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    HOPE ALONE – Chapter 22

    Story written on February 9, 2008 by Gumby.
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    Bette and Tina work toward healing from the opening night of Provocations.

    “God,” Bette said softly.  “That was….”

    “Amazing,” Tina finished as she removed her fingers from deep inside Bette.  “I love you.”

    “I love you more,” Bette countered as she pushed her relaxed body off of Tina’s and urged her to lay back by using one hand to gently push her shoulder down.  “Let me show you Tina.”

    Tina lay back as she braced herself on her elbow to be able to watch Bette snake down her body.  Her response, despite her smile, was to spread her legs wide open for Bette to access her body.

    Bette scaled down Tina’s body, licking the sweat off her skin as she went, enjoying the salty taste as much as she had remembered it.  Bette gently turned her head to the side, placing gentle kisses on Tina’s shaking thigh.  Tina bit her lip as she worked to control her reaction, already knowing she was drenched and aching for Bette’s touch.

    Bette nipped at her shaking thigh, before tasting Tina’s essence that had seeped out of her swollen lips and down her thighs.

    “You are so wet Babe,” Bette mumbled against Tina’s leg as she lifted her hips to try to entice Bette to touch her where she most desired.

    Bette repeated the same actions to Tina’s other thigh, ignoring Tina’s grunts of frustration as she teased her beyond anything she had ever done.

    “Fuck me,” Tina begged.

    Bette looked up and met Tina’s frustrated and hazy gaze with a serious look on her face.

    “No,” Bette shook her head slowly.  “I’m going to make love to you, that’s different.”

    The passion and conviction in Bette’s voice caused Tina to blink away her tears that formed in her eyes.  The amount of love reflected in Bette’s eyes took Tina’s breath away as she allowed her shaking arms a break, and laid back with her eyes closed.

    Knowing Tina hadn’t the strength to watch her make love to her, Bette simply proceeded to place the tip of her tongue on Tina’s aching center, smiling as she heard the gasp from above.

    “God I love you,” Tina said as her hips began to buck against Bette’s face.

    Bette placed her hands on Tina’s hips to try to settle her down, holding her as still as she could, while she darted her tongue into Tina.  Tina cried out, her body going rigid, as Bette’s tongue began to move inside of her.

    “God!”

    Tina’s fingers grabbed at the sheets, clenching as she felt her body begin to quiver.  As Bette removed her tongue and took Tina’s swollen clit into her mouth, it was certain Tina wouldn’t last long under such care.

    Bette flicked her tongue back and forth, sensing Tina’s orgasm approaching, and easily slid two fingers deep inside of her wife.  Tina’s inside walls clamped down on Bette’s fingers as her body fell over the edge and shook from her release.

    Bette stopped only when Tina’s hand found her hair and pulled to signal her that she couldn’t stand anymore contact on her clit.  Bette rested her cheek against one of Tina’s soaked thighs, placing kisses on it as she watched Tina regain some of her composure.

    “I love you,” Tina said as she eyes closed and her fingers stilled in Bette’s hair.

    Her breathing evened out and her body relaxed completely.  Bette smiled knowing that Tina was completely satisfied, and now enjoying much-needed and earned rest.  Bette traced a pattern on Tina’s other thigh, thinking of how appropriate it was that they make love given what they were about to tackle.

    Bette allowed herself a few more moments of contact with Tina before slowly rising to her feet.  She covered Tina’s naked body with a blanket and shut the blinds to block out anything that would awaken Tina.

    “I love you more than you know,” Bette whispered as she placed a gentle kiss on Tina’s forehead.  Slipping on a robe, Bette padded quietly down the hall to her desk, grabbing a notepad and pen before returning to the bedroom.  Settling back on the bed next to Tina, she pulled her knees up, resting the notepad against them.  Glancing over at Tina, she gently brushed a strand of hair back from her face before returning her attention to the notepad before her.  Recalling the notes Tina had typed on her computer earlier, Bette began to jot an outline.  “You here beside me and the scotch is enough courage for me to write this scene, so you can rest.”

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    3. Thank you for this chapter. Now I have something to hold on to until tomorrow night…LOL! Oh, did I mention that this chapter is sizzling hot? But then again, it’s you we’re talking about so I’m not expecting anything less.

    10. Woah. Loved this one..and not just because it had a great sex scene in it. I really showed how much Bette had changed since S1.. in positive ways. Also, it showed Tina really acknowledging those changes. Their connection in this chapter was really beautiful. Thanks for helping us get through one more night. Hopefully we will have a rash of inspired writers for next week.

    13. Thank you, that was mind blowing beautiful chapter I loved it, thanks for taking the time to write such a one I hope everything turns out to be like you imagined it to be.LOVE

    14. Now that is true love. As I was reading this chapter it dawned on me that they had not made love in the bedroom since that night. Then as I continued to read you mentioned that issue. I am glad that they reconnected in their bedroom and were able to work through most of what had taken place that one night several years earlier. Awesome chapter.

    15. heyyyyyyyyyyy pokey..IM GUMBYYYY DAMMITTT!!LOL Thanks for your post, i need some guidance in this writing business…s you know how to reach me..as for Dr. Jaspercat..i might kill her off LMAO

    16. That was AMAZING! It was sizzling hot and loving! I am so happy that Bette and Tina have truly found a way to reconnect through all the terrible memories and not self-destruct. Bette is SHOWING Tina how truly important she is in Bette’s life and it is beautiful to read. I am looking forward to more.

    19. OH. MY. GOD. That was… I can’t find the word because right now, “awesome” seems like a gross understatement. I felt close to passing out just reading this chap. I really love the ending too, it’s so sweet and heartwarming. Thank you for posting this. I cant wait for tomorrow either. Hope you’ll post the next one soon.

    21. Thank you, Gumby, I love your stories..And thanks for NC chapter, really beautiful. I am also very excited, over-excited becouse of coming E06, and your fanfic will help me to survive )

    25. I love what Bette is doing for Tina…, you know in both senses ;o) Fab chapter and I too am sooo excited about seeing tonights episode (tomorrow) how very handy that I have a day off work to watch it downloading!

    26. as i tell you often you – you are an amazing talent – right up there with Seahurst and JKS and there can be no bigger compliment for me. good luck in everything you do sweetie — thanks for the last email. its not easy as we both know xx

    31. Wow Gumby, that was an awesomely beautiful and loving chapter. With Bette wanting to help Tina with the rewrite of the most tragic part of their breakup on the night of Provocations shows how much Bette has changed and how the still loves Tina so very much. They have managed to experience all the horrors a relationship or marriage could possibly and still manage to love each other beyond belief. You have portrayed those feelings most eloquently. Like everyone else I can hardly wait for tonight’s episode. I hope they don’t disappoint us. In your writings regarding “our girls,” you have never disappointed us. So happy that you love our girls but you also show the negative elements in a relationship but you never fail to show us how those things can be overcome with love, understanding, and respect for the other person which is so important. In short I loved this chapter and the story completely. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. PPS

    36. thank you so much for your wonderful writing. As I was reading this agian, after last nights epi, I was thinking of Alice’s statement, ..”sometimes love is not enough”. That can be true, but if you want to rebuild again, what is a better foundation to start with? I love how this comes through your story, yeah it will be hard, but they have a true and awesome love, that will get them through. When Tina asks to be f@#%ked, and Bette says no I’ll make love to you..to me that showed me, the true depth of their love. Thanks, you rock…PPS

    37. Hey Gumby, Wow wee Bow wee. I am stunned and entranced by these latest developments. Bette and Tina making new memories to extinguish the horrors of the past was so realistic and adorable. The passion between these gals is intense as the liqor freed them both of some of their earth inhibitions. There was real tenderness and love between them. The past cannot be forgotten but closure with its events may be acheived. This scene showed how. Gumby, your talent and gift for creating powerful moments was perfectly exhibited here. Thank you so much for this inspiring chapter. I so hope that this is the next step along the route to full reconciliation for my favorite couple. Bette and Tina so belong together. Many, many thanks for this delicious drama. Your Loyal Fan.

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