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If I Fall: Chapter 21b
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They both stood there, mouths agape, steadfastly planted in their positions on either side of the bathroom and unsure of what to do next. Dana wasn’t sure what god was smiling down on her, but she made a quick mental note to thank him or her later on for the sight that stood before her. Typically a quick thinker, and an equally quick mover, Alice’s brain seemed to be working at half the speed it normally did as she tried to understand how it was Dana standing before her and not Jules.
"What the fuck are you doing here?" Alice shouted, fidgeting with her skirt until it fell back down to her knees.
The writer’s sudden outburst seemed to have startled Dana so much that she inadvertently slammed the door behind her, and had no idea what to do next but yell back, " Alice!"
"Well?" She stood up straighter and folded her arms, but not before cocking her head to the side and glaring suspiciously at the athlete.
"I’m going to the bathroom! What the hell are you doing up here?"
"I, uh…," Alice stuttered, gradually unfolding her arms and looking away nonchalantly. Dana noticed right away just how red the writer’s face had become, which was admittedly a nice change for Dana, seeing as Alice typically exhibited nothing but a cool and calm demeanor. And she couldn’t resist but take advantage of the fleeting moment.
"Were you expecting someone?" Her eyes narrowed and she too cocked her head to the side expectantly.
"Actually, I was. And it wasn’t you," Alice spat back.
Dana quickly dropped the playful tone and scoffed at the response she got. "Real nice, Alice. Well, don’t let me interrupt." And she spun away from the writer, placing a hand on the door knob and turning it to leave. Except, the knob refused to turn, no matter how hard she tried. And after a few seconds of watching her jiggle the knob, Alice found herself growing curious as to why the tennis player was still there.
"Look, I know I make you nervous Dana, but you just have to turn the handle and open the door."
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Encyclopedia brown? Very funny. This has to be one of the most memorable bathroom scene that I have ever read. D’s confession was genuine and touching. How can A not take her back after that. And it was longest speech I had ever seen D spoke. That was mind blowing. Well done, swissmiss24. Thank you for bringing them back together for even just a moment. I guess things must hit rock bottom before getting better. I had conflicting feelings of Helena interrupting. But what she said to D should shed a light on D the pain the A had endured. I can’t wait for your next post. Thank you so very much.
Thanks for continuing. It’s going to be interesting to see what it finally takes for Al to let Dana back in. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay, I don’t have to kick your ass! Which I couldn’t do anyway, but still. I absolutely loved it, same as always. But I’m really getting anxious for this “happy Danish” you keep alluding to. And don’t worry, I’m planning a trip out there after L3! I’ve been antisocial too long!
Thank you, swismiss!! What delightful Danish… Please keep writing. I am not sure what happened to Fripster and I would hate to lose you or Muted… ;-D “Encyclopedia Brown” — Soooooo Dana! I love how Dana articulated herself. “And I don’t want you to be my teacher Alice, I want you to be my partner” — Swoon. I think Jules is wonderful, but, my heart belongs to Danish. I’m kinda glad Helena barged in. I think Alice would have felt bad if anything more had happened. She needs to come to the realization that Dana is there for her and is the right choice without too much guilt — although I know she will feel bad for hurting Jules. Thank you again for the great update!!
i will probably read this every day until you post again. so please post soon. ny, huh? i am a part time new yorker now – i have to go there part of the week for an indefinite period. i am excited. i love new york. well that was an excellent update – i love that we are starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. they were so cute, i love how dana laid it all out on the line.
WOW!!! How could Alice not take her back after that heartfelt confession? Jules is great and all but she doesn’t have a snowball’s chance in hell. It’s just a matter of time before Alice completely gives in and goes back to Dana. Great update, please post soon.
Thank you so much for the update! I loved it! You know, yesterday I started to reread your story, chapter and verse, so that I could enjoy more your next one, if possible!! I shouldn’t do it though. I’m supossed to work hard on my dissertation; both you and MutedTempest are jeopardizing the project! ;p Just kiddin’. You made my day! Now, I gotta go back to it… (ANGST!).THANKS again!
Oh.my.god!!! wow that was soooooooo good i enjoyed that thoroughly every inch, poor dana poor alice..im gunna go read it again:)
wow. so good, so so good. you are my danish angel. i can’t wait to see where this goes now. pleeease post soon!
helena has some bad timeing but there is still hope there for alice and dana please post soon I love it
YES! there you are! “Hi, kettle, this is Dana, you’re black.” LMAO I almost forgot to check in here for some Danish, glad I did. Please please post soon? If this was a real scene in the show, I’m absolutely possitive that this would be my favorite. Dang Helena, hehehe thanks for the updatw swismiss.:D
Glad you posted again! Dana needs to go get her girl! I can understand Alice’s reservations, but come on they belong together!!! Loved the bathroom scene!!! Keep up the good work!