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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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Shane laughed and nodded. “That’s exactly how I felt when I first started watching these. But I’ve been friends with Dana for ten years or something. Some of it was bound to rub off.” Shane glanced at the score board and was happy to realize that while she was gone Dana had won two games and gained the lead. She needed two more games and then she would be in the finals. Shane leaned over and tried to explain this to Carmen, but was interrupted by Leisha who had also just returned. “So, what did I miss.”
Carmen threw up her hands and Shane laughed again. “Dana’s up again. Two more games and she wins.” Shane pointed toward the score board and Leisha grinned. Shane looked over at Leisha as she watched the game intently and tried for the hundredth time to understand why she and Dana were together. Shane didn’t dislike Leisha at all. In fact she actually liked her a lot. It just seemed to her that she had nothing in common with Dana. But even so the two of them had been together for three months now and even though Shane had a sneaky idea that they weren’t in love, at the very least Leisha made Dana smile. And that was something that she hadn’t seen enough of during the last year.
“Yes!” Leisha hissed as Dana won another point and had only one more to go to win her second set, which meant that she won the match and she would advance to the finals. Shane watched the concentration on her friends face as she set herself to receive the ball bouncing back and forth from one foot to the other. Finally, after about twenty more minutes, Shane, Leisha and even Carmen all jumped to their feet and cheered their friend as she slammed the ball over the net for the final time having won the match.
Dana felt the shock when the blonde woman did not return her serve, but quickly recovered with a huge smile that covered her face as she turned herself toward the bleachers to look at her friends, who were cheering and clapping enthusiastically. Dana raised her racket at them and then made her way to the net to shake hands with Maria Sharapova. The other woman smiled as they congratulated each other and then Dana made her way over to grab a towel and get ready to talk to the press. When they had finally left her she took a moment to sign the three balls that someone presented to her and happily blasted them into the crowd. Then she gathered her things and waved toward the tennis fans before she walked back toward the locker rooms so that she could have a shower and meet her friends
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!