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If I Fall: Chapter 12
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After a moment of consideration, Jules came to terms with the fact that it just wasn’t going to happen tonight. And she had promised Alice that she’d wait for her until the writer was ready, so she supposed she wasn’t really in a position to make demands when it came to sex anyway. "Alright, it’s your world, I guess I’m just living in it," Jules mustered up a smile, placed a peck on Alice’s forehead and sulked off to the bedroom.
Alice closed her eyes, incredibly angry at herself for letting a simple thing like a birthday gift interfere with her ability to become intimate with her very patient girlfriend. Except it wasn’t just any birthday gift. It was a gift from Dana. A gift that showed Alice that just because Dana had problems verbally expressing what she meant to her, didn’t mean she couldn’t do it in other ways. And this created a million a one questions for Alice. So now what did that mean? Was Dana trying to show her that she was able to give Alice what she needed? Did this mean that Dana never stopped loving her? And if so, does that mean that Lara is just a glorified rebound for Dana? Or is she really in love with her too? Or was she just looking too much into this? Maybe this was just a friendly attempt to mend fences? But that note that came with the gift, that had to mean something, right? Why was she even freaking out about any of this, she had a beautiful woman in the bedroom waiting for her? A woman who wasn’t afraid to show Alice how she felt, or make her feel loved. She didn’t need some piece of jewelry and a birthday card to do it. Yet, none of that really mattered at all right now, and Alice knew that Dana’s small declaration made her feel more loved than any of Jules’ effortless attempts. Alice knew that wasn’t fair to any of them, but she couldn’t help appreciating Dana’s efforts moreso because she knew how unlike Dana they really were.
She closed her eyes and shook her head fiercely, trying her best to get Dana out of her head, once and for all. But when she opened them, she looked down at her closed fist, unclenching it to reveal the silver bracelet sitting there staring back at her. And what else could she do but place it on her wrist, turn off the lights, and try her best to fall asleep without allowing thoughts of Dana keep her up half the night.
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Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS
that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.
Poor, poor Jules. I liked the fact that Max and Jenny had a fight. That was cute. But poor Jules… lol
Wow fantastic part! Beautiful note from Dana, I feel a bit sorry for Jules but you can’t stand in the way of true love (i hope!) PPS :)
Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.
With Gemzo on this one. awesome story.
Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx
awww. that was soo great. loved the note from Dana. It sounds like things are about to be stirred up a bit. Can’t wait to read on.
That was just great. Dana’s gift to Alice was just perfect.
So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.
I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.