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    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT 34

    Story written on June 11, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    Cat & Mouse… Pt 2

    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT34

    Previously…

    Tina went inside to get towels for when the ‘children’ decided to stop playing in the pool, she was laughing to herself and shaking her head, happiness flooding through her seeing Bette in such a playful mood. Of all the people she had ever known, it was Bette who she would always guarantee could make her smile, make her laugh, it was the moments when they were alone, when they were playing and joking when they laughed the most, when they would lie holding their stomachs at the others goofiness, when Bette knew Tina was feeling down and she went all out to cheer her up, and she always did, she was the one who made her laugh till she ached all over, they hadn’t done that in a while and it saddened Tina that they had momentarily lost that humour between them, but seeing Bette jump into the pool with Alice, Tina knew that her playful side was returning. It only made her realise how low Bette’s mood and demeanor had gotten with the things that had happened between them in recent weeks and maybe months.

    As she made her way back outside with her arms wrapped around the big fluffy towels she could feel the lightness of the weekend returning, the earlier upset put to one side, they were going to enjoy their evening with their friends.

    She stepped out on to the deck and looked up; it was then that her jaw dropped at the very same moment as the towels plummeted from her arms, her mouth quietly uttering the words that her mind was trying to formulate.

    "Oh… my… fucking…god…"

    ………………………………………………………………………………..

    Bette kept her eye on the doors when she had seen Tina go inside, she knew for a fact that she would come out with towels in her arms, and she knew that because it would be an automatic thought for Tina to look after them, because she would worry they might catch a cold, just because it was what Tina would do, just because…

    Bette swam to the steps as she saw the shadowy figure walk toward the French doors, as soon as she knew Tina was about to step out she got ready for what she hoped would be a little something to create a familiar stirring deep within her gorgeous blonde partner, something she unconsciously did once in their past while on holiday, something that had caused Tina to systematically drag Bette back to their hotel room without rhyme or reason and make love to her like she had never before, with complete and utter abandon, the first time Tina had silently demanded full and complete control.

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    3. What’s cool is the fanfic writers that comment to each other.It’s the ultimate compliment. It’s similar to great chefs eating in the restaurant of other great chefs. Jo…no one writes erotic stories like you do. It can be NC-17+ and they’re not cheesy or boring just hot and juicy. Keep’em coming.

    8. Oh god, there is that tape from the gallery (my favorite scene, of course all of them are my favorite). I do need a copy of that tape. Alice almost got her self killed if she did not stop messing with Bette and Tina about that tape. This was so erotic from the very beginning of this chapter actually from the beginning of this entire story. And to think that I was having a bad day. This chapter has brightened my evening considerably. Thanks to your gf for allowing you to finish the chapter.

    10. Great chapter! I think it’s safe to say that they both enjoyed the little cat & mouse game with each other – I know I certainly did. Please post again soon.

    14. Mercy, mercy, mercy, Jobadge. That was a great chapter and Alice will always be Alice. Tina and Bette are so hot they are stripping the lacquer off the furniture.

    17. This chapter was sexcellent, um, excellent. At this exact moment I’m praying for some table top clearing sex. Either way, I know the next chapter will be sextacular, um, spectacular.

    20. Well I FINALLY got all caught up with this story. It is one of the HOTTEST things I’ve read here. From the poolside up to the rose petals, each enounter has left me pretty much breathless. Excellent job in that department. I had forgotten all about the CAC security tape. LOL I thought, “Oh Lord there’s gonna be a big blowout argument!” Glad to see I was wrong.

    21. Hey Jo… lets make a deal… i make copies of my tapes of bette and tina and you make copies of yours… so fucking HOT… loving this… and alice you were so right… please the night is young…continue

    24. Sometimes in old movies from the 40s you’ll see some swank apartment or nightclub that has padded leather doors. I was thinking the girls might want to invest in one. More comfort, more mystery. On to the rose petals redux.

    25. Damn those two are hot. Great job with the writing. What happend to this B&T, you know the ones we fell in love with, the ones that can’t keep their hands off each other. Can we get copies of the videos?

    26. excellent! the wait is worthy! i don’t know how can they handled to stayed all the afternoon without touching so much just teasing! Alice is a singular person! i can’t wait for the next! but i hope Tina will continue trust Bette.

    27. OMG what a post!!!! Jo you’re such a tease….and what about that rating???? That was not a NC-17 post and you know it LOL!!!!!! But what a hot and amazing post anyway, I loved it and I want…no I demand two copies of Potard Porn from one twin to the other :o)) Post soon, take care mate….and congrats on Englands victory.

    28. What an excellent chapter!…your on some mighty roll here with this….Again,like the last one, it had everything…Fun..Sexy…Hot…. Beautifully written….with descriptions second to none!…Always the best hun..

    30. okay – so you and I are great mates — even though we have never actually spoken — and i know I am biased about your writing but that was simply the best thing i have ever read on this site. your command of words, your style, the humour and the characterisation all scream that this is a classic piece of fan fiction. You are a truly brilliant writer and i am honoured that we are friends. thank you for sharing your talent and i could hug your woman for allowing you to write. Maybe Jill and Anna could set up some sort of support group for abandoned partners of FF writers ???Have i mentioned that this was brilliant yet ?

    34. I simply had to comment again. I reread this story from the its beginning. Your writing has evolved. It was excellent from the get-go but now it is just fucking amazing. Every aspect is fucking amazing. I totally agree with ally.

    35. I love your stories ! All the details that you include and of course the ” teasing” that goes on between Bette and Tina is just “HOT!” I hope you will post the next chapter soon.

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