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I Wouldn’t Change A Single Thing 12
“Thank you, Bette. I just” I notice her emotion rising in her voice, “just want to thank all of you. You have no idea how much you have helped me in the past year.” She looks at Shane, “From helping me get my head out of my *****,” Shane smiles and Dana looks at me, ” to healing my heart and taking car of me, you all have helped me get through this year alive.”
Dana rises to her feet, “And I want to thank you guys for helping me set this up today.”
What did she say?
I look around at everyone. They all have pensive smiles across their faces, looking at me like they are apart of some secret club.
“Shane,” Dana calls on Shane who pulls a small box out of her pocket, “Thanks.”
My head is swirling with confusion. I feel Dana grab my hand. Everyone else and the world disappears.
“Alice, I have loved you from the moment I met you. I saw you across the room and amid the dozens of reporters and I knew I had to meet you. You are always filled with so much love and compassion, there to help everyone before yourself. I was lucky enough to be draped in your love, but dumb enough to let you go. Lucky for me, we have great friends and an undying love.”
I feel every emotion run through my body. Thinking back to when Dana and I first met at a press junket. For some odd reason, I was covering an upcoming tennis event and I saw her. A tall brunet, full of life with a great ***** to match, it was simply fateit had to be.
Dana lowers down to one knee, “I love you Alice. You are my soul mate, you have to be, who else would put up with me? I can never seem to find the right words for my emotions and I always steal the covers.”
I laugh, “You do.” Is all I can comeback with.
She smiles, “I want to go to sleep and wake up every morning with my arm wrapped around your waist. I want my home and life to be filled with your warmth and the sound of your laughter. What I’m getting at iswell I’m sick and you have been there everyday, good or bad. I lost you once Al and if” I notice a tear fall from her eye, “If this thing eating at me destroys me I want to leave this Earth knowing our souls are forever intertwined.”
I now have tears rolling down my face, “You complete me Alice. You make my life worth living.” She opens the tiny black box, exposing the most perfect diamond ring that has ever been created. ” We have been through so many trials, and I wouldn’t change a single thing. Alice Pieszecki, will you forever ensure my happiness and marry me?”
I look at her and the ring and to her again, completely in shock. I can’t speak.
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What’d ya think? Is it too much?
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(27 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Not to much at all!!! That is amazing and i want more. I love the thought of alice and dana having kids and living happily ever after. I know Dana can beat this as long as she has her Alice. So please keep going it is absolutely fantastic!!!
Omg! That was wonderful. Gosh I wish that happens in S3. But you never no eh? Keep it up.
Thank you for that, I needed it badly lol. We all needed that, thanks for the great update!
Wow…. I didn’t expect the proposal, sounds like Alice didn’t either, lol. Thats not too much. My heart is going to burst! She better say “yes” or my heart will break. I’m praying for a happy ending. Thanks for the great update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Never too much. Post more soon. I love it.
It was amazing, absolutely perfect. Thank you so very much for writing it. If only a quarter of your sotry truly happened in the show, I’d go to heaven.Thaaaaank you again =)
No to much at all,just give Dana and Alice a real chance of happiness thanks
that was awesome. please tell me she’s says “yes”!
not too much!!! sooo cute and romantic! i luv them. please kept it up. :D
well no it is not to much beacause I need more I just hope that they get married and dana recovers in full and that they then go on to have some children together please post soon I love it
aw. too cute. i love it. :) i’m glad you put the rest of the gang in there. i love how they were all in on it. :)
I hope this is how it’s played out onTLW! Lovely story!!!!!
noooo wayyy that was amazing!!! its never too much !!! love the love!
Not too much as long as Dana lives!! Ive been totally engrosed with the story. Please continue soon :-)