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    Hotel California #23 Touch Tones

    Story written on October 13, 2015 by Blackbird.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=92660
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    On the other side of the bare room are dirt smeared windows, and through them I can make out a long trail of streetlights. Their perspective puts me on the first floor, an easy jump if I could find something – anything to break the windows with – but they’re very high, and finding nothing

    On the other side of the bare room are dirt smeared windows, and through them I can make out a long trail of streetlights. Their perspective puts me on the first floor, an easy jump if I could find something – anything to break the windows with – but they’re very high, and finding nothing I run out of time.

    The Gold-tooth man enters, and I ask for food and water, and plead with him not to tie my hands behind my back for the night. He squints at me through the smoke of his cigarette and ties my feet to the chair, my sore arms behind me, and the door slams and locks behind him.

    Yet another grievance.  Bad Room Service.

    Tina serious blue shirt cropped tight

    The next morning –

    The Planet – Tina

    Angelica runs to meet her grandmother, and Mary catches her in the folds of her dress, and looking back at me – as her taxi from the airport pulls away – our eyes lock across a shaky chasm of worry.

    ”Have you slept at all?” Mary’s hand touches my cheek.

    I roll her small bag toward the door. ”Surely, we’ll get some news today.  People don’t just vanish.”

    ”Actually, they can and they do. But I don’t think that’s what’s happened here.”

    The catch on my self control weakens.  ”Then, please, tell me what has happened! We’ve been on the phone with everyone we can think of.”

    ”Finding out if the government scooped her up is the first thing I intend to rule out.”

    ”But why would they?!” I cry, a little more out of control.  ”Mary, when I tell you who we’ve called . . .”

    She interrupts me. ”I know people that you never want to meet in your lifetime! Tell me what you do know, and I’ll do my thing.”

    shebeast the next morning

    Whereabouts Unknown – Bette

    ”You look like you slept well. Any chance you brought coffee?” I hide my fear from the SheBeast.

    She slaps me letting me know today, I’m going without. A photographer enters the room and drops his gear on a table. ”Is she ready?” He asks.

    ”Not yet. The boss wants her bloody for the pictures.”

    ”I’m leaving while you do that.” He taps out a smoke, while she smacks me harder.

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    3. Via email to me –

      It was perfect for the desperation of Denbo. I didn’t give her character enough credit for being that smart. You did perfectly as your story kept me on the edge the whole time I read it. Everything was wonderful: the storyline, the timing, the identity, everything. Yes, You have Tina on the edge perfectly as well. Hopefully this will allow her to see and appreciate the relationship she has with Bette with no more questions asked.
      I loved that Billy stepped in with what’s really happening on the nightclub front and with the help of Alice and Penny will take Denbo’s plans/plot and blow it out of the water. Everything will backfire on her and Kit will be saved as will Bette.
      You totally caught me off-guard with where you took the story. I’m so impressed. I’m loving every morsel of this and the past few chapters.
      Excellent write my friend!
      Bearski

    4. Via email to me from hicys…

      Hey this is so good, nicely written, intense and emotional, I hope in the next chapters the She Bar’s girls will be expelled from the sight, Bette and Tina marry and they have new adventures. Very well done

    8. Brilliant writing as always, you are truly in a league of your own. Please don’t make us wait any longer for the next chapter. I cannot get enough of your writing so I find myself going back and rereading your stories over and over much like a favorite book that you fall in love with more each time you go back to it. I would encourage everyone following this site to read everything you have written.
      Marianne

    9. Blackbird are you coming back soon? I’ve been checking daily, and I’m doing my very best to be patient. It’s getting harder and harder. Love, love, love your writing.

    10. Please blackbird it’s going on 3 weeks and not a peep from you. I know you don’t want to leave us hanging like this so please update this weekend. Missing your story so much.

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