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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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“Why the ***** do you watch that *****?” Alice looked up over her shoulder and smiled at Adam.
“I told you. She’s a friend of mine.”
“Well, how come I’ve never met her.” Adam sat down at the end of the couch and handed Alice a cup of coffee. “In fact. How come I’ve never met any of your friends?”
“Would you hand me that?” Alice pointed to the remote, purposely avoiding the fact that Adam wanted to meet her friends. She had been avoiding the subject for some time now and right now all she wanted to do was watch Dana play tennis. Even though they weren’t speaking Alice had still been following her career very closely. Even before they had split up Alice had known that Dana’s game wasn’t what it used to be and that she had been becoming increasingly frustrated with the way that things had been going. But in the months since she had seen Dana it seemed that she had once again become acquainted with her sport. Alice had been watching her all year. She had almost lost that first tournament of the year and Alice knew that it had a small amount to do with her. But she had come from behind for a very narrow victory over some German chick and won the Australian open.
Alice had watched her play in a few small tournaments and matches, she won as many as she lost, but had no trouble at all when she got to Paris. This had been the hardest one for Alice to watch as it was the first time in four years that she had not been sitting in the stands waiting for Dana to finish. Dana loved Paris and the more that she talked about it the more it had intrigued Alice, and when she had accompanied her that first year she had fallen in love with the city as much as Dana had.
And finally, though she had once again exhausted herself, Dana had, by the skin of her teeth and one amazingly controversial call, come up with a win at Wimbledon for the very first time in her career. And so now Alice sat on her couch, drinking coffee watching Dana slam balls back toward Maria Sharapova. Hoping against hope that Dana would get herself out of the rut that she had been in for the entire match and beat the pretty Russian. It would mean the finals for Dana, and if she won that it would mean something very important. And even though Alice couldn’t quite remember exactly what it was, she found herself glued to the television anxiously watching Dana step to the line to serve the ball.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!