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Slowly, but Surely
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Dana pulls her Subaru into Shane’s Driveway, noticing the time she scolds herself, “Shit, I’m forty minutes late.” She hurriedly undoes her seatbelt and makes her way to Shane’s door.
With one knock, Dana invites herself in, calling out for the inhabitants, “Hello, sorry I’m late.”
She looks around the empty room, playing along, “well it doesn’t look like anyone’s homeI guess I will have to come back later.”
Dana moves for the door as the sounds of joyful screams follow her. She turns around with mock fear plastered across her face as she feels familiar arms wrap around her leg, “mama, mama I scarded you.”
“Scared? Are you kiddin me?” Dana bends down pulling the little boy into her arms, “You didn’t scare me.”
The blonde boy feverously shakes his head in disagreement, “Yes I did. Yes I did. Didn’t I Aunt Shane?”
Shane pops up from behind the couch, with her trademarked tussled hair and bright smile, “You did, buddy.”
“Well, it looks like I’m out numbered here. Looks like I need to call for backup.” Dana concedes as she begins to pull her hand from her side.
The boy asks, “Who mama? Who?”
Dana slowly raises her hand above her head, “Well from.the claw!” She begins to tickle the boy.
The boy squirms in delight. It was moments like this that Dana savored. No matter how hectic her day was coming home to her little boy completed her day.
“Ok, ok,” she lowered him to the floor, “Go get your things together while I talk to your Aunt Shane.”
“Then we go to see Ang?” he asked, his soft brown eyes hopeful.
Dana nodded, “Yes, but hurrywe’re late already.”
The boy ran off to the back room to collect his things.
Dana plops herself down on the couch, “Sorry I’m late again. I lost track of time after my last appointment.”
Shane takes a seat next to her; slapping her on the knee, “Don’t sweat it. You know I love spending time with my little man.”
Dana smiles, “Thanks Shane. Thank you so much. Things have just been socrazy and hardsince well”
Shane cuts in, hoping to spare Dana any hurt, “Heydon’t worry about. I’m here for you, besides who wouldn’t love hanging out with that?” Shane says pointing to Dana’s son who has emerged from a back bedroom clad in rain boots, a bright red coat and a winter hat, his backpack falling off of his left arm.
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wow continue please i want to know if alice is dead or still alive. It’s a great story please post fast
A little different is a big understatement, this is totally new, refreshing in its variety. I love it and your writing is excellent. Continue, please?
wow different…is right but its also awsm i agree with them, i want to c wat happened to alice plz update soon!
excellent beginning. I think i hold my breath till i came to the end of the chapter thinking what happened to alice… is this going to make us cry? please continue.
that is really good. the interaction between dana and aiden is so cute. then switching from that to so sad at the end. good job. it sounds like its gonna be a tear jerker.
wow! This really is good! Im guessin alice is dead..thats bad!!!
good job. i love that dana and alice have a kid. i’m wondering how alice left dana. don’t leave us hanging too long. and finish your other story! lol.
Whoa I think I almost might cry. Is Alice dead or alive? I love Dana as a mom- that’s exactly how I picture her. I also like how refreshing this story is! Please continue!
Oh I like this very much, I love the picture you painted of Dana as a mother and of the mystery behind Alice. This is wonderful!
aww a little bit of danish running around that is too cute!!! And to see Dana in such a different role is great….so about to cry there at the end…hmm, I don’t even know if I want to find out what happened to Alice…post soon
whoa i hope you continue this looks like it can get interesting. post soon!!
An excellent and intriguing start. Please continue.
AMAZING!..GRT chapter! I hope Alice aint dead?! :( but alas if she is R.I.P then Damn this gunna b a teary eyed stry&wat the point in readin bout L-word gurls pain..hehe I srry I thnk it EXCELENT btw..Fuking Fantastic :D THNX4writing, Post soon I hope u will?
“Aidan Howard Pieszecki Fairbanks, I know you heard me.” Classic mother command! Luv it, please continue!
Wow, I dont know how you manage it but fantastic and well written. Im rivited already! Please dont let it be too much of a tear jerker tho, not sure I can handle another Danish heartbreak..
Wow!! I really enjoyed reading this story, read it three times already. It’s new, its refreshing, and very well written. I like “Dana the mom.” So adorable. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the excellent work!
wow, you need to continue this