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I Wouldn’t Change A Single thing 2
I set down with my coffee, watching all the hub-bub of The Planet unfold. I really don’t know how Shane convinced me to meet her this morning. I hardly ever come for the regular morning meetings.
I bring the hot coffee to my lips and as the warmth slides down my throat I am reminded of Dana.
“Why couldn’t we meet Shane at her place or better yet at the movies?”
“I dunno Al. Something about how it was easier to meet here because of Carmen.” Dana lies.
Dana laughs, looking over at
“Alice,” Dana tries to cut in.
“See I told you us dating could be awkward. Maybe they wanted to invite me but felt obligated to invite you too. I mean, not that I would have accepted if I couldn’t bring you. It’s just”
“AL,” Dana yells causing
The blonde nods, pulling the door open to be greeted by an unoccupied room full of candles, flowers and soft jazz playing in the background, “There must be some sort of mistake. Kit must have her hunka hunka burnin love here tonight or something.”
Dana grimaces, “Al, look at the flowers.”
“They’re lilies. I love lilies.”
“And the music,” Dana prods.
“Ah, Miles Davis. This is actually my fav-,”
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it is a great start and i hope you end up putting our girls back together at some point. So please post soon
This is so not cool for Alice. I feel for her. Your story is taking me back to the days when read the first set of spoilers. If Alice has to feel all of this pain, I hope she eventually starts to heal and move on without Dana. I always wanted Dana to have to work hard to win her back. I’m along for the ride, wherever you decide to take the story.
This is an awsome start, like ackemat said, this does remind me of when I read the spoilers. Keep up the great work, can’t wait for the next post!
ooh how the spoilers worry me. i hope they find their way back to eachother. great story, keep it up
Well, I still like it very much. And I also hope Alice and Dana get back together somehow, or at least that Alice meets somebody she falls head over feet in love with. Continue please!
that’s awesome – post soon. great insite.
Just caught this, and love it! I would be very interested to see where you’ll take this story.