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I Fall Behind pt.18
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”You know what Alice? You’re right. We should
probably wait until dinner is at least served…” Bette looked down at
her shoes. Then, for the second time that week, she kicked them off,
“… but we’re not going to. Let’s go Alice, I’ve got a woman to woo.”
And convince that I’m not a total ***** all the time, Bette silently
added.
”Oh wow Bette! You’ve grown balls!” Alice exclaimed.
They finally spotted a valet attendant and flagged him over. A few
minutes later, Bette’s Saab squealed to a stop in front of them.
”Hey easy there buddy!” Bette snatched the keys from the valet’s hand. “This isn’t the Indy 500!”
”Come on Bette! Stop ***** around. Get in the car!”
Bette jumped into the Saab and carefully eased down
the driveway. Alice looked at her incredulously. “Don’t you want to go
a little faster?”
Bette nodded but kept the speed at 30. “Don’t worry
Alice, I know what I’m doing. Studies have shown that more people get
into accidents when they’re rushing than when they’re not.”
”Duh, genius!”
”Shut up. People who drive faster have less
probability to reach their destinations. I would rather drive at a
sensible speed and get to Tina’s house, than drive fast and never get
there.”
Alice’s mouth fell open but she wisely kept silent.
Okay Bette, she thought, find refuge in your geekiness for now. You’re
gonna need all the courage you can muster later on when you eat crow.
Alice knew she probably shouldn’t feel gleeful, but she has never seen
Bette do anything this brave. Crazy, she’s seen a lot of. But never
brave. Alice could’ve applauded if she wasn’t sure that Bette would
swerve at the sudden sound.
Bette kept her eyes trained on the light-speckled
road in front of her. What was she doing? She was driving at a
reasonable speed to the home of a woman she shouldn’t be seeing
anymore, to apologize for something she felt she was justified to do.
”Alice, am I doing the right thing?” Bette asked
quietly. Her hands were tight on the steering wheel and Alice could see
how her knuckles had turned white.
Alice thought for a moment what to say to her
friend. She allowed the sight of trees whizzing by to make her a little
bit dizzy. Finally, when she thought Bette was going to explode from
sheer anxiety, she started laughing.
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You know 7… last night when i read the cha[ter before and it was tina hanson… i laughed out loud…you got me… but i could have kissed you… i couldn’t leave a comment i was at work… love this story… now lets see just how far bette is going to take this… no turning back … please continue
fergz – baby girl, im just behind you. my head is a little foggy. but had a hell of a good time last night, thanks.*waves* at ally and b&tf.honey, you are killing me. a gps on her ass. i hurt myself with that one. crazy but never brave. thats funny actually. cuz my son was crazy and he was one of the bravest people i knew. so i think i got it being a hero. you leave me wanting more each and everytime you post. so more please. thanks.
They’re finally together! Thanks for a funny and romantic chapter and a great start to my day.
Yea to Bette for finding the courage to humble herself before Tina. And yea to Tina for being gracious enough to accept Bette’s apology. I love this corny side of Bette as much as I love this story! :)
It’s 7PM. Do you know where your Bette and Tina are? I’m going to go read this story and find out. BRB…
YES YES YES Bette finally has given me a reason to pump my fists in the air! Way to go 7 and Bette fucking awesome!I have just one question for you. Doesn’t that feel freaking marvelous? Maybe a little angst but a whole lot of love. Damn the relief after reading this cha[ter feels almost orgasmic.
Hey there 7 !! :DI am loving ur story so much . Its totally awesome and so fresh . I love this new Tibette . Good job and keep it up :D I am glad that Bette finally went to find Tina . I can’t wait for the next chapters , can’t wait to see how the story unfolds . post sooooooon yea :) Thanx :D
I feel like rejoicing! I love it when the hero gets the girl – gets the girl that she loves and ‘gets’ (understands and accepts) herself in the process as well. Love (of self and of the other) IS everything, isn’t it? This is a joyful chapter for a Sunday! Thanks!
Good chapter. Glad Bette fond Tina and so cute about the flowers. Ok now let see what’s Bette gonna tell Tina about the story. Post soon please, thanks!
good story.hurry and post next chapter
Wild and oh so funny. Endearing also comes to mind. They belong together. Thanks for the post.
it’s about time!!!!!!!!!! now the work begins bette let alice drive her car!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a good chapter, I have a feeling the drama isn’t over with Helena lurking in the background. Good Job.
What a great, entertaining story. I love it, can’t wait for the next update. I”m so proud of Tina. And Bette.
Ohmigod that was awesome!!! SOOOOO cute and sweet. Please post again soon. :)
Well that was the right mix of cute and funny !
you made my heart feel good this morning. thank you for the post and please give us more soon. and I adore Paul and good choice of song. albeez..honey..how are you feeling this morning?
Now I am happy, B&T are finally where they belong—together. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I really love your story. Please continue and post soon!
HA HA HA HA OMG! Whoa! LMAO! with Bette try to sing and Alice playing an air guitar it’s Amazing and it’s really funny! crack ME so much LOL! Thanks you Whoa! Your a great writer I love the way pot some funny and Love story it’s Priceless Thanks 7PM Please continue Thanks!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! finally..now they will start fresh and new..cant wait for more thanks :o)
Yes, finally, this was great, love it. Please post again soon.
lovely 7 lets c how much lying down they do
lovin’ this story. i had to play catch up today with everything of yours. and wow. amazing. love the way you write and you’re so fuuunnnyy!!! i love it! can’t wait for the next one!!!!
Love this story. Can’t wait for more. Please post soon.
and the morning is bright and lovely today, i’m singing in my heart and out loud, scaring all the neigbors, but this chapter was great and amazing and just awesome…you’re my hero 7 ;)
This is such a sweet and goofy story! I love it.
Having great fun reading the climb you have taken us on. Can’t wait to read the new heights Bette will scale.