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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part Three
“Heather?” Alice said and Mark’s face dropped knowing that Alice was going to continue to sit there and name all of his exes until he changed his mind.
“OK. Fine. Next door then.” Mark’s head fell dejectedly as he pointed to the bar a few buildings down from the strip club.
“Good. I’m glad you made the right decision.” Alice hooked her arm through Mark’s and he reluctantly followed her toward the other bar.
Mark and Alice sat at the bar in front of the drinks that they had just ordered and scanned the room together. “Wow this place is pretty great.” Alice commented as she spotted a man peeing against the back wall. She looked over at Mark in what was bordering on disgust.
“OK. So it’s not exactly an upscale place, but you and your friends should get out of West Hollywood sometimes.”
“Why?” Alice asked. “If this is what’s outside of West Hollywood then I think that I’m pretty comfortable there.”
“Excuse me, Miss?” Alice turned around to face the bartender. “That guy down there would like to buy you a drink.”
Alice and Mark both turned their heads in the direction of the other end of the bar. The guy that the waitress had pointed to returned their gaze and questioned Alice with his Eyes. Alice turned back to the bartender. “UhNo thank you. But tell him it was sweet.” Alice didn’t bother to watch the waitress go back and deliver the message she simply grabbed Mark’s arm and led him toward an empty pool table toward the back of the bar
Lara and Dana both walked through the door to Dana’s house and giggled as they threw their things on the floor and made their way toward the kitchen. “I still can’t believe that it was so horrible.” Lara said incredulously.
“Well I’m starving now. Do you think we should order a pizza or something.”
“I could cook something.” Lara suggested. “That is if you have anything to cook with.” Lara added as she went around and opened the fridge and all the cupboards. Lara stood back and scoped out what she had to work with and then shook her head and closed everything back up. “OK. Order the pizza.” She said. “You really need to start going shopping Dana.” Dana shrugged and then reached for the phone.
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Is it wrong that somehow in this story, I want Dana to end up with Lara? She really sweet and kind to Dana, makes me feel for her. That serves to prove how good you write this :). Hope you can update soon.
really great chapter. You write in such a way I can feel everyones pain. Please don’t wait too long for your next post. Deb
lovin this story. Please post again soon. I can’t wait to see what happens in the end.
yes it’s wrong layla gray. great chapter! Dana’s inability to forgive or get over Alice is beautifully captured. I sure don’t know what she should do. (maybe she could ask alice?) : )
this is great but I do hope that alice and dana find there way back to each other please post soon
Yes it’s totally wrong, lol. O.k. I acept that maybe this is the only Lara that is not boring to me :P But I’m really interested in the story and see how can both be happy again (together or not, hope together but you have the last word). Thanks.
I definitely agree with capesquad. It’s wrong, wrong, wrong layla! Even if Dana and Alice don’t get back together – please no Lard. (pretty please)