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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on March 10, 2018 by Valerie.
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    Having yet to raise her eyes, Bette shrugged one shoulder, answering with obvious reluctance. ”Getting used to the food still.” Pursing her lips, Tina thought of the ways to arouse Bette out of her indifference. ”Baby, look at me.” Under some inner protest Bette obliged with Tina’s request. ”Talk to me. Tell me what’s on

    Having yet to raise her eyes, Bette shrugged one shoulder, answering with obvious reluctance. ”Getting used to the food still.”

    Pursing her lips, Tina thought of the ways to arouse Bette out of her indifference. ”Baby, look at me.”

    Under some inner protest Bette obliged with Tina’s request.

    ”Talk to me. Tell me what’s on your mind,” the blonde spoke softly.

    After a contemplative pause Bette said, ”There’s nothing on my mind, Tina. I don’t think about anything. I don’t know what you wanted to hear from me when you were coming here. I don’t even know why you are here.”

    ”You don’t know why I am here?” Tina repeated. ”How about just to see you? We haven’t seen each other in four months. I’ve missed you. Haven’t you missed me?”

    ”Fine, you saw me. I saw you. We saw each other after so many months of not seeing each other. Now excuse me if I have nothing to tell you, I thought I said my goodbye already.”

    ”Goodbye..?” Tina uttered in a low trembling voice.

    Bette’s mouth curved into an unfriendly smirk. ”Don’t tell me you came here to plan our future together.”

    Tina blinked. ”Well… I thought–I thought we would talk this through. I thought we would figure something out.”

    ”Figure something out?” Bette asked, her tone derogatory. ”What, you’re gonna wait nineteen years for me? And then when I come out everything will be the same and we’ll just keep going like the good old days?”

    Shaking her head, Tina gazed at Bette sadly. So many words were right on the tip of her tongue, but some force held them back.

    ”You couldn’t last a month without not leaving me, and you definitely won’t last any nineteen years. So get your head out of the clouds already and accept that we’re over.”

    Tina sobbed quietly, covering her face with her free hand. Bette’s words stabbed like thousands hot daggers.

    ”Don’t come here anymore, Tina. I won’t sign your application,” and with that Bette put the receiver back on its cradle and stood up.

    ”Don’t go…” Tina wept bitterly, watching through tear-blurred vision as a correctional officer handcuffed Bette. ”Please Bette, oh God… Please don’t do this to me…”

    When Bette disappeared behind the door, Tina pressed her palm against the clear glass and sobbed without restraint. At one point one of the staff workers asked her to leave, which she did with difficulty. As her legs dragged her back through the metal detector, tears streamed incessantly down her cheeks. Her mascara was smeared and she was receiving looks, but she didn’t care anymore. Nothing made sense anymore. It just hurt so much.

    How was she going to survive now?

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    1. Welcome back!
      I must say – i don’t like your Tina in this story – she’s too weak, too dependent from another’s opinions. Yes, she’s young, but still. And Bette is right – Tina left her too often to believe in her love. So T has a lot a work to do, if she wants to fix it.
      And you will bring back B from jail earlier than 19 years, right?

    2. I like that you are frequently updating my favorite story on here. I feel so sorry for Bette,19 years behind bars?? Anxious to see where this story goes!!

    3. Hi Valerie:

      Amazing update; I’m very sorry for Bette, I understand her bitterness, and I think she still loves Tina, and probably she loves her so much that she would like for Tina to be happy, a happiness she doubts it would be with her, so she is pushing Tina away; she also feels resentment because of Tina’s behavior when she left her a few months ago, and Bette can’t understand that Tina’s situation with her parents made her take some distance with Bette’s trial.

      But I think Bette knows very well she lied to Tina about her criminal activities and she has some responsibility in their separation.

      Now, everything depends on Tina’s next step, would she be willing to wait for Bette? Will Bette recover some hopes about her future?

      The answers are in your quill Valerie, but one thing I know is that Bette is empty and she needs Tina to get hopes in her future, and Tina needs Bette to survive.

      Thank you for this great chapter, but now you leave us heartbroken, and with lots of questions.

      Please, Valerie, post soon (seriously), I’ll be anxiously waiting.

      P

    4. This is heartbreaking Valerie!

      Nineteen years in prison, i feel so sad for Bette. Is she gonna survive it, she is broken, her spirit died, especially after Tina left her more than once and after Marcus died.

      Tina is young and i really believe she loves Bette, but she listen to much to other people and runs away when she promised Bette that she would stay with her.

      I feel so sad for both of them, my heart is breaking. Is this really goodbye? Nineteen years is a long time and i hope there is a way for Bette to get out sooner, but i do understand that a relationship is very hard to remain and that Bette doesn’t want Tina to put a hold on her life waiting for her and why she said goodbye.

      Valerie, i truly enjoy this story and while my heart is breaking, i still believe that you will give us a happy ending. Your story title,” I will not let you fall” give me the hope that you will bring them back together.

      One request, i hate Helena, please don’t let her and Tina get romantically involved.

    5. I truly love this story and anxiously await each update. Nineteen years….of course she did plead guilty, so it’s not surprising the number of years. I can’t say that I like this Tina. I need her borrow someone’s backbone if she can’t find her own.

      There has to be a silver lining in this and the two of them will be back together and in love. I’m sure Bette is purposefully pushing Tina away.

      Post soon!

    6. Thanks for this great post! Hope we won’t have to wait for 19 years :) Can’t find in my heart any hatred for Bette-the-criminal and can’t find any sympathy there for Tina-the-good-girl. What a paradox! You’ve created a very intense and charismatic image of Bette.

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