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How Hard Can it Be – Part 3a
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Great. Are you free in an hour? We could meet at the Planet.
No! Dana said too quickly. I mean. It might be better ifI made you coffee. Dana had spoken too soon in her panic. She didnt want to meet Lara at the Planet. There was a chance that they would run into Alice. And even though Alice had been the one to tell her that she should see Lara, the last thing that she wanted to do was hurt Als feelings. Um, what I meant to say was, Dana began slowly. We should meet at the park and I should bring you coffee. Because the park is moreoutside. She finished lamely not wanting to say that she was hiding from Alice.
Lara chuckled again. Dana, I get it. You dont want to run into Alice. The park is fine. Ill see you in an hour then?
Yeah, in an hour. Dana said relieved to get off the phone. Dana clicked off her cordless phone and looked at it sitting in her lap. She told you to do it. Dana said to the guilty feelings that were starting to rise in her head. Dana shook her head out. Besides, its just coffee, she thought to herself as she rolled out of bed and headed toward the shower.
Alice let her eyes flutter open as she realized that whatever she was sleeping on was not her own bed. She opened her eyes to see Mark standing over her holding out two cups. I uh, bought coffee. He said tentatively as he held out a cup to Alice.
Alice slowly pulled her feet up toward herself and sat up to some extent to take the coffee and make room for Mark to sit down at her feet. Thank you. Alice raised the cup to her mouth and drank. What time is it?
Its like eleven, I was just coming out to wake you up. Mark smiled as Alice dropped her head back onto the couch. You fell asleep during the movie last night. Me and Jenny decided not to wake you.
Wow, thank you. I feel like I havent slept in days. Alice took another sip of the coffee.
So feel like sharing? Mark asked over his coffee cup.
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I like snickerdoodles LOL
nice update can’t wait to see where this is going. And I’m on carmens side about mark I don’t understand why they just forgave him?? Anyways, I though maybe hella was having sex in her office and that’s why she didn’t want to see Tina, guess I was wrong.
hey! glad u liked my suggestion! the alice/mark friendship fits in so well, i always thought they clicked. keep it up!
This is brilliant!!!5 stars, you write awesome Sharmen!!
i hate Helena..but who wouldnt???..great chapter post soon please
Sharmen interaction is so sincere. I too wondered about forgiving Mark so easily. Just thought it was ones of IC’s need to appease the straight viewers. But he was such a creep that I hated him anyway. It’s as if he raped the women; yet they continually allow him to interact with them… Go figure!
Tina family is coming huh! That’s going to be interesting.
(Random thought) Hey I was thinking that maybe IC should expound on Kit’s character by dwelling in her past and her child’s eventual removal from her custody, then their reunion at Melvin’s funeral and their relationship thereafter. I love the Kit character particularly her and Bette’s relationship in Season 2. We need more from her.
where’s my cookie for reading ur story
okay this comment is better late than never… i LOVE the way you write Mark – and his interaction with Alice in this story. i also love how you write dana. (everybody for that matter, but dana is hard to get and you do it so well.)