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“Why, Tina? Why?!”
”Bette, you know that sometimes things don’t work out the way we want them to.”
”But it’s cruel! It’s not fair…”
”Life’s not fair.”
”But it’s not life! It’s a movie!”
”Exactly.”
Bette and Tina were on the couch in their home.
Bette was frowning at Tina while Tina munched on a mouthful of popcorn.
The credits rolled in the TV screen, accompanied by swelling theme
music.
”He didn’t have to die.”
”Maybe.” Tina shook her head slightly. She held out
her hand and tugged Bette by the arm back to the comfortable space
beside her. “It’s okay baby, it’s just a movie.”
”But those idiots didn’t have to kill him! They could’ve captured him and put him back where he belonged!”
”Yeah.” Tina suddenly smiled. “Hey Bette, remember
you said you wanted to talk about more ‘intellectual’ things? I have an
idea.”
Bette scowled when she remembered the argument that
happened not a week ago. She and Tina were lounging on the bed one
early evening. Bette had come from work and tossed some photographs on
the bed to start looking through them. Tina, home from community
college, dove into bed, messing up the pile. They’d laughed and
cuddled, and started looking through the photos together. Just as Bette
was extolling on the virtues of overcast lighting and following the
rule of threes, Tina had pounced on her.
”Tina… Tina, wait. I’m trying to say something here.”
”Go ahead, I’m listening…”
”No you’re not. And I can’t focus with your mouth right there…”
”You got a problem with my mouth baby?”
“No… Wait, Tina…” Bette put up her hands to put
some distance between them. “Listen, I think we should try to talk
about things, you know… some things that we usually don’t talk about.”
“What do you mean?”
“You know… like… art and stuff… more
intellectual stuff.” The minute the word ‘intellectual’ came out of
Bette’s mouth, she winced and widened her eyes, fearing the worst.
She got it. “Are you saying I’m stupid?!” Both of Tina’s eyebrows rose as far as they would go.
“All I’m saying is that once in a while, I feel like
I want to talk to someone who understands the things I say… I mean…
who at least listens… and doesn’t try to steer everything towards
*****…”
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funny and cute, but also sexy. Very nicely done.
haha, that’s so interesting. great try.
I nearly fell out of my chair laughing at Bette’s realization that Tina called the movie crap. Something tells me that this wouldn’t have taken place just a couple of weeks after they first met, but rather a few months. Bette seems less dorky and anxious than she did in “I Fall Behind.” Maybe the cause of that will be revealed in another stand-alone. This was definitely cute and hot as usual with these 2 ladies.
yeah! was over the moon seeing your post=) is this gonna be a sequel?..love the bette you’ve created..
Fabulous…your writing is absolutely fabulous!!! It’s smart, witty, fun, loving, sexy, smooth, and totally real. Truly, I love reading whatever you write. Thanks…now bring on the next stand alone, or another story…either way, I will be right here reading!
Does the fact that I had to go through 2 successive power failures to finish reading this tell you how much I enjoyed it. Reboot and rereboot. I’m with Tina. I’ll take Fay Wray and the furry doll anyday.
it’s utterly cute and funny, love your style and your writing, keep bringing more stand-alones…your post made me actually really happy :)
love the banters! i mean “I think hands-on demonstrations are more stimulating… Or hands-on stimulations are more demonstrating?” – just brilliant. you are awesome.
I love your characters. Nerdy neruotic Bette is funny and cute. I like how tina balances her out. More stories please!!!
cute
Thanks for posting, great at stand alone or chapters…I’ll take anything, your easy to read, great real life dialogue and banter..!!!!
I love the way you portray B&T in your stories. I will also read anything you write. Please do so soon!
intellectual sex…now that is fun!!! Thanks and bring us more soon
I love your stories, you write them so well
I like this start, more please!
They are so funny and so cute. Hope you bring more fun of Bette and Tina. Ok thanks!
7 girl – absolutely loved it. your dialogue was making me laugh. loved your writing. thanks.fergz – right behind you
Yay, back so quickly!!! Excellent, loved the ‘oral exam’ comment. Keep the story going please…..
OHHHH NOOOO! The end again? WHY? (And I’m asking in a totaly intellectual way!)
very cute! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
That was great and funny.
You’re Fun and Funny! Loved this. Thank you so very much for writing. My favorite line … “…. You’re all sarcastic and… scary. Please come back to bed, Tina. Please?”
really cute, and fun, I like these stand alones, they should be done more often. thanx!!!!!
LOL..~ awesome!
That was great….I like the way you first made me underestimate Tina and the you gave her a great comeback!!! I know it was a stand alone, but please….just a little follow-up about Tinas oral skills :o))
Really enjoyed that,nice to see your back!!! was that a once off or will we be seeing more!!
Yay! So cute and sweet and lovely…and sexy! Can otally identify with being turned on by intellectual discussions…I wish I could have those lectures from B&T!! Loved it. Can’t wait to read your other posts.