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I Wouldn’t Change A Single thing 2
Dana walks over to
“Thanks, Al.”
“No, that didn’t come out right. I’m just saying no one has ever done anything like this for me before. I just don’t know what to say,” the blonde explained with tears running down her face.
“Well no one has every loved you like I do,” Dana explains, joining their lips.
“So what else do you have for me Fairbanks?”
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“Shane, hey, I’m sorry. I was justwell anyway. How long have you been sitting there?”
“I just got here a few minutes ago. Carmen is at the counter getting our drinks. Listen, are you ok Al?” Shane knows
“Yeahyeah I was just thinking about a topic for one of my shows. You know got to keep it fresh,”
“So, how is Sarah? That’s her name right, the girl you’ve been trying to hook up with,” Shane inquires.
“I have not been trying to hook up with her Shane. We are good friends, you know tho-,”
Just then Shane looks up to see Dana and Lara entering the planet. She looks at Alice who obviously has already seen them enter.
“You know, I really have to get going. I need to go and work on that idea I was thinking of. I’m sorry I couldn’t stay longer, butuhmyou have to move when the spirits move ya. I’ll talk to you later, Shane,”
“Sure, no problem. But
Not that Shane would tell
With that I got up from the table and made a beeline for the door. I couldn’t stand to watch these two on television, let alone watch the coonoodle at the table next to me. For a moment, I swear I can feel Dana looking at me but I can’t turn around. I have to keep going forward. I can’t stop.
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it is a great start and i hope you end up putting our girls back together at some point. So please post soon
This is so not cool for Alice. I feel for her. Your story is taking me back to the days when read the first set of spoilers. If Alice has to feel all of this pain, I hope she eventually starts to heal and move on without Dana. I always wanted Dana to have to work hard to win her back. I’m along for the ride, wherever you decide to take the story.
This is an awsome start, like ackemat said, this does remind me of when I read the spoilers. Keep up the great work, can’t wait for the next post!
ooh how the spoilers worry me. i hope they find their way back to eachother. great story, keep it up
Well, I still like it very much. And I also hope Alice and Dana get back together somehow, or at least that Alice meets somebody she falls head over feet in love with. Continue please!
that’s awesome – post soon. great insite.
Just caught this, and love it! I would be very interested to see where you’ll take this story.