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I Fall Behind pt.30
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“Hi.” Tina murmured, staring deeply into Bette’s beautiful liquid eyes.
“Hi there gorgeous.” Bette answered in a cartoony voice. Tina giggled.
“What’s going to happen Tina? With us?” Bette said in a more serious tone.
Tina’s eyes travelled down to Bette’s soft lips and
sighed. “I’ve got something on my mind I want to happen, but if you
want to get to work on time, it can’t happen.” She smiled ruefully.
“I mean, not now. In the future. What will happen in the future?”
“I knew what you meant, love. But I don’t have
psychic powers to see into the future. I can only tell you what I wish
for…” Tina cupped her hands around Bette’s hips and pulled her close.
Belly to belly, thighs to thighs, Tina and Bette stood beside the
kitchen counter.
“What’s that?” Bette asked after a beat.
“I hope life treats you kind…and I hope you have
all you’ve dreamed of…. and I wish to you, joy and happiness… but
above all this, I wish you love……”
Tina stopped her litany and with a glimmer in her
eye, burst out into the Whitney Houston classic refrain, “And I….
will always…. love you…!”
Bette rolled her eyes but coulnd’t stop laughing.
“C’mon Tina, I was being serious.” She said after her laughter finally
died down.
“So was I!” Tina responded after her own laughter
faded. “Bette, we’re not kids. We know how relationships tend to go
into strange unpredictable places… So why put restrictions if they’ll
only be broken one day?”
“Are you saying you want to date other people?” Bette asked fearfully.
“Are you crazy?! Of course I don’t want to date
other people. And if you’re thinking of dating other people…” Tina
narrowed her eyes dramatically.
“I did tell you I was crazy right?”
“Yeah. You also told me that when you die, you’d want your ashes to be pressed into a diamond.”
“No, I want my ashes to be converted into a diamond.”
“Okay. So I better fatten you up then. I want one of those blinding huge stones out of you.”
“You mean you’re still going to be with me up until the day I die?”
Tina tilted her head to the side and regarded Bette
curiously. “Honey, what part of always didn’t you understand?”
Bette laughed happily and hugged Tina tight. She
wondered how someone she’d known for only about a week could have
turned her life around so dramatically. It couldn’t be real, could it?
Was it real? Was Tina for real?
“Tina,” Bette gulped hard as she tried to form the question. “Don’t you think we’re moving too fast?”
Tina’s arms fell from around Bette. “What are you saying?”
“Nothing! Nothing! I’m not saying anything!” Bette grabbed Tina’s arms and put them back around her.
“Are you sure? Coz we should talk about it if something’s bothering you…”
“Not now, Tina. Can’t we just be here together? You and me. Just you. Just me. Being just us?”
Tina smiled gently and hugged Bette close,, inhaling
the beloved scent and treasuring the delicious crush of their bodies
together.
“Whatever happens, this is.” Tina recited softly into Bette’s ear.
Bette felt her knees weaken and thought, “This woman
is amazing… What a perfect time for a quote from Rich… God, I love
you Tina.”
“I love you Tina.” Bette murmured.
“You know I love you too, Bette.”Tina murmured back.
“Maybe you should get in the shower now. It’s getting late… and I
think I’ll join you…”
“Come on baby, last one in is a giant turtle!” Bette
rushed to the bathroom, followed closely by a laughing Tina.
The End for now :)
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WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you can’t be done!!!!!!!!!!!
First, let me just say that when I realized Tina was reciting “I Will Always Love You,” I was thinking of Dolly Parton singing it to Burt Reynolds in “Best Little Whorehouse in Texas.” While a sad moment, it’s much nicer than Whitney’s version which was full of catterwalling. *ducks to avoid being hit by flying objects* Now, at first I was sad that this was the last chapter, but we got a happy ending without craploads of drama in the process. Even though it would mean pairing Bette with Candyass, I’d like to see a prequel. That way we can see what events caused Bette to basically become an insecure introvert. And then of course a sequel would be nice, maybe even 10 or 20 years into the future. Oh and I never mentioned this earlier, but when Tina said she was from West Virginia I almost fell outta my chair because I live there. And yes, I wear shoes. ;)
I loved this.Thanks for writing. and post something soon. thanks
Great ending to a very cool story. I hope u do come back to continue at some point. Have a great Holiday.
What a lovely chapter! What a wonderful story! Thank you very much for sharing the story with us. Thanks.
Ok guys lets jam the inbox with requests for a sequel as well as stand alone’s…give us anything and we’ll read…Thankyou for this story, it’s one of those reread ones!!!!
ok take your break… but come back with the sequel… you will be missed
Wonderful story i hope you will consider a sequel!!!
WAAHH!! I’m really really gonna miss this story. Please come up with some sequels soon.
Great story..Please write another you are very talented. Thanks for taking the time
I’m officially requesting a sequel…pretty please? Great story, especially your unique take on the characters!
Well i can accept the end…but just for now..it was sweet it was sexy it was romantc.so thanks for shareing it with us and really looking forward to reading more from you…
I love this story, don’t be away for too long
well damn. but it has been great. thanks and will look forward to more.
I loved this story. Sad to see it end but great to see it end on such a happy note. Thank you for writing it!!!! :D
I’m sad too. But they’ll be back don’t worry! Sing no sad songs for them :)
FANtastic :D thx cant wait til u get ur creative juices back and delight us with another story :D
i am so in love with your story. pls do come back with something..a prequel, sequel..whatever..just pls continue..its been a wonderful journey=)
Damn that was wonderful and amazing, they are so cute and sweet and lovely and funny, like when Tina sing, so cute. Ok hope you post the new story soon, its sad to see the story ending like this but happy that at the end they happy. Thank you!
Really love this story. So if you decide to revisit it then I’ll be here to enjoy the adventure yet again. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to your other stories. Happy holidays.
What a treat! The characters and depiction made were uniquely captivating – which is to say your gift of weaving words together is nothing short of magical. Looking forward to more. Thanks!
this was absolutely great! I loved it from beg to end. you must write another story love. as stated above a prequel or sequel would be nice. just please give us more of your talent. until next time….
Love is real, real is love,…Love is feeling, feeling love,…Love is wanting to be loved…Love is touch, touch is love,…Love is reaching, reaching love,…Love is asking to be loved…Love is you,You and me,…Love is knowing,We can be…Love is free, free is love,…Love is living, living love,…Love is needing to be loved… (John Lennon) Thank you.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, 7PM!
OH NOOOO! Not the end!!
Oh boy what a story. I just read it from beginning to end in one go when I should really have been doing “important things”. Oh well I still think I spent my time better by reading! Loved your premise from the beginning, really appreciate your style, enjoyed your vocab a little too much and am still basking in the fuzzy feeling you’ve left me with. Thank you so very much.
This was a great story and i hope to see you back with a sequel or another story.
I loved your story and I hope that one day you will do a sequel. In the meantime, I will be looking and will read anything else you write. You are a great writer. Thanks for sharing.
I love this story! Thanks for writing it!
i absolutely adore this story, so please come back with sequel, trequel, prequel, whatever, or just a stand alone…i’ll be patiently waiting :)
Really enjoyed your story, please continue to write. Look forward to more.
Wonderful story.
thanks so much for blessing us with your awesome writing! I do hope that you’ll continue writing:) keep writing. I’ll be reading.
I have loved this story so much. I hope you will do a sequel? please? Or if not writing another tibette story lol I’ll be reading
B&TF took the words right out of my… keyboard. Thanks for writing it, 7PM!
I absolutely adored this story! Thank you for creating these two wonderful…very different characters, that truly do fit together so well. I can’t wait for whatever you choose to write next. Again…thanks!!!
This story was fantastic from the first chapter until the last. This was a real love story. Please come back soon.
Loved it from the start – great twist for the B&T beginnings.
I love this story and strongly encourage you to continue it using any periods of time or as stand alones. I enjoyed your unique approach to the characters and look forward to reading anything you feel inspired to share.
this has been lovely — i may even go and read it all from the start. thanks
Awesome. Really enjoyed the story. You made both characters really work. I’d like to see what Tina decides to do in the future, if you feel like it, that is.
sequel..!!!!!!!!! amazing story..love.it!!
throughly enjoyable. Looking forward to your other stories.
GREAT JOB..I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY..WHEN YOU CAN BRING IT BACK..THANKS
great story.
Man…This is “Freaking Amazing!”…. Can’t put it down till i get to the last chap… Thank you for this..Thou I’m waiting for BnT to allow us to have a peek into their lives again?..