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I Wouldn’t Change A Single Thing 15
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A smile spreads across my mother’s face, “very well then. Shouldn’t we get going?”
Just then Shane runs up, “Alice I know it’s against tradition and all, but I think Dane really needs you.”
I begin to worry, “What are you talking about Shane?”
“Just come with me, Al. You can stand outside the door.”
A few steps later I’m standing in front of Bette and Tina’s bedroom. I knock softly, “Dana.honeyis everything ok?”
I hear light sobs coming from inside, “Oh Alice, what are you doing here? You can’t see before the wedding.”
I can’t help but chuckle, “You’re right and I suppose that’s why I’m talking to you through a door. Shane said you needed me.”
She softly sighs, “Al I’m fine. I’m justit’sgod I don’t know.”
I feel her confusion, “Listen Dane if you need more time just say the word. I mean-”
She fiercely cuts me off, “What?! Al no I don’t need more time, well I do, but noI need more time to do these damn vows.”
My heart jumps, I sigh a breath of relief, “Oh baby, its ok. If you can’t come up with something we can fall back on the standard edition.”
“But I wanted this to be so special Alice. You are so special to me, butI just can’t seem to find the words to express what you are to me. IgodI’m so frustrated.” I hear her flop down.
That’s it. “Ok Dana. I’m coming in.”
I reach for the doorknob as she protests, “Al, no the rules.”
“Hey, breaking the rules the first time got us into this mess now let me in,” I push open the door.
I see her. I feel like someone has just hit me in the gut. She stands in front of looking more stunning than I have ever seen her before and I didn’t think that was possible, “What? What’s wrong Alice? Is it me?”
Her words break me from my stupor, “Huh? NoGod no Danayou lookamazing.”
Her brunette hair, while still short, curls under her chin. Her classically white and simple dress, crosses over her shoulders. She worried about her dress. I know she is still self-conscious. Losing a breast is a traumatic blow for most women, and Dana was no different. Even though she had purchased a replacement as I jokingly called it, she didn’t want to wear anything to bring emphasis to her chest. I told her not to worry because I don’t see how anyone could ever get there once her shear beauty entrances them.
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aw! how sweet. :)
i have been one of those silent readers, but since its the end i will comment..it was great reading ur story i really enjoyed it..im adding you to my favorites right now!
How sweet! I love the fluff and this story. Please update soon!
Awww…happy Danish is my absolute favorite thing. :-) Thanks for writing this and sharing.
Infinite ‘thank yous’ for this story. You capitaved me from beginning to end. You just proved that is always hope for Danish, after break-up and cancer and whatever comes their way. Absolutely wonderful =)
I really loved your story. Glad you made it a happy ending. I see that you took a break cause I did look back to see your last post when I returned. I like how you used your title in the story. Hope you have another story in the works since there is no sequel. I be looking for you, purpleswirl…..
I too was a silent reader…but I loved reading your story and how they came to be together now that it’s over. Great job!!!
Shane mumbles, “Well, that makes one of you.” – That line made me laugh hard. I can see that happening. Again it’s sad to see it end but it was the perfect ending. Thanks for this wonderful story, now I’m looking forward to updates for your other lovely fic that made ache at the end lol.
I cant believe its over. You got into the characters so well. Please let the series have an equally happy ending for these two fantastic characters. Well done!!!!!!
i do believe everyone deserves happiness as well. such a great story, i was very attached. i love your writing, please write again soon.
that was great but I think that u could have had a bit more about the wedding itself but hey I love it