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“IF ONLY”
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“At the house, Nina is sleeping, Bev crawls in with her”
“Nina
I thought you were going to listen to Kim sing tonight”
“Bev
Only if you want to go with me”
“Nina
I told her I wasn’t going, but I told her you were”
“Bev
I have heard her sing before”
“Nina
If you change your mind I will understand, she is your sister”
“Bev
And you are my wife, I need to be here with you”
“Nina falls asleep and Bev slips out and walks into the guest room that was soon to be the nursery, she falls to her knees and starts crying”
“Nina wakes up to a lonely bed, she hears something and looks into the guest room and there is Bev on her knees crying”
“Nina
Babe it’s going to be ok”
“Bev
Why Nina, why did He take him away from us”
“Nina
I think God needed another angel and he picked our baby”
“Bev
This is where his crib would have gone and the changing table, the Mickey Mouse wall paper”
“Bev breaks down again and Nina pulls her close”
“Bev
You are the strong one and everyone thinks I am. Marvin would say only the weak cried. Never let them see you cry. I could never cry”
“Nina
Babe it’s just us, CRY let it out”
“Bev
I may not have showed it but I wanted our baby, you have to believe me”
“Nina
I believe you and we will have our baby .God will send us back our angel”
“Bev told Nina all about Kay Duckley and the jerks who were putting a sign on their lawn and the hate mail, sponsors threatening to pull from the show”
“Together they grieved”
“Together they healed”
“Together they loved”
*****
“The tears were pouring down Tina’s face, she couldn’t believe what she was reading, she had to leave, she ran before Alice could say a word”
“Bette and Jodie were walking in”
“Bette
Tina what’s the matter”
“Tina keeps running and jumps into her car. Bette just watched”
“Bette
Alice what just happened”
“Alice
Tina was reading Jenny’s revised script”
“Bette
That trash. I can’t believe Jenny did this to us her friends”
“Alice
Bette why don’t you read Ch. 9”
“Bette
I have no interest in this shit”
“Alice
Then you really don’t care why Tina was crying”
“Bette picks up the script”
10 minutes later
“Alice
Tell me how she knew any of that stuff”
“Bette
It was when only Shane talked to me, Jenny would too. One night I poured my heart out to her”
“Tom and Jodie walk over with their drinks”
“Bette walks out”
“Jodie
(Calls Bette) Tom what did she say”
“Tom
I was a fool once and dam I’m not going to be a fool again”
(Scene fades)
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I really like this.Jenny is a sicko. How many times can you get hurt,and try not to slap the sh&t out of someone? thanks
I hope Bette’s statement means she’s realised who she wants.. And it’s not little miss artist. Nice story :)
I really liked this story. You did a great job w/the dialogue. Too bad it didn’t happen like that on the LW.Keep posting. There’s a softness here that was absent in the story (TV).
That was so moving I wish things had gone more like that on the show. I always say communication is the key, if they had talked more they would still be together. Although with IC you never can tell.
You did a good job! That was a great scene to re-write. I always hated how Bette said nothing when Tina confided her feelings to her.
This is awesome. I really am not a fan of ic because she is going to break our hearts. B&T are over in her mind and she could care a less about the fans. It would be nice if someone finally listened to the majority. She sounds like a dictator and not a producer. Oh I forgot they are one in the same.
good luck with that, i really liked it…i posted mine there too :)
oh how i love when you guys rewrite history. good job. You actually made jenny useful in some way. that is some feat! I hope Bette and Tina have a conversation is so long overdue. pps
Absolutely marvelous Amanda. Keep going with this. PPS
MG,i see you brought the baby over her.you did a DAMNFINE job women,too bad we didnt get this way for reals,but we are talking about I.C Dipshit now arent we.thanks for sharing this i did vote on the other site to lady keep me posted MG. GOOOO METS!!!!!!!
Excellent! This is the dialogue that was always missing…would loved to have seen it played out on the show.
Excellent! If only (indeed)
I totally agree AmandaMG…IF ONLY! If only IC had half a brain, right? I love your writing and this story! I have no choice but to wait for your next post, but please hurry! Thank you!
AMG, you know my thoughts as I shared them already. This is an awesome Fic. I hope to see you proceed further along with this, as the weeks pass. You have my support for sure. Thanks for sharing it here as well. **Hugs**
oh yeah..if only..jenny got it right 4 once…i wish jenny would get healthy…i liked her in s1 b4 she went all sicko…
Great writing!!! The way it should have been!!!!Thank you!