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In The Air Tonight
Bette stared across the yard forlornly. I understand that idea. Too much trouble, and too much pain.
The two sat in silence for several moments, occasionally taking a drink. Shane removed a pack of cigarettes from her pocket and lit one, waving the smoke away from her face. *****, its hot, she murmured.
Bette eyed her for a moment. Can I have one?
Shane complied, handing the pack over. I thought you quit – again?
Flicking the lighter and taking a deep drag, Bette laughed. Yeah, I did, again. I just feel like I need one right now.
It was then they noticed a figure coming up the walk. Bette squinted and said, slightly uncertainly, Is that you, Dana?
Yeah, its me, the figure replied, coming into view in the moonlight. Hi, Bette. Hi, Shane. She stood awkwardly after the greeting.
Bette moved over and gestured to a spot on the stoop. Have a seat.
Dana sat down gingerly. Thanks.
Beer? Shane questioned, holding a bottle out toward her.
Sure. Thanks, Dana replied, taking the bottle.
What brings you here? Bette asked, slightly surprised at Danas sudden arrival.
Dana shrugged. I just needed to go somewhere.
Youre talkative tonight, Shane teased.
Looking at her feet, Dana replied, Its Alice.
Bette waited a moment before prompting, What about her?
Dana sighed and took a long drink of beer before answering. She wants to cool it. As in, see other people for awhile.
What the ***** for? Shane asked in surprise. You guys were just about perfect for each other. Almost like Bette and – She broke off and looked at Bette uncomfortably. Sorry.
Bette gave her a sad smile. Its okay.
Its that ***** Gabby, Dana suddenly spoke up, venom in her voice.
***** Gabby Deveaux? Shane asked.
Dana nodded. She started dating Lara only bother me, and to work her way back into Alices life. Now shes managed to make Alice feel confused about our relationship, because Gabbys convinced her that Lara is still in love with me and that I would go back to her.
Would you? Bette questioned.
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(89 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
Foxfire, like all your stories I loved this to bits. What I think, strangely, I love most is Jenny. The references to her and then her last scene. It’s just too funny and sadly yet strangely spot on for her character. I especially liked the decription of her typing at her laptop. Hee. Great stuff.
OMG That was soo fucking hot, I didn’t even care that my eight year old neice was in the room with me….HOW U DOIN! although she did wonder why i was whimpering and squirming in my seat….JOB WELL DONE…now give us another…oh and PWOP is the funniest thing I’ve heard in awhile
Woah… I’m having a bit of trouble breathing. THAT WAS HOT.
i never ever leave comments on fanfic, and it’s not often that i read pairings outside of bette and tina (although i sure wish there were more bette/candace fanfic, heh) but uh…this was too good not to comment on. such an uncommon pairing. very unexpected and really hot, aha.
why are people rating this so low?? its hot and different from other stories out there.
that was HOT!! i’ll go and take a COLD shower…
Hubba hubba ding dong. That was hot, Hot, HOT!.
Need to concentrate and get back to work.
Thank you for a fantastic way to start work today. Your story just oozes sex.
So so e get a Tina, Alice and, god forbid, Jenny threesome next??
LMAO! Okay, I can see these 3 going at it……….and with the exception of Jenny and Carmen (Helena and Mark are obviously NOT even a consideration-and we really do not know about Marina……Tim well, that’s a bit obvious, too) Bette has had all her friends………..LMAO! :D
I would love to hear more of this one to see if alice or tina find out or both so I hope you post soon
OMG That was freaking awesome! I can’t explain why it worked so well it just did. Awesome!
God damn girl that was HOT. Holy sh……I need a cold shower now. Post soon
Girls do have Adam’s apples…just not as prominent as guys’. It can be seen a little better when the head is tilted back. Try poking yourself in the throat, and you’ll feel yours (but don’t poke too hard-LOL).
I’m glad people enjoyed this. It was just something really random that kind of popped into my head. I wanted something a little unexpected and unusual, and I figured the three of them in bed together fit the bill.
Thanks for your comments! Hadn’t planned on doing anything else with this one, but now I’m considering it. Not sure how I’d do it, though.
I thought this was great! And very believeable! It’s amazing how enough alcohol can release those inhibitions!
Wow!! You had a great idea with the 3 of them. Very hot but at the same time easing each other’s pain. I loved it!
I think you do weirded thing when you are lonlely and very hurt. and you have a full moon. So the three ladies took caare of a needed. Jenny is just weird, thanks
WOW!!…weird, but so gosh damn HOT!! LoL…kick arse job!!
That was hot!!! I have to say I never pictured the three together, but I liked it. Please continue. I’m getting in line for the COLD shower now.
yeap…cold shower time, anyone can join :)