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    I’ll Never Let You Go:Chapter 21

    Story written on August 28, 2011 by phacey.
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    A LUNCH AND A MAJOR REVELATION

    Ed, who didn’t bring his car, took a cab so that they could just use Bette’s blue Saab. Bette turned around and looked at the blonde “Goodnight Tina…” Bette said looking straight on her eyes.

    Tina forced a smile and replied “Goodnight…”

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    Ed has asked Bette to go and sit on the chair beside the pool after they arrived from their dinner in one of the most expensive restaurants in West Hollywood. Bette was somehow worried by her husband’s odd behavior while having their dinner and she wondered what might be bothering him. She jumped when she felt his hand on her shoulder

    “Sorry for keeping you waiting honey, I thought it would be nice to stay here for a while” Ed said as he sat beside his wife and gave her a glass of wine.

    Bette looked at the dark starless sky “I agree” Bette answered then took a sip on her glass. They sat in silence for a few minutes feeling the cold air; Bette felt that there was something troubling Ed so she decided to break the silence

    “Ed are you okay? Is there something that’s bothering you?”     

    Ed who was staring at the pool turned her gaze to his wife “Bette you know I love you right?”

    “Yes” Bette said not looking at Ed.

    “Do you love me too?” Ed asked looking at Bette trying to catch her eyes.

    “Why are you asking me these questions?” Bette replied

    “I need to hear it Bette, do you still love me?” Ed asked again his voice slightly desperate

    Bette took a deep breath “Of course I still love you”

    Ed shifted his gaze from Bette to the green water in the pool then sighed heavily

    “I need to tell you something…”

    “What is it honey?” the brunette asked

    “A lot of great things happened in my life but only three of them I considered the most precious. First was when I saw the most beautiful woman I have ever laid my eyes on at a party over six years ago and I told myself that very instant that she’s the one that I want spend my life with. Second was when I saw her walking down the aisle wearing the most immaculate white wedding dress and when I heard her say I do my eyes welled with tears. Third was when I came home one evening from work feeling so tired and grumpy, she greeted me with a loving kiss and whispered to my ear that we were expecting our first child, my heart exploded with immense happiness and I thought I’m in heaven. That night we made love so passionately”

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    1. duh, do u have to stop at this moment! can’t wait to read the next chapter, this one is really worth waiting for, I’m sorry for Bette’s discovery about Ed it is really painful. but I wish this will push her more toward Tina ;D

    2. Oh what a place to stop.reat that she has gone to Tina to talk and be with her to help soothe the pain away. But, Bette needs to be clear in her mind what she wants and only go to Tina if she really wants her and not on the rebound. can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.

    4. Ed’s infidelity will turn out to be the best thing that has happened to Bette. Now she can act on her feelings for Tina. How does Ed know that he’s the Baby Daddy? DNA test coming up.

    5. Carrying on an affair for two and a half years… there’s really no excuse for that. And now the other woman is pregnant. Bette should obviously throw Ed out on his ear, and she should really get herself tested for STDs while she’s at it. I don’t think Ed can make it up to her, not ever. They’re done. Tina’s going to have to exercise all her restraint while Bette gets over her marriage ending. It’s going to be interesting! Thanks for the post :)

    6. That was great, I though you gonna let Bette catch him cheating but well this is better and he can be out of her life soon lol. Ok now let Tina comfort Bette and take care of her. Please post more, thanks!

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