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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on September 9, 2017 by Valerie.
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    Bette called out for the driver to pull over. When the car came to a halt, she quickly got out of it. As she shut the door behind herself, she caught a glimpse of Melvin’s dumbstruck face, the image that would forever be engraved on her mind. As Bette gazed after the retreating car, it

    Bette called out for the driver to pull over. When the car came to a halt, she quickly got out of it. As she shut the door behind herself, she caught a glimpse of Melvin’s dumbstruck face, the image that would forever be engraved on her mind.

    As Bette gazed after the retreating car, it dawned on her that she just cursed her own father. Her throat suddenly started chocking up on retching sobs. She couldn’t decide whether to cry or vomit, so she did both, right in a middle of the sidewalk with surrounding people. Bent over, her body shook with spasms as she gagged violently, but nothing came out except some black bile mixed with blood, which she spat out onto the pavement. Her eyes watered while she dry heaved a couple more times.

    ”Miss, are you alright?” a concerned female voice asked her. ”Here, take it,” the stranger held out a napkin.

    It took time before Bette could get a clear breath. She straightened out and accepted the offered napkin. After wiping her mouth with it, she gave the woman a soft smile and thanked her.

    ”You look pale, are you sure you don’t need to go to the hospital? Just in case, the hospital is right there,” the woman pointed her forefinger at the building nearby.

    ”Yeah, I know, I’m here to visit a friend actually,” Bette explained to the solicitous stranger. ”But I’m fine, really. No worries.”

    The woman eyed Bette and smiled back at her. ”Well then, I wish a speedy recovery to your friend and for your beautiful face to not be pale anymore.”

    Bette felt herself blush at the compliment. She thanked the woman once more before letting her go. Her mood was lifted somewhat, and for that she owed to the gracious stranger. Feeling better now, Bette proceeded to walk the short distance toward the hospital.

    At the entrance she bumped into Marcus’s wife, who looked tired and dejected.

    ”Melissa, hey,” Bette greeted her with a warm smile.

    ”Bette,” the woman acknowledged with a barely perceptible nod.

    ”Um, you going somewhere? I thought I could stay with Marcus for some time… How is he by the way? Has he regained consciousness?”

    Melissa stared at the brunette, then lowered her head to the ground. Then she lifted her head and stared at Bette again. ”Marcus died early this morning.”

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    1. Oh god Valerie, i am so happy that you updated again.

      The plot thickens, Marcus dead, Bette knowing that Helena is a cop, Melvin at the scene who bailed Bette out of jail, Tina who left Bette but still loves Bette and Bette visiting Tina in the middle of the night and scaring her.

      So many things are happening and Bette spiralling out of control due to all of that.

      I understand Tina leaving Bette but she is the one that was able to Hold Bette back and now that Bette lost her she doesn’t give a shit what will happen with herself.

      I still have faith that somehow everything will end well and held hope out from the story title ” I Will Not Let You Fall ”

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story!

    2. Wow Valerie:

      What a chapter, poor Bette, poor Tina, they love each other, but it will be hard to stay together if things don’t change; I hope Bette change her life, now that Marcus is dead. But the question is who killed Marcus, I don’t think is the police, maybe he was killed in a mafias’ war, or perhaps is her own boss Dr. Arnodelo, who wanted to intimidate her or to remove Marcus from protecting Bette, at the end the same Arnodelo made her kill Dominic, his own family, why not to kill Marcus and then Bette and blame on them all the crime he has done. Bette has to do the first move and change sides, she needs a deal with the police and to give them Arnodelo in exchange for protection for her and Shane. Melvin is too late, he could help Bette before she reached this point, now it’s too late; and now he also blames everything on her, as if he hadn’t pushed her in the hell that she is now.
      Helena, of course, is a bitch, but what else could she do, she is an undercover cop. I hope Tina would realize, of what she has awakened in Bette and decide to go back to her.
      That was a wonderful chapter Valerie, I hope you may post an update soon, this is a great story. Thanks

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    4. This story is wonderful, it left me with a heart in my hands, when I read each chapter. And more anxious to have no idea how the end of this story will be,
      without having to separate our couple, the more we know that every action has its consequences, and in one way or another bette will have to answer for their crimes.
      Unfortunately another blow in bette’s life, the loss of his friend Marcus, is sure to make him want revenge.
      All universe

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