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    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT 34

    Story written on June 11, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    Cat & Mouse… Pt 2

    Tina felt her mouth go dry as she tried to swallow, her heart began to beat uncontrollably as the thudding became apparent in her ears as well as her chest, the noise around her becoming muffled as she felt the intensity overtake her body and settle at her core.

    Bette took the next step, Tina watched, Bette’s tee shirt clinging to her breasts as the water slowly trickled down her body, from her hair, over the curves of her face, Tina’s eyes followed the invisible path downward, noticing how the cotton material became transpicuous, the obvious curve of her breasts clear through the material, the coolness of the water causing her nipples to obviously protrude and stand to attention under the direct gaze of Tina’s eyes, the transparency of the material giving the delicious vista of the deep roseate shadow beneath.

    Tina visibly shuddered at the sight as Bette made a further step, the jeans coming into view as the denim clung to her body, the water now running speedily from her, droplets hitting the water around her, momentarily splashing as she made her exit. Tina swallowed hard, her mind recalling a similar event in their past, as Bette lent forward, the soaking wet hair following suit.

    Tina braced herself for the oncoming vision as Bette brought her head swiftly back, her hair following the course as it arced above her, the water droplets spraying the air as her face now looked toward the sky.

    Bette stepped clear of the pool, turning to gaze into Tina’s eyes, the distance between them nothing as they locked. Bette gave a small smile, seeing that Tina was visibly shaken, standing stock still, her hands hanging by her sides with the towels at her feet, she felt suddenly guilty for playing the game, seeing how Tina looked, but then, she saw the merest glint of recognition that Tina had remembered the day of their holiday, the day she had also stepped out of the pool, fully clothed with her jeans and a braless white tee shirt, holding her hand out with the key to their hotel room, with the smuggest look on her face that Tina had ever seen. The day Tina fucked her so senseless that she couldn’t even utter her own name.

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    3. What’s cool is the fanfic writers that comment to each other.It’s the ultimate compliment. It’s similar to great chefs eating in the restaurant of other great chefs. Jo…no one writes erotic stories like you do. It can be NC-17+ and they’re not cheesy or boring just hot and juicy. Keep’em coming.

    8. Oh god, there is that tape from the gallery (my favorite scene, of course all of them are my favorite). I do need a copy of that tape. Alice almost got her self killed if she did not stop messing with Bette and Tina about that tape. This was so erotic from the very beginning of this chapter actually from the beginning of this entire story. And to think that I was having a bad day. This chapter has brightened my evening considerably. Thanks to your gf for allowing you to finish the chapter.

    10. Great chapter! I think it’s safe to say that they both enjoyed the little cat & mouse game with each other – I know I certainly did. Please post again soon.

    14. Mercy, mercy, mercy, Jobadge. That was a great chapter and Alice will always be Alice. Tina and Bette are so hot they are stripping the lacquer off the furniture.

    17. This chapter was sexcellent, um, excellent. At this exact moment I’m praying for some table top clearing sex. Either way, I know the next chapter will be sextacular, um, spectacular.

    20. Well I FINALLY got all caught up with this story. It is one of the HOTTEST things I’ve read here. From the poolside up to the rose petals, each enounter has left me pretty much breathless. Excellent job in that department. I had forgotten all about the CAC security tape. LOL I thought, “Oh Lord there’s gonna be a big blowout argument!” Glad to see I was wrong.

    21. Hey Jo… lets make a deal… i make copies of my tapes of bette and tina and you make copies of yours… so fucking HOT… loving this… and alice you were so right… please the night is young…continue

    24. Sometimes in old movies from the 40s you’ll see some swank apartment or nightclub that has padded leather doors. I was thinking the girls might want to invest in one. More comfort, more mystery. On to the rose petals redux.

    25. Damn those two are hot. Great job with the writing. What happend to this B&T, you know the ones we fell in love with, the ones that can’t keep their hands off each other. Can we get copies of the videos?

    26. excellent! the wait is worthy! i don’t know how can they handled to stayed all the afternoon without touching so much just teasing! Alice is a singular person! i can’t wait for the next! but i hope Tina will continue trust Bette.

    27. OMG what a post!!!! Jo you’re such a tease….and what about that rating???? That was not a NC-17 post and you know it LOL!!!!!! But what a hot and amazing post anyway, I loved it and I want…no I demand two copies of Potard Porn from one twin to the other :o)) Post soon, take care mate….and congrats on Englands victory.

    28. What an excellent chapter!…your on some mighty roll here with this….Again,like the last one, it had everything…Fun..Sexy…Hot…. Beautifully written….with descriptions second to none!…Always the best hun..

    30. okay – so you and I are great mates — even though we have never actually spoken — and i know I am biased about your writing but that was simply the best thing i have ever read on this site. your command of words, your style, the humour and the characterisation all scream that this is a classic piece of fan fiction. You are a truly brilliant writer and i am honoured that we are friends. thank you for sharing your talent and i could hug your woman for allowing you to write. Maybe Jill and Anna could set up some sort of support group for abandoned partners of FF writers ???Have i mentioned that this was brilliant yet ?

    34. I simply had to comment again. I reread this story from the its beginning. Your writing has evolved. It was excellent from the get-go but now it is just fucking amazing. Every aspect is fucking amazing. I totally agree with ally.

    35. I love your stories ! All the details that you include and of course the ” teasing” that goes on between Bette and Tina is just “HOT!” I hope you will post the next chapter soon.

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