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In The Air Tonight
Bette was sitting on the stoop one muggy night, peeling the label off of an empty beer bottle when she felt someone sit beside her. Without even looking up, she said, Hi, Shane.
Shane eased her thin frame into a comfortable position, her back against the house. Howd you know it was me?
Laughing softly, Bette replied, Because I saw you leaving your house and cutting across the yard.
That explains it, Shane responded, leaning down and picking up the six-pack of bottles by Bettes feet, raising her eyebrows in question. Bette nodded, and so Shane pulled one out and opened it, taking a long pull. So, whats up with you?
Bette sighed. Not much. Just wallowing in my misery, right now.
Leaning back once again and balancing the bottle on her knee, Shane studied Bette closely. Thats not like you.
Looking down glumly at her bottle and resuming tearing off the label, Bette replied, Tina is out with Helena tonight. Just when I think we might have a chance to work things out, shes going out with that – that dragon again.
Shane made a face. Whats the attraction there?
Bette laughed bitterly, wiping the sweat from her brow. Helena is very flashy and flamboyant. Shes wowing Tina with sparkles and money. Whether Tee wants to admit it or not, its gotten her attention.
Taking another long gulp from her bottle, Shane wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. That Helena is a *****. Tina needs to open her eyes to that.
Bette shrugged. I guess she figures that she deserves to have a little fun after…what I did.
Shane squeezed her shoulder gently. Hey, quit beating yourself up over that. You cant change what happened.
So, what brings you over here? Bette asked suddenly, eager to change the subject.
Now it was Shanes turn to sigh. I was getting tired of seeing Jenny and Carmen hanging all over each other and ***** all over the house.
Bette glanced at her. Why dont you just admit you like her?
Shane laughed uneasily. You know I dont work that way. I dont do relationships. Theyre too much trouble.
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(89 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
Foxfire, like all your stories I loved this to bits. What I think, strangely, I love most is Jenny. The references to her and then her last scene. It’s just too funny and sadly yet strangely spot on for her character. I especially liked the decription of her typing at her laptop. Hee. Great stuff.
OMG That was soo fucking hot, I didn’t even care that my eight year old neice was in the room with me….HOW U DOIN! although she did wonder why i was whimpering and squirming in my seat….JOB WELL DONE…now give us another…oh and PWOP is the funniest thing I’ve heard in awhile
Woah… I’m having a bit of trouble breathing. THAT WAS HOT.
i never ever leave comments on fanfic, and it’s not often that i read pairings outside of bette and tina (although i sure wish there were more bette/candace fanfic, heh) but uh…this was too good not to comment on. such an uncommon pairing. very unexpected and really hot, aha.
why are people rating this so low?? its hot and different from other stories out there.
that was HOT!! i’ll go and take a COLD shower…
Hubba hubba ding dong. That was hot, Hot, HOT!.
Need to concentrate and get back to work.
Thank you for a fantastic way to start work today. Your story just oozes sex.
So so e get a Tina, Alice and, god forbid, Jenny threesome next??
LMAO! Okay, I can see these 3 going at it……….and with the exception of Jenny and Carmen (Helena and Mark are obviously NOT even a consideration-and we really do not know about Marina……Tim well, that’s a bit obvious, too) Bette has had all her friends………..LMAO! :D
I would love to hear more of this one to see if alice or tina find out or both so I hope you post soon
OMG That was freaking awesome! I can’t explain why it worked so well it just did. Awesome!
God damn girl that was HOT. Holy sh……I need a cold shower now. Post soon
Girls do have Adam’s apples…just not as prominent as guys’. It can be seen a little better when the head is tilted back. Try poking yourself in the throat, and you’ll feel yours (but don’t poke too hard-LOL).
I’m glad people enjoyed this. It was just something really random that kind of popped into my head. I wanted something a little unexpected and unusual, and I figured the three of them in bed together fit the bill.
Thanks for your comments! Hadn’t planned on doing anything else with this one, but now I’m considering it. Not sure how I’d do it, though.
I thought this was great! And very believeable! It’s amazing how enough alcohol can release those inhibitions!
Wow!! You had a great idea with the 3 of them. Very hot but at the same time easing each other’s pain. I loved it!
I think you do weirded thing when you are lonlely and very hurt. and you have a full moon. So the three ladies took caare of a needed. Jenny is just weird, thanks
WOW!!…weird, but so gosh damn HOT!! LoL…kick arse job!!
That was hot!!! I have to say I never pictured the three together, but I liked it. Please continue. I’m getting in line for the COLD shower now.
yeap…cold shower time, anyone can join :)