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I Fall Behind pt.18
Bette spared her a quick confused look. Seeing Alice
convulsing with laughter brought out a giggle or two of her own. Her
shoulders started to shake. Then she let out full-throated gut-deep
laughter that brought tears to her eyes and made her belly cramp. She
quickly pulled over and stopped, allowing laughter to take her over.
She and Alice giggled and guffawed and chuckled and laughed long and
hard.
After a few minutes, the cleansing laughter slowly
died down. Bette let out some left-over giggles and Alice wiped at her
eyes.
”C-can you believe this?” Bette sputtered. “Can you believe what I’m doing? Oh God!”
Alice smiled fondly at Bette and patted her
shoulder. “It’s the most natural thing in the world, Bette. You’re
chasing after the woman you lo-, like. All of us have done it, and all
of us ever will.”
Bette let out a final chuckle and let out a huge
sigh. “You’re right Alice. This feels natural… It feels right. Oh my
God for the first time I know how it feels when something’s right.”
Bette was smiling so hard her cheeks hurt. “I can’t believe this
feeling… Alice, can you believe it?!”
”What I won’t be able to believe is if we get there
and we’ve just missed Tina coz you’re in the middle of nowhere being
poetic. Let’s get our asses moving!”
”Oh God you’re right. We’re moving, right now! I’m
starting the car right now… Pulling into the street right now…
accelerating right now…” Bette was so excited that Alice didn’t have
the heart to shush her.
******
An hour later, Bette and Tina were driving around a sleepy neighborhood, cursing loudly.
“***** Bette! Why can’t you follow directions?! I
told you not to turn left at that… that part back there…”
“Alice Goddammit! You SAID you knew how to get to Tina’s street!”
“How was I to know there were TWO streets by that
name?! Who does that anyway? Names a street for another street?! How
fucked up is that?!”
“Alice!” Bette growled. “I’m stopping the car.
You’re gonna get out and knock on that front door. Then you’re gonna
ask for directions.”
“Are you ***** insane?! What if a serial killer
comes to the door?! It’s 10 in the evening in this town’s version of
suburbia! Look around you Bette, do you see any signs of life?!”
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(74 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
You know 7… last night when i read the cha[ter before and it was tina hanson… i laughed out loud…you got me… but i could have kissed you… i couldn’t leave a comment i was at work… love this story… now lets see just how far bette is going to take this… no turning back … please continue
fergz – baby girl, im just behind you. my head is a little foggy. but had a hell of a good time last night, thanks.*waves* at ally and b&tf.honey, you are killing me. a gps on her ass. i hurt myself with that one. crazy but never brave. thats funny actually. cuz my son was crazy and he was one of the bravest people i knew. so i think i got it being a hero. you leave me wanting more each and everytime you post. so more please. thanks.
They’re finally together! Thanks for a funny and romantic chapter and a great start to my day.
Yea to Bette for finding the courage to humble herself before Tina. And yea to Tina for being gracious enough to accept Bette’s apology. I love this corny side of Bette as much as I love this story! :)
It’s 7PM. Do you know where your Bette and Tina are? I’m going to go read this story and find out. BRB…
YES YES YES Bette finally has given me a reason to pump my fists in the air! Way to go 7 and Bette fucking awesome!I have just one question for you. Doesn’t that feel freaking marvelous? Maybe a little angst but a whole lot of love. Damn the relief after reading this cha[ter feels almost orgasmic.
Hey there 7 !! :DI am loving ur story so much . Its totally awesome and so fresh . I love this new Tibette . Good job and keep it up :D I am glad that Bette finally went to find Tina . I can’t wait for the next chapters , can’t wait to see how the story unfolds . post sooooooon yea :) Thanx :D
I feel like rejoicing! I love it when the hero gets the girl – gets the girl that she loves and ‘gets’ (understands and accepts) herself in the process as well. Love (of self and of the other) IS everything, isn’t it? This is a joyful chapter for a Sunday! Thanks!
Good chapter. Glad Bette fond Tina and so cute about the flowers. Ok now let see what’s Bette gonna tell Tina about the story. Post soon please, thanks!
good story.hurry and post next chapter
Wild and oh so funny. Endearing also comes to mind. They belong together. Thanks for the post.
it’s about time!!!!!!!!!! now the work begins bette let alice drive her car!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a good chapter, I have a feeling the drama isn’t over with Helena lurking in the background. Good Job.
What a great, entertaining story. I love it, can’t wait for the next update. I”m so proud of Tina. And Bette.
Ohmigod that was awesome!!! SOOOOO cute and sweet. Please post again soon. :)
Well that was the right mix of cute and funny !
you made my heart feel good this morning. thank you for the post and please give us more soon. and I adore Paul and good choice of song. albeez..honey..how are you feeling this morning?
Now I am happy, B&T are finally where they belong—together. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I really love your story. Please continue and post soon!
HA HA HA HA OMG! Whoa! LMAO! with Bette try to sing and Alice playing an air guitar it’s Amazing and it’s really funny! crack ME so much LOL! Thanks you Whoa! Your a great writer I love the way pot some funny and Love story it’s Priceless Thanks 7PM Please continue Thanks!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! finally..now they will start fresh and new..cant wait for more thanks :o)
Yes, finally, this was great, love it. Please post again soon.
lovely 7 lets c how much lying down they do
lovin’ this story. i had to play catch up today with everything of yours. and wow. amazing. love the way you write and you’re so fuuunnnyy!!! i love it! can’t wait for the next one!!!!
Love this story. Can’t wait for more. Please post soon.
and the morning is bright and lovely today, i’m singing in my heart and out loud, scaring all the neigbors, but this chapter was great and amazing and just awesome…you’re my hero 7 ;)
This is such a sweet and goofy story! I love it.
Having great fun reading the climb you have taken us on. Can’t wait to read the new heights Bette will scale.