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If I Fall: Chapter 8
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She knew that asking for the details would seem entirely too obvious to just about everyone in the room. So instead, Dana focused intently on the plate in front of her and began to pick nervously at the half-eaten piece of cake sitting upon it. Her apprehension wasn’t lost on Lara, or Shane for that matter, as they both noticed a change in her demeanor immediately. She wasn’t trying to draw attention to herself, and was pretty sure that most of them couldn’t tell that it was affecting her so deeply. But Dana couldn’t stop her mind from racing as she let the reality sink in. And on top of her growing jealously and despair over the idea of Alice dating someone else, Dana was beyond pissed at herself for even feeling anything but happiness for Alice in the first place. It was she who let Alice go. It was she who started dating someone else first. It was she who put Alice in a position to be dating anyone else. And it was she who now felt the brutal pangs of jealousy over the thought of someone other than herself being the girl at Alice’s side.
All of her thoughts began to overwhelm her to the point of nausea as she mumbled an excuse to Lara and darted outside for some air. Shane glanced over once more at Lara, who was now sporting a look of what could only be described as frustration. She almost seemed more annoyed than worried, and Shane figured that apparently things weren’t as okay between them as Dana was letting on.
When it was evident that Lara had no intention on checking on Dana, Shane started to get up and make her way towards the door her friend had just exited through. That is, until she felt a hand on her arm. She abruptly stopped and turned to discover it belonged to Helena.
“I’ll go,” Helena simply stated, and made her way out back to speak with Dana.
Across Town
Alice and Jules had just finished ordering their meals from the waiter at the Thai restaurant that Jules claimed had the best Pad Thai in town. Alice was admittedly too nervous to really care how the food tasted, but made sure to check the wine list once over before even glancing at the menu. Alice didn’t typically get nervous before many things, so to say the feeling was foreign to her was definitely an understatement. She figured the nerves were due mostly in part to the fact that she hadn’t had a first date in over a year, considering she and Dana never officially had one but instead opted to jump head first into a relationship. However, once she got to the restaurant and saw Jules sitting at the bar waiting for her arrival, she knew that it had to be the woman herself that made her so nervous.
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LOL I’m glad you liked my Carrie rant and the only thing missing was the cosmo since I was smoking lol. However after the last cosmo incident I had I vowed not to drink them again for a very long time. Anyway back to what’s important, your story, your amazingly fantastic story. Jules, I half love her half hate her, she’s so damn cute and funny and perfcet and that’s great if I wasn’t such a danish lover. My heart is being torn betwene Alice’s sanity and a danish relationship, your making it sound like they belong apart because it’s easier on them both which makes me very sad :( I think Dana’s reaction was totally realistic to her character and if I was Lara I’d be major pissed off. Ok that’s enough ranting for now, awesome post, you’re putting me to shame big time. PPS xx
i feel bad for dana – she sounds so confused. but then at the same time i am happy for alice that jules sounds so awesome. thanks for posting so fast and ggreat job.
It seems like everyone on this site is trying to out me lately, in some form or another. First De_leish_ous outs me as a Danish perv, now you’ve outed me as a Jules fan…before long there won’t be any closets left to hide in. I really liked this one, you got a lot accomplished in only a few pages. I just have to ask…and feel free not to answer if you don’t want to, but…are you a Helacious fan, by chance? Just wondering. And as to Alice having a type, Jules does have dark hair, right? ;) I’m such a nerd, sorry. Anyway, you do a freaking fantastic job of getting into Dana’s head, and if I were Lara I’d be really pissed off right about now. You’ve managed to make me feel bad for the Soup Chef, so be proud!
Watching a Jet game with Patriot fans … sorry for you! Are you going to hang out with your Pats friends next week too? I find myself liking Jules a lot. She seems to have real depth. I hope she’s someone Alice can fall for.I think Dana doesn’t wants to be so selfish as to mess up things for Alice, but I’m sure she’ll blow up the thing with Jules – eventually.Go Helena! Speak the truth! :-D
Well let me start off by saying that you can never talk to me too much about music. lol. It’s pretty much my life :D Moving on to Jenny Lewis, I have met her several times and she is amazing and beautiful. I will have to tell you the story sometime of how we first met but it was awesome and hilarious and she’s fantastic! Very short though…which surprised me a bit…anyways, RK is my all time fav band and her solo album was excellent! PM sometime about them. Ok so on to the story. lol. This was awesome and I love where it’s headed. I don’t know how I missed this story but I am glad I found it. Keep up the great work and post again soon!