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I Will Not Let You Fall
”Bette!” Tina cried out at the brunette’s shameless comment and covered her face.
Bette flashed a puckish smile at her. ”You wanna shotgun, babe?”
Tina looked dubious. ”I don’t really like it” She uttered timidly.
”What? Shotgun?”
”No…marijuana”
The group ’awwed’ mockingly as Bette passed the joint to Alice and shushed everyone.
”You should have told me earlier, Tee” The brunette said quietly, disentangling herself from Tina and rising up from the loveseat. She then rushed to the kitchen to wash the smell of smoke down with juice.
”You’re no fun, TK” Alice mumbled drowsily.
Tina scoffed. ”Yeah, and you’re getting a taxi”
Helena chuckled in a wicked way. ”As long as we share it, that’s totally fine by me”
Alice choked on smoke when Helena winked at her seductively.
”Okay, folks, time to go home” Bette pulled her hands together as she reemerged on the balcony.
”I’ll call a cab” Tina declared.
With unceasing giggles, some shooing and more squabbling between Bette and Helena the young women finally saw themselves out the door of the apartment. Tina told Helena to please make sure that Alice would come home without incidents, accentuating home, so the full of mischief brunette would get the point. Though Tina had a high doubt about that, but she felt hopeful.
After Bette locked the door, she began to practically run off at the mouth. ”Tina, you really should have told me that you don’t like pot, ’cause, you know… I thought, I thought you were having a good time and everything was okay, I thought you didn’t mind and…and I wouldn’t have smoked too, ’cause you were kissing me and you were probably thinking how gross it was and I feel, I thought…”
”Bette, baby, stop, stop” Tina entreated almost in a whisper, holding up her hands. She had been observing Bette’s mannerisms and habitudes throughout their still young romance, and she found brunette’s little tendency to explain herself and get all agitated truly endearing. Tina smiled. ”Forget it, okay? And don’t you ever think that it’s gross to kiss you. The right word would be..sweet…”
The twinkle in Tina’s eyes and her smile turned into seductive as she closed the distance between herself and the brunette. ”…or maybe uh…vertiginous and…erotic?” She raised an eyebrow provocatively. ”And above all…concupiscent…”
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You certainly didn’t scew up!!!
For a first time writing NC-17 you did a excellent job.
I love your story! And Tina, she is so cute and innocent in her way off thinking.
Don’t get me wrong, she is wonderful, but a little naive. I wonder how she will think about Bette when she discover what she does for work. But i have faith that Tina has a positive influence on Bette and that they will be a very happy couple at the end.
Great story!
Nice chapter!
Congratulations Val, I enjoyed your first NC: 17. I’m worried when Tina finds out all about Bette.
10 stars.
Enjoyed it, thanks
Loved it!..I love Bette in this story. She is a take no shit from anyone person with a bad girl attitude yet has a tender loving side with Tina.
Just got all caught up on this story and I’m looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing :)
That was too good which means its only about to get bad, damn hope not..love it!
Awesome
Dear author,
Discovering your story few days ago and very intrigued by it, I cannot help noticing my dearest Bette’s words of love to Tina in this chapter because I’m speaking french and it remembers me so much of Rosemonde Gérard’s famous poem :
“Car, vois-tu, chaque jour je t’aime davantage,
Aujourd’hui plus qu’hier et bien moins que demain.”
(For, you see, each day I love you more,
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.)
So I thought that you’re also a french speaking girl, perhaps ? ;-)
Many thanks for your full-of-mystery story !
A.