m curious on how you’ll process that experience, Gumby. And I’m also glad that you’re allowing this couple to talk and straighten things out first before they engage in some serious “reconnecting” in bed. Thanks a lot for the update, Gumby! PPS.
Bette is becoming very intuative about Tina. She is just what Tina needs right now!
Awe how sweet is bette going to see tina, especially since tina really needs her right now. amazing update!! :)
Glad that Bette is perceptive and action oriented. Slow is good because every update is a pleasure to read. Thanks for the awesome post.
Their revisiting of THAT night should be interesting, can’t wait for the dialogue. I think they’ve both grown & reached a place where they can be honest & get everything out on the table….including, i think, that bette (at that time) may not have been experiencing the heartache that tina had of her wife’s betrayal, but she had the compilation of so many things in her life crumbling around her and that too was a heartache. i know these ladies are in a place where they can offer each other support & bette can help tina get through this next “Lez S#!t” (nice one with that) hurdle
Gumby do you think Bette is going to go all alpha on Aaron and Kate, that could be fun. Maybe we’ll see another post over the week-end???????????Please.Md
aaaaaawwwwwwww too much high drama…go Bette go…that’s love when u just know…I’m on the edge of seat now. Plz let Bette take that Kate bi-atch to the cleaners & don’t allow T to tell about what happened that night. They can’t make her. It’s time she stood up to them but looks like B has to do it. PPS
Your writing is amazing. PPS.
Maybe for once when Kate sees Bette coming in to check on Tina she will realize that Tina has been right all along. Bette is what Tina has been describing all along. Yes she can be stubborn but that does not mean that she does not love Tina and will do things that don’t seem to fit her character.
I love how Bette decides to go over and see Tina and help ease her pain instead of getting angry at Tina for cancelling dinner or star feeling insecure. Hope you’ll share how that goes in your next post. I bet it’ll be super sweet. Can’t wait. Thanks Gumby!
Thank for he update Gumby. I think that this is my favourite story on the site. I just love how you write this. If we beg, do you think that we could get another update sometime this weekend?
Gumby, if we beg hard enough, do you think we could get an update on this story over the weekend???? Please, please, pretty please?? I love this story. I like how in tune Bette is with Tina.
tina is right, it’s to late to stop making the movie and she already invested so much in it…i hope bette can help her deal with that particular painful time…even Laurel admitted that it was the hardest scene for her, so let’s see how it will go here…thanks
Bette is one smart cookie. She is just who Tina needs right now. Great post.
Gumby:I absolutely love this story. Please post another chapter (or two?) as soon as you can.
Oh I love my girls when they are in”alpha mode” as Bette is right now. So happy that is in tune with Tina again, so much that she can feel deep down that something isn’t right with Tina, and she is on hr way to tke care of her lady and the situation. I hope Bette gently tears Kate and Aaron a new a–hole and makes them understand Tina is not to be baited nor intimidated into writing something that should remain private. I love this chapter. Can we please have thenext chapter this weekend? Pretty, pretty please. Thanks Gumby, the story is wonderful.
Bette to the rescue! Go girl go! Tina needs you.
Gumby…this is one of the top stories on this site. That says a lot considering all of the great writers here who have left their mark. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful talent. Will be waiting for the next installment. All I can say is WOW!
Good chapter. I think Tina need to quit her job and let that script shit show it up their ass, so she not get all this stress and be painful like this. Now let see Bette go kick their ass and rescue Tina. Please post more, thanks!
this is just a (another) great story.I really can’t figure out what tina will do with that script problem.being a very private person myself I think it would be wrong to share that night with the world if it is only to please her boss and kate. pps
Ack! Cliffhanger! Kate may think she is making Bette look bad so Tina may cave in and give her a shot, but really all she is doing is causing Tina more pain. I am glad Bette knew Tina wasn’t ok and is going to her.
Gumby… loved the line alice used… “Lez Shit” so true so true… hopefully bette can and will help her with the 2 week gap… i think they should make up a story for those 2 weeks… no one should know what really happened… it should be just between the two of them…
“I don’t know what’s going on there, but I know you aren’t ok Baby. I’m on my way.” Which means we need to read the next chapter…, Lez Pronto… :o)
Finally! They will address that awful night and get past it. The catharsis will let them get on with life and love – together. Sorry, Kate, but you’re going to have a great movie. Thanks, Gumby! Now that I think of it, the TV B&T have never mentioned that night, have they? Or is that another of those “unspoken, unseen” moments that we haven’t been privileged to see? Thanks for addressing it.
I’m happy to see this grown up Bette.. who jumps at the idea something isn’t right. She tries to make it right when it happens..instead of letting it go. Its really nice. I hope she can help..and comfort Tina. So that they can truly move on.
Bette is going to Tina’s only to talk about that awful night when Tina found out about her & Candace. Maybe Bette can help Tina write about the pain they both went through during that two week time frame? PS.
i just love your writing
I hope you are doing fine, you don’t how much I loved these two chapters, you so sensual and you make it real and tangible, I love the love and maturity that began to grow between them, I can’t wait, what will happen next, thanks for this wonderful story, you are really are doing a great job.Have a wonderful Sunday